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n_gem

@n_gem

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Its lovely...a good start

Loved the partial amnesia track...we so wanted to see in RBO

Do continue...Looking forward to it.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

wow.. partial amnesia... good going.. r u planning to continue??

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_sweet_

@_sweet_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Hey alisha its superb..yaani khanak past me gayi kya?ab wo shaanko apne pati ka gunhgaar samaz rahi thi...yaani ke old RBO..wow superb update the next part

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

hei alisha,
many of them wanted this partial amnesia track n wanted shaan to win his love of his life back..
so enjoy n continue writing..but dont make us wait for long..
looking forward to how shaan wins back khanak..

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Sharon

@sharon18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Hey nice a totally different story from what i have read so far...plz continue soon...waiting for next update

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ppriya_11

@ppriya_11

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

nice start. 👏. plz continue. waiting eagerly for next part

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Hey Alisha.

NIce concept

You are actually granting a wish of some people who wanted a Partial Amnishiya in RBO.

Loved Your Writing...Continue Soon

Love

Pranjal.

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SidNeeti-fan

@SidNeeti-fan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

OMG guys i swear i never expected dis response for my OS..m overwhelmed..love ya all..well d truth is M NOT A WRITER..but vl try too continue seeing d response..🤗

once again love ya all🤗