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Nisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

Adi is online! 😛

Update pleeeasseee 😃

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Aditi S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#572

Part 213 B

KC Part 2

2nd November 2012

6:15 AM

She hears sounds from the inside. She goes in, her FIL is awake.

He smiles, a big broad, cheerful smile as soon as he sees her. She rushes to touch his feet on the special day.

He stops her "Tum rule tod rahi ho beta"

"Rule nahi Dad niyam" she smiles sitting down by him. She is wearing a lovely chiffon saree in lemon.

Her forehead has a smudge of red teeka

Jamuna brings him tea, asks him what he would like for breakfast

"Aaj eggs nahi beta" he tells Jamuna

K: Aapka flight kab hai Dad?

Sunil: 5:20 I think

K: You will be home before the moon

Sunil: hope to!

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Sunil: shaan ne call kiya beta?

K: Aaj nahi😳

Sunil: I am happy to see you living here

K:Thanks Dad

Sunil: Ek mahina aur hai, dekho kya karte hain nawab

K is suddenly very afraid

Visualizes a time when she will no longer see him or talk to him.

It hurts like a physical blow

K: Dadi kais hain?

Sunil: Great! Active, happy... busy with Amogh

K: He must be adorable

Sunil: not as much as ur daughter will be

Sunil smiles fondly at his fave daughter

K: Main bilkul shaant thi bachpan mein

Sunil Mujhe maloom hai beta

K: Mujhe Aada ke cycle par aage baithkar Sabaramati jaana bahut pasand tha

Sunil smiles

K:aisa Bai kehti hain

Sunil realizes they are a world apart in luxury, wealth and connectedness, yet this girl has amazing self confidence, pride and will power.

Sunil: Aafa ke paas hai woh cycle?

K: Jee! Bua ke ghar hai abhi.

Pause

K:Maine usme pehli baar chalana seekha. Phir Aada ne mujhe 10th Bd ke results ke liye apni cycle dilayi, abhi woh Sonu ki hai.

Sunil smiles, and rubs her head fondly

Sunil: tum kitne baje uthi?

K: Umm 4 (uncomfortable)

Sunil: CHAAR BAJE? Kyon kar rahi to fast? Uske liye...

K: Mujhe rakhna hai... (choking a lil)😭😳

Sunil is shocked he can sense she must be thinking about the loss of her first husband... he doesnt know what to say

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Nisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#573

First to read! 😃

Thanks for updating...really like it. I love it when she talks so confidently and doesn't feel deprived of all those luxuries she can take advantage of after her marriage to Shaan. Thats what a real person is. Self-assured and confident, yet not arrogant.

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shanakrocks1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#574

loved all past updates. movie...hmmm interesting that he even went for it. i was thinking that he would by any how, make her stay home.

that apology words and email was super cute!!!! read it gazillion times.

suni is here...and shaan gone on karwa chauth.😭😭

waiting for nexxt one!

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Livelife

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Posted: 13 years ago

#575

Read 4 updates in total. Wippeee... All of them were so goood. Let's see if Mr.Shantanu Gujral is back before the moon is seen. Poor Khanak.

Nachiket should give him some time off work. And he needs to take it a little easy on his work.

Hiwever, all blame cannot be put upon Shaan. He does a lot and gives out a lot of hints that he wants to be with her. He even straight out asks her to come back to Mumbai, but Khanak is a stubbornhead. She never admits anything.

But still, I love their bickering, non-agreement on almost everything, their desire for each other, sweet jealousy, Shaan's cool straightforward personality, Khanak's quietness ( I myself am a quiet person), everything about CASA's Shanak.

I m impatient to read the next part. I hope it is a long long one.

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SachDJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#576

Another update? Sunil is truly very intuitive, he knows exactly what she feels and understands her so well...

Khanak is really lucky to have such a wonderful FIL...😊

Adi, let Shaan be there...better late than never...

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shanakrocks1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#577

shaan landing at delhi...tadam!!!!(waiting for this like never before)

its a high time he understand her feelings and give her more priority than work. atleast this much is expected from him after that apology note.

plzzz update.....

Edited by shanakrocks1 - 13 years ago

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shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#578

Sunil rocks.. but i'm sad that he is leaving and Shaan is not here.. Aditee.. when is the Knight coming back?? waiting for his reaction when he knows that she is fasting for him..

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Ramani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#579

yup..sunil is leaving before shaan's arrival..waise how can i forget that sunil's presence is needed back home..he too needs to be there for madhvi..
the way he understands khanak..he is such an FIL any woman would like to have i think..he supports her against his own son..
thee pink line n the way sunil understood it..i felt little emotional abt it..
so if shaan doesnt on time will she use his photo to break her fast??
but i hope he comes..

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Aditi S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#580

Part 213 B

27th October 2012

Friday

KC Part 3

8 ish AM

K: Aap kya khaayenge Dad?

S: Kya banaya beta tumne?

K: Lots of food, rice, dal, pooris, paneer, gobi...

S smiles... "You love to cook"

K:Jee!

He dials home and hands her the phone, its Dadi, she blesses her fave grand DIL, she sounds happy and healthy.

She asks if Sunil is packing her in his suitcase to bring with him

Khanak says "Dadi bags were not big enough"

D: Main kisi ko jaanti hoon he travels with extra large bags

Her heart races, she blushes "Kahan hai woh?"

D:Apne kamre mein, main baat nahi karwa sakti Sunil's orders beta.

K: Kyon Dadi?

D:Woh chahta hai ki Shaan tumhe apne aap call kare (worried)

K:Woh nahi karenge Dadi

Sunil is in the shower...

K: Dadi jab woh Mumbai jaate hain, to bahut busy ho jaate hain, mujhe call nahi karte.

D: thats exactly why he should call you. You are his wife...

K: Jee!

D: Tumse kaise koi lad sakta hai beta?

K:Thanks I love you!

D: Say it to the brat!

She smiles nervously

D: Your gift is on its way... Did Sunil give you his?

K:Umm..mmm

D: Well Madhavi got you and Khushboo similar jewelry, some platinum thing...

K:Mujhe itna mehanga?

D: I dont want to hear you talk like that beta.

She pacifies Dadi with a sincere apology, Dadi gets another call, they hang up

She walks into her room, goes to her neatly organized closet and finds a ornate carved box. The box he sent with her pictures the very first time... the note card still stuck on the case...

She opens it to reveal her black beaded mangal sootra, and the one set in a gold chain, and a tiny silk pouch contained her toe rings and another one with her engagement ring...and the gold sindoor container sat at the bottom...

Feels everything with nervous fingers... picks it up and smells it...it smells like roses...

Feels stolen, feels like its not hers, feels like she must hide it where ever she found it...

The ornate box almost slips from her hand... she holds it tight... hugging it... stares at her reflection in the 6 foot tall mirror.😳😳

Edited by aditee - 13 years ago