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Posted: 14 years ago
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Welcome to forum Priyani Iam sudha and Iam new here like you. Introduction is good and first part is superb. Keep going.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start...looking forward 2 d next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey i jus caught up with this story 😊...great start👍🏼... .plz continue soon and plz dont stop inbetween ...i liked the concept a lot so plz update soon😊.waiting for ur next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

hey priyani...frst of all a very very very warm welcome to u...im karishma:)



im so gonna love yr ff...dying fr it to start soon:)

my sweeet request to u r...pls pls pls pls pls give long updates n update every part soon😳


hope u have a gr8 tme here:)


YES, sure...ll try to give long update & soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thaks 2 all of u for appreciating my work...m very happy...luv u all..🤗...muahhh
here's the next part...dialogues r in red

Part 1B

Khanak sumhow composed herself & could only manage 2 say "what RUBBISH r u saying??"

Guy- now what did I say??(after realizing what he said) Ooo…………….no ..no………Ohh!! GOD…….help me plz …(then looking at Khanak said) Dekho!! Tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho….aisa kuchh….."

Khanak- main tumhe janti bhi nahi hoon…….aur tum…….."

Tannu- Kanks!! Tune hum e bataya kyu nahi?? Huh..hum to ache dost hai na , hum toh humare saare secrets share karte hai na, toh phir how cum u havnt told us anything abt it???

Khanak-plzzz…tannuu..

Arpi( being a bit filmy, started giving all those typical bollywood dialogues) – BASS!!!

rahene de Kanks, rahene de!! Humare bharose ka tune ye silla diya…humare pith pichhe tune yeh sab……………..aur upar se hum e bataya bhi nahi…..heyy bhagban!!! Ye sunn ne se pahele main mar kyu nahi gayi???

Khanak glared at her & asked 2 shut her mouth up

The guy who was watching all the drama with his eyes wide open couldn't help staring at them & thought "WHAT THE HELL ISS GOING ON???" he was trying hard 2 speak but all his attempt went in vein

Guy-ekbar meri baat toh suno….let me speak…na.. KHANAK!!!( & kept his hand on khanak's shoulder)

Khanak shrugged his hand off her shoulder & said "1 min ruko…mujhe inse baat karne do" & continued her job to explain it to her friends.

Khanak- Tannu,Arpi…dekho …aisa kuch nahi hai…maine tumse kabhi kuch chupaya hai kya, jo aj chupayungii?...tum doono mujh per bharosa nahi karte ho…dnt u trust me???( said with her innocent face)

Tannu felt sad of not trusting her friend & spoke in a low & concerned tone "no Kanks!! Its nothing like that…yeah, we do trust u…we know u very well….we know, u cant do this to us…tum humse kuch chupa nahi sakti….woh uss ladke ki baat sunke thodi si shock ho gayi thi aur ussiki waja se I….I spoke all this nonsense to u….m sorry, Kanks!!"

& Arpi hugged her & said & I was just teasing u, yar!!...bas…aur kuch nahi..

Khanak slapped on her shoulder & said…"idiot..tu kabhi nahi sudregii, mauka mila nahi k shuru hogayi"

Arpi smiled & replied with a smirk "waise bhi aisa kuch karna tere bass ki baat nahi hai" Khanak just opened her mouth complete "O"

Then suddenly Tannu got angry & shouted at the guy "but isko tumhare bare me kaise pata…i mean tumhara naam???

Arpi stood in front of him & gave him a murderous look & spoke "look Mr. tum koi jasoos ho kya???...humari Kanks ki jasoosi kar raheho??!! ….dekho tum jante nahi ho mere dad ko ….he is the police commissioner of Andheri…ek call karoongi aur seedha andar karwa denge"

Tannu,being a little confused said to Arpi "Atul uncle ne bank ki naukri kab chhordiye???" Arpi frowned at Tannu & the guy tried to speak sumthing "dekho Girls…tum log…" Khanak spoke in between "dekhenge hum nahi dekhoge tum……agar apni jaan pyari hai toh bhagoo yahaa se , nahi toh aisa hal karoongi ke LL banke rahejaoge zindegi bhar"

Guy-(confused)-LL????

Arpi-Langra & Loola!!!!

Tannu-ab tum yahaa se ja rahe ho ya hum tumhe LL banane ki kam shuru kare??? Battamizz kahike!!!

He got mad at them & shouted startling the 3 girls "BASS…….CHUPPP..!!! bahot hogaya tum logo ka….bohot bol liya ….ab main bolunga aur tum teeno sunogi"

All 3 of them remain quiet & just stared at him….he continued "GODD!!...tum log thakti nahi ho kya bolte bolte……at least mujhe meri baat khatam karne ka mauka toh diya hota….main kabse kuch kahene ki koshish karraha hoon aur tum log ho ki apni hi bolti jarahi ho" Khanak started to speak & he kept his hand in front of her face & said to her angrily "don't…just don't……maine apni baat ab tak khatam nahi ki hai….so don't interrupt & JUST LISTEN TO MEE"

Khanak kept quiet & he continued " I was just saying that we were together in……in SCHOOL…WE were friends"

Tannu shouted "SCHOOL….ab ye kahase aya??" Arpi in her typical way said "don't act smart okkk!!!...apni kahaniya apne pass rakho"

Shaan(highly irritated)- DAMN!!! Yar…Khanak………m SHAANTANU KHANDELWAL….SHAAN………..remember ST. THOMAS……Mrs. KHURRANA……MATH EXAMINATION HALL………& humne apni apni answer sheet xchange karliye the ek doosre ke saath…..cant u remember????

Khanak went to thinking mode & all her school days' flashback came to her mind…..their friendship, tiffin sharing, making notes for him…Mrs. Khurrana …..everything & a broad smile spread across her face, she was surprised to see her old school friend & said "OMG Shaan……TUMM???... Yaha kaise?" to which shaan replied " FINALLY!!! Tumhe yad toh aya……well, actually Rahul aur maine eksath MBA khatam ki hai…hum ek hi batch me the, so……………uncle – aunty kaise he???'

Khanak- bilkul thik hai…tumhare bare me pata chalega toh bahout khush honge…..Sunil uncle, Madhavi aunty , Akshay bhaiyaa..woh sab kaise hai???

Shaan- bahout achhe hai……GOD!! aisa lagraha hai ke main world war 3 jeet chukahoo …..m sooo relieved"

Khanak- haan to isme bhi galti tumhari hi hai….tumhe thik tarha se apni baat bhi kahena nahi ata

Shaan- heyy !!!! hold on hold on!!!...kya matlab ke mujhe apni baat kahena nahi ata??...tum log khud toh kuch bolne nahi deti ho….sabko apni hi baat kahenii hai….samnewala kuch kahene ki koshish kar raha hai…par nahi ….tum logo ko toh ek doosre ki feelings ki pari hai…..upar se MUJHE blame kar rahi ho…

Khanak- nahi toh kya tumhare sasoor ko blame karu???...DUFFER!!!

Shaan- don't call me that….okkk

Khanak- okk..then how about FOOLISH???

Shaan- Khanak!! Stopp it …okk……khud toh news channel ki tarha bolti raheti ho ...shuru karti ho toh full stop lagana bhul jati ho

Khanak- kyu tum toh koyi dumb ho nahi, jo bol nahi sakte…tumne kuch kaha kyu nahi….aur ye tum kya 'mauka' 'mauka' kar rahe ho, huhh??...mauka kabhi diya nahi jata , hum e khud mauka lena hota hai

Shaan- Ohh Ms Philosopher !!! ….dekhoo….

Tannu & Arpi, who were the witness of these two oblivious BURTHALS' childish fight, couldn't control their irk & so tannu glared at them & through her gritted teeth said "dekh hi toh rahe hai , hum doono bhi , aur yaha pe jitne log hain woh bhi……Rahul aur Sam se zaada tum doono ko ghur rahe hai" then Arpi sarcastically spoke " dekho tum doono ek kam karo….woh uss corner pe jo space hai na (pointing towards a vacant corner) wahaa chale jao …..aur phir achhese araamse jhagra karo…huh…koyi disturb nahi karega….aur jab man bhar jaye hum e bula lena okk…..jao abb"

Khanak instantly felt a little embarrassed & stopped Arpi holding her hand, said "sorry…yar!"

Shaan- yeah……me too…(said to khanak) Khanak!! tum apne dosto se mujhe nahi milaogi??...hmm?

Then Khanak introduced Arpi & Tannu to Shaan

Arpi-toh shaan aur tum ek sath school me the ??

Tannu- aur ek doosre ko isiliye jante the??

Khanak nodded in a yes while Shaan said in his typical way "haan…aur tum teeno…..haad hai yar!!"

Khanak- that's only becz of u Shaan..

Shaan- what bcz of me??...agar tum puri baat sunogi nahi toh……….."

Tannu & Arpi,being aware of another fight, that is about to begin, spoke in between to distract them "wow…kitna achha song play kiya hai….challo challo ….challo jake dance karte hai…..lets go" & dragged them to the dance floor.

While dancing Shaan couldn't resist himself to stare at Khanak who was wearing a purple colored mid length dress, looking very beautiful. He then brought his lips closer to her ear yet not touching it, said in his husky voice "u r looking beautiful, Khanak"….Khanak felt a deep red color spread across her cheeks , smiled & said "Thanks" now this time Khanak was checking him out, who was dancing & was oblivious of that fact that sumone is constantly staring at him. He looked simply dashing in his black shirt & blue jeans with a Rolex on his wrist. She admired his look, style & dressing sense .

Esha was also staring at Shaan & whispered to herself "HOTT….JUST PERFECT"

Slowly she started moving to the place where the 3 girls & shaan were dancing. Then for just to be introduced to Shaan , said to Khanak " Khanak , woh Kamini aunty kaisi hai??"

Being aware of her intension Arpi said "itni der baad Kamaini aunty ki khayal ayi? Wahh! Kya timing hai??"

Esha-Nahi…nahi….woh main toh bas aisehi…..

Tannu- tumhe Shaan se milna hai??

Esha- kaun Shaan ??...main kisi se milne nahi ayi hoon yaha..

Tannu- Ohh!...thik hai (then completely ignored her & continued dancing)

Esha- nahi, thik hai…agar tum log itna insist kar rahi ho to…thik hai….

Arpi whispered in Khanak's ear "agayi line pe Ms MSB!!

During their dance Esha was trying hard to impress shaan with her moves but Shaan was busy dancing with Khanak & also with Arpi & Tannu…….he was so happy to have his old friend back that he was simply unaware of things around him.

After having dinner they exchanged their numbers & again wished the couple , bade goodbye to each other & left the place.

It was a great day for both Shaan & Khanak…….two old friend met again & were very happy of that fact.

PS: ohh!! That was a long update(I think😉)…….let me know how it was……plz comment & click the like button …..plz ignore spelling & grammertical mistakes 😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
hei priyani,
y dont u update the title with part no n page no so that it wud be easier to know whether u have updated..
i just missed part 1..
going to read now..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update. Continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei priyani,
both the parts were so nice..
actually i got fed up with the girls..wat yaar..not letting him to talk n these 3 jumping into conclusions n dramebaaz kahin ki..but loved them a lot..they r cute..
wow!!!! so shaan is khanak's school friend..that was so nice..
somewhere i wished they hug as they r seeing after a real long time..were they not that good friends??
esha..i'm not liking her..as she is trying to grab shaan's attention..but he didnt give a damn abt her..so ignore kar esha ko..
continue soon..

n i really appreciate u again for breaking ur silence with this FF..
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: RB81

hei priyani,
both the parts were so nice..
actually i got fed up with the girls..wat yaar..not letting him to talk n these 3 jumping into conclusions n dramebaaz kahin ki..but loved them a lot..they r cute..
wow!!!! so shaan is khanak's school friend..that was so nice..
somewhere i wished they hug as they r seeing after a real long time..were they not that good friends??
esha..i'm not liking her..as she is trying to grab shaan's attention..but he didnt give a damn abt her..so ignore kar esha ko..
continue soon..

n i really appreciate u again for breaking ur silence with this FF..



actually, girls r like that...at lest i m...lolz...yup, they r cute
nope, they wr not that good frnds...bt dnt worry, they ll b very soon...wait & watch
i also dnt like her...as Arpi says..mallika sherawat ki bahein...lol...dnt worry abt her ... shaan wont give her "that" kind of attention...ever

thanks 4 all ur appreciation...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update...shaan & khanak r school frnds wow...lets c hw d story proceeds...continue soon

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