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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 187 B

Friday September 21st 2012

6: 40 PM

The elevator stopped at 4th, she got in in the two sq inches of space that was available, she had to meet her insurance agent at Tata AIG on the 4th at 6. She also wanted to get home on time.

The elevator was packed, she hung on to the space she got. Some one moved to make room for her, she looked up to see her Citibank admirer. He was in casuals today, blue jeans and a dirt brown tee, he smiles "You OK? " he says "Hmmm"

He starts speaking finally "You work on this floor?"

"No!" she says

"My coworker then?"

She smiles and shakes her head

"Do I have to go through every floor now? (to guess where you work?"

" I am a architect at M&D on 11th" "Modi & Dastur?"

He looks at her more admiringly "wow!"

"Homes for people?" he asks

"Very rich people" she says and smiles

The elevator gets to the ground floor

They are waiting to step out he says "Oh! before you disappear, I am Atharv Bhatnagar I am a Risk Management Specialist at Citi" extends his hand, she shakes it

"Hi!" she says

"Can we go out for coffee sometime?"

Saturday Sep 22nd 2012

11:40 AM

Delhi Haat

She gets off the auto, wearing a tan/offwhite tiered cotton skirt and a sleeveless blouse with mirrors and embroidery in every color on the spectrum. Her thong sandals have beads of almost all the colors, winding all the way over her ankles. Her hair is tied with a tan scarf. She is carrying one o those bags that made her husband suspect shes a NGO employee, long, beaded and cottony'

Looks for change finds it and hanggles with the guy for 10 minutes'.. finally relenting.

Walks to the window buys her ticket, makes calls "Kahan ho tum dono?"

Swati lives in Punjabi Bagh and Ira in Rohini, they both tell her they can get there before 1 at the earliest. Khanak realizes shes early, she had to go get her cordless phone fixed, so she left home early''

She walks inside, a man wearing tan shorts and a navy UMASS tee, strappy sandals is on the phone, he is wearing sunglasses, his eyes light up and his heart races when she enters, her hair is a few inches shorter, the curls under her ears thicker, she looked lost, her skirt billowed as she smiled and caught it'' some DU guys paused and gawked, made comments. She pretended to know where she was going... ignored them and walked on

He walked up to her

"hey" he said

"Aaap? Yahan?" she turned a glorious red, her hand flying to her shoulder strap in a nervous action, covering her underclothes as if they were exposed...

"Waiting for some one?"

"Hmm"

"The banker?"

Her mouth opened and shut like a fish as she stared... while he happily checked her out...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fanfictionlover

I think when the girls were asking Khanak when the wedding was she replied in May. I believe they thought she would be going to get married in May. They don't know she is already married to the guy yet😕. I may be wrong here but it was my understanding from the update😊

is that so Aditee??
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nobody knows she is married
She is a very private person, she wouldnt tell such things so easily
She was just kidding, when she said May
SHE knows it means something, they dont
They have no reason to suspect May is important for her
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei adi,
so shaan already knows abt the banker..
didnt expect this encounter in delhi haat..
looking forward to the next update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
did she cut her hair. And is he not pissed about the banker.
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!! My mouth is still open...now I really want to know ye waha kaise? Btw does this guy ever stop checking out his wife? 😳😳😳 Ufff...
Shorter hair? Good going Khanak...😆😆😆 and how the heck does this guy know about the banker? Sneaky man...
Ok now I want to know is her hair tied up? Is he gonna get that scrunchie?
Adi...phir latkaya...hadh hai...ab next update fatafat kar...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great Going Adi...Hope there is no spyware on her phone or something...guys knows where and with who she is...😆

btw thru phone u can trace where the person is...technology is getting too advanced for my liking...few days back was chatting to my SIL via whats app, while going out with hubby...suddenly she sent me an attachment showing our exact location...and I was stunned...we live in diff continents...😒

So Khanak had a hair cut...few inches short also he noticed, thicker curls too...kya observation hai...this guy is too sharp...checking her out...bechari has to be self conscious...she too knows he has x-ray eyes...can see thru her!!!

Adi are you sure he is normal man..kahin koi avataar toh nahin hai...Hey Bhagwaan...the guy is tooo intimidating...no wonder Khanak has so many complexes!!!!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 187 C

Saturday Sep 22nd 2012

Noon

Delhi Haat

He walked up to her

"hey" he said

"Aaap? Yahan?" she turned a glorious red, her hand flying to her shoulder strap in a nervous action, covering her underclothes as if they were exposed'''

"Waiting for some one?"

"Hmm"

"The banker?"

Her mouth opened and shut like a fish as she stared'.. while he happily checked her out'..

Khanak: Aapko kaise maloom? (shocked)

Shaan: Are you waiting for HIM?

Khanak shakes her head "Nahi, mere friends, Ira aur Swati''.

Khanak: Aapko kaise maloom? (again)

Shaan looks at her dryly one eyebrow arching "I was in the elevator when Romeo asked you out"

They start walking slowly, together''..

Khanak: Aap yahan kya kar rahe hain''

Shaan: Samar is in India, his parents live in Green Park. He wanted to buy stuff for his coworkers, so I am meeting him here.

Khanak is not sure if she should hang on or leave him quickly. She is not sure how much Samar knows''

Khanak: My friends should be here soon, maybe they are at the back''

They browse the shops as they walk'..

Shaan: Tum kyon aayi?

Pride did not allow her to say "I was bored" she instead said " shopping, we come here every month"

He pulls her to his side as she walks without a clue of a big group of people approaching.

They wait to let them pass'.. "Aap late ho rahe hain?"

Shaan: Did I say that? (mock confused)

"Why are you walking with me?" "Why are you shopping with me?" her mind screams.

They walk like a couple

They walk in the center stone paved pathway, there is a store selling bangles, she is automatically drawn, he is on the phone. She stops and admires, asks him the price he says Rs110 a dozen, some new fancy kinds he says, she is apalled, she fingers them longingly'''.

Shaan: Buy them if you like

Khanak: I am OK since I come here every month, I buy so much'..

The vendor goes "Sahab keh rahe hain to le lo madam"

She responds with "Sahab har cheez ke liye yahi kehte hain" (dismissive)

Shaan smiles at the guy'' bends down and looks a he ones she liked

Shaan: Kya kaha aapne?

He guy is over joyed "Rs110 SIR!" he says, "Aapke liye Rs.100"

Khanak is stiff and unfriendly "I don want it!"😭

The vendor starts stacking them in dozens'..

She starts walking, he holds her bag and pulls,

Khanak: Stop it!😳

Shaan: Mujhe 3 dozen deejiye

The guy is thrilled "Color sir?"😃

Shaan looks at her blouse and picks burgundy green and purple.

She acquiesces and says "Not purple,TEAL!" (sulking)

He rolls his eyes in "Whatever!"
Khanak: Par main Rs 70 doongi''

The guys stacks it back on the tube''

Shaan: Great, let the guy starve to death! (acidic)

Khanak: Terrible!(mock sad)

Vendor: Sir de doon?

Shaan pulls his wallet out

Khanak: I can pay.

Shaan gives her a dirty look " They say the puppet show is not on until 7 PM, I am guessing you are itching to provide some free entertainment 7 hours ahead of schedule😡? (with our show down?)

Khanak: I can''

Shaan: I know you can''

The vendor looks at both faces

Shaan shoves the money at him, the guy asks if she would like to wear some. She reluctantly agrees, he helps her wear them, she tries to slide the last half dozen by herself

Her husband grabs her wrist and pushes them gently, it leaves a trail of gold dust on her hand''

Khanak: Bhayya isme to abhi se'

Vendor: madam who to naye hai na

She blows on her wrist, the dust flies and settles on his tee

She smiles "Ab sab aapke oopar hai" (smugly watching the gold dust sticking to his navy tee...admires the bangles on her wrist, pushing them back and forth...😳.)

Shaan: I guess... 😳😳(looking at her intensely, as he accepts the change for the Rs.500 from the vendor)

Dilli haat contd...

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heeelllooo !!!!
OMGG ... He is theree ... He is RIGHT there ...
How does he managee to show up ...
SIGH ...
Jaldieee Updaateee karooo ...
Hope she didnt cut her hair ... Just tied it up to irritate him ...
Sigh !
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The Pink and Blue are going to be my Death !!!!
Killer ... Utterly Romantic ... Lovey Dovey ...
They are SOOO ... SOOO ... WOW ...
*cant think of a perfect word for the perfect two .. so settled with WoW lol *
Sigh !!!!!
Aditeee ... 👏
Aaap ke prashansa main bhi Mujhe Koi Shabd Nahi Yaad Aaa Rahaa ...

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