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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ujjwala

Hey Aditi,

Absolutely mindblowing updates... Was not well during the weekend, so could not comment... The only thing that kept my spirits high during the illness was CASA. Thanks to you... Although I wasn't able to look at my lappy, I managed to read a couple of updates during the weekend... Read the rest of them today...
Loved every bit of it...
Khanak's chat with Nachiket was superb.. Shaan was caught red hand.. best part was, he did not interrupt her chat, he was fine with her knowing what he had told nachiket about his wife, on the otherhand he was appreciating her wit... How many husbands do that ? :)
I loved the way she sent an email to herself from his mail box putting him in CC... How do you even come up with such stuff ??

Shaan dozing off in RK movie was funny :) That was the best he could do to avoid seeing his wife admiring RK :)
"One Hindi movie is all I can take for a year" was Typical Shaan...
He is protective as much as he is possesive... Now it is so difficult for me to admire any guy, I keep comparing with Shaan.. even the most wittiest guy in my office doesn't sound appealing to me anymore :( I only have you to blame for this Aditi...
Although she is very wary about him finding out how badly she misses him, she blurted out few things... I wish he gets to tell her how badly he needs her back in his life ... He is totally aware of her fasting for him..but he wants her to call him and say that.. she wouldn ... this leaves the million dollar question .. will he turn up before the Chand ?
I am sure he will ... they are not the usual couple who share their feelings with each other verbally... these 2 just show it by their actions how much they are obsessed with each other.. going by that, he will surely turn up just in time :)

I am happy she is wearing her sindoor.. Shaan will be delighted to see it :)
Loved the Ornate box ka part... So beautifully written .. Your are genius :)

just can't wait for the next update...


ditto...

and before khanak says I love you...i am saying...i love you shaan.

And I love you aditee for giving us casa.

his heart will skip when he will get to see her wearing mangalsutra and sindoor and fasting for him.
he is as much protective as possesive. and i love him for this.

waiting for him to be back to home...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aditi,
Update please...😃
I am going nuts thinking about his entry with his trademark 6 pocket shorts and velcro sandals ... I have totally lost it... look what you have done out of me...😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Aditee 😊
Wow two updates today loved it 👏

213 B
Loved Sunil dad and Khanak's convo written very well

Last lines superb

Sunil: CHAAR BAJE? Kyon kar rahi to fast? Uske liye...
K: Mujhe rakhna hai... (choking a lil)😭😳
Sunil is shocked he can sense she must be thinking about the loss of her first husband... he doesnt know what to say

213 C
Loved Khanak and Dadi's convo 😊
I love Dadi ❤️

Very emotional pink lines touche...


She walks into her room, goes to her neatly organized closet and finds a ornate carved box. The box he sent with her pictures the very first time... the note card still stuck on the case...
She opens it to reveal her black beaded mangal sootra, and the one set in a gold chain, and a tiny silk pouch contained her toe rings and another one with her engagement ring...and the gold sindoor container sat at the bottom...
Feels everything with nervous fingers... picks it up and smells it...it smells like roses...
Feels stolen, feels like its not hers, feels like she must hide it where ever she found it...
The ornate box almost slips from her hand... she holds it tight... hugging it... stares at her reflection in the 6 foot tall mirror.😳😳

Thanks a lot for the lovely updates 😊
Love u Aditee 🤗

Good neend / Good morning to all 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
it mst b so emotional 4 khanak holding on 2 all dose suhhag ki nishaani n nt certain yet dat she wuld b able 2 wear dem again or nt!!!😭
my hrt goes out 4 her😭
both of dem need each oder so badly yaar... bt none wud relent!!
bth r so same yet sooo different... bt 1 thing s fr sure.. dey crave 4 each oder.. none cn imagine life widout d oder...
none of dem is wrng n at d same tym none s right also... 😕
( i dnt even knw wat i m blabbering bt each moment i m thinking abt dem )
dts d effect casa hs on me...
brilliant aditee!!!! 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
Adi ...

where's today ka dose ... mar jayenge hum ... kal raat bhi nahi ... aaj subah bhi nahi ...

Plsss jaldi de do ... gotta go to offc soon...

~Cheers,
Dish
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 213 C

Karwa Chauth

2nd November 2012

9 AM Onwards

Jaane kitne dino ke baad
Gali mein aaj chaand nikla
She is sure he is not going to be there tonite, she was debating to go to Ritu's. Her Mom had called twice, Bai and Aada wanted her not to be alone on such festive occasion. No one at work knew tho, she was fasting, she got progressively tired as the day wore on. Sabina and Prayag had 15 things lined up for her to do by 11 AM. The groundbreaking at the Sohna Road site had gotten pushed up to Deepavali day. People were walking around like they were chickens with heads cut off. The official plans for every apartment type had to be laminated and put on massive poster boards, to be displayed to the general public and invitees at the ceremony.

Some things were not final yet, she did as much as she could. Some serious discussions were required about Block D, the smallest apartment types. They were 8 floors tall and their fire exit almost slammed into the periphery wall of the site. The gap was barely 5 feet''. Somethings had to be fully redone some partially.

Swati and Ira stopped by twice, she couldn't go on her coffee break due to work and "other reasons"

She gets generous compliments for her saree though. Comibined with the teeka on her forehead, speculation was rife.

She laughed it off saying "Main apne best friend ke husband ke saath lunch karne ja rahi hoon, Kritik"

Ritu called her every hour asking her of she will be in Def Col at 7. She says she cannot get out of work before 7

Ritu: akele ghar par kya karegi?

K: Movies

R: Funny! Seriously bol

K: Movies dekhoongi, Bai se baat, ya sketching

R: Come over u idiot!

K: Main bahut tired hoon

R:WHY did you cook so much food?

K:Its therapeutic!

R: Itna saara khaana kab khaayegi

K: Kal subah 10 baje uthoongi aur saara din relax

R:Is he coming back tomm?

K:I did not ask

R: Is Dad home?

K: He was when I left home, the lawyer was to come by. They were going to buy an apartment, a floor of a bungalow he said at Gulmohar park some place

R (shocked) kiske liye?

K: No idea!

R:How can u be so unconcerned?

K: I worry about my money Ritz! (softly)

R: Ab kya hua? Did you borrow again?

K: Hmmm from Citi Bank

R: Kitna?

K: 5 lakhs only. It will be approved in two weeks

R sighs'''.. worries for her friend. That's all she can do

R: Ghar aaja sham ko please?

K:Ill try'''..

R: Mehandi lagwaayi?

K: I am taking off at 3, I am going to (giggles)

R: Ghar kaise jaayegi?

K:Auto!

R: Def Col mkt aa ja na

K: Tu aaja VV

R: Mom will kill me, its my first''..

K smiles fondly, her FIL had brought her sargi, the platinum jewelry and tons of expensive candy. Dadi had sent her a sindoor container in the shape of rose, carved in gold''

8:34 PM

She checks her reflection out in the pink and peach lehanga. Its stunning''.. she stands on her toes to test how tall she would be . held the two sides of the lehanga in her hands'''.. Jamuna was so pleased with her appearance it was hard to get her to leave the room.

She wore matching bangles in pink and peach'''.. she twirled and preened, danced around the room, did her fave dandiya steps, smiled, giggled''. Forgetting how painfully hungry she was. Around 2 at work, she had actually felt a lil faint. One of her coworkers had wondered if she was sick.

Now she felt great for some reason.

She walked to her closet and brought out the ornate carved box. Slowly lifted the black beaded string out of it and wrapped it lovingly around her neck

She was sure he was not going to be home tonite. "So he would never know how much she loved make believe. How much she craved for happiness brought on by surreal actions. She would take it all off tonite when she went to bed. He will never find out"

She wore a finely crafted diamond necklace and wore matching sparkling stones in her ears in hands. She stare dat her engagement ring for a while, before gently slipping it into her finger. Her hair is in an elegant half open half tied style

"approved" the final visual. "Bus aaj raat tak, uske baad sab waapis" like she belonged to some travelling drama troupe.Did the diya in the ante room, arranged her thali. Walked to the balcony multiple times to check for the moon, holding the sieve in her hands. Jamuna promises to bring her thali upstairs and urged her to go to the terrace, she said it belonged to the "company". She said there were hundreds of potted rose plants and a swing'''..

She was tempted to, she decided to check it out''. She walked gingerly up the stairs, turned on one light, to reveal a spectacular sight, roses of every color in full bloom''' the November sky sparkled, she couldn't locate the moon, she pretended to look at the moon through the sieve and smiled, she heard foot steps, suspecting its Jamuna she smiles

Just when she goes to lower it, an image appears through the gauzy mesh

She drops the sieve!!!

Shantanu Gujral stood there. Wearing blue jeans and a white cotton shirt, suede shoes, freshly shaved and showered'..

She twirls around in sheer shock.

Tears form in her eyes in happiness and angst

She turns towards the waist length retaining wall, looks at the dense green forest to her East.

"Its just my imagination" as a tear rolls down, she furiously clears her eyes as if they are fogged up😭😭

"No its not!" he says bending down 😳😳

Breathes on her shoulder, as she feels his chin scrape her skin

Edited by aditee - 13 years ago
RB81 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome adi..

he made it..he made it.. he made it..
right on time..
i'm very much excited..i literally want to jump up n down in joy..
adi...🤗
for bringing shaan right on time..

aur ek milega kya???😳😳😳 i know its too much to ask..but kya karein beqaraar dil hai ye..
Edited by RB81 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!!!!

Don't stop here ... pls aur ek chotasa ... lets just finish the rasam at least ... plsss

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 13 years ago
Anu179 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved It Loved It Loved It...
Adi Thank you thank you thankyou...

Jaane kitne dino ke baad
Gali mein aaj chaand nikla

😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
Pure Bliss !!! 😳


Adi plz aur ek de de, plllzzz !!!

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