Graphic FF ~When Love Calls~ Note pg 84 - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh...mani...just luvved it..they met again..!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi di...
Awesome idea...i wonder where u get such lovely idea's from...
Ur FF karan's face yashu's face=absolute TREAT..:)
D write up's have been super duper gr8...n pehli meet main hi ladai bhi...haha...dat was super cute...waiting for deir next meet...hope dey don.t fite again..:)
Sorry for d late comment...phir wahi phone se log in karni wali problem...memory card formatted n sare softwares gone:(...wil try 2 comment as frequently as possible..:).
Keep writing...
Love..Disha..:)..
P.S...am still waiting for d epilogue of trespro...write soon na...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ The Star Girls --- Long or short comment doesn't matter sweets...even a smilie makes you feel that writing is worth it !!

@ Ann -- thanks for the wishes 😊😊...I loved your description with 'round one' and 'round two' ...
it was a cute cute comment !!!😃

@ Deepali -- Hugs...glad that you loved it !!!

@ Ammu... Baby you are in India.😃...do visit Delhi sometimes...n give me a call !!😃

@ Navs...yeppp...now they stay one floor apart...they will keep meeting😆

@ Disha -- I know it is difficult for you as you are always through phone...do let me know if you find it difficult to see the pics through phone...

@ All -- I will be updating shorter parts as many people find it difficult as the photographs make the post heavy and it opens slowly...sometimes pics don't open at all... I am not focussing on expressions and setting more...relying on pics for that and I am just stressing on dialogues and story... lack of pics might make it confusing !!
tell me if you want more descriptions !!

Tip -- for those with slow connections or phone...click on a page and let it load for a few minutes instead of rushing to read the FF...read it with the pic for better experience😳

@ Veena -- Vee...you cannot close this thread now, though I started with saying Vee will close it anytime😛😆...as I have 38 likes now... it's their fault😳😳...they asked me to continue *innocent muh* !!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
~~ * When Love Calls * ~~

Part 3



Shantanu had been standing outside the lift waiting for it to come down when he spots Khanak coming towards the lift……

'Gosh, I've been living in this building for hardly 1 week now and such bitter interactions to start with……….what kind of people live in this building…………and now this girl, 2 times in a single day !! It's going to be too much !!'

He recalled the morning fiasco and the unpleasant day that went by and tried to control his frustration by breathing in and out……..

'Control Shaan…………she is crazy…………don't give attention……….. don't talk to her…………..all you need is good shower……….good food …………. And good sleep…….. Go up and sleep………..Hmmm !! Yes ………!!'

He kept talking to himself and took a vow that he will not give her any attention and will NOT fight at all…………..

Khanak too spots him near the lift and slows her speed to let him go. Sam had spent some precious moments counseling her that how she should not waste her energy and time in petty fights.

Even she kept thinking all the while in the auto and pledged that she will NOT fight………at all……….

She was infuriated when she saw Shantanu standing near lift and recalled the morning interaction, her misadventures in the ad agency and the lost project……..

She wanted to vent it on someone but tried hard not to let him disturb her……

'Control Khanak, it was not his fault SOLELY !! He was getting late too and then you left the phone and wanted to go up……..'

'But, he could have behaved nicely and instead of fighting, if at all he had co-operated, I would have saved some time……

'But still he stood there waiting, once we were up……..'

'He was very very very rude…………how dare he talk to me like that……… he spoiled my day…………'

'No Khanak, don't fight……………don't let negativity take the better of you………let him go………..'

She breathed in and out and decided in favour of peace !!!

The lift had still not come and she went and stood near Shantanu……..

For the first time she noticed that he was seriously good looking and handsome in every sense of the word………..this irks her even more and she shrugs in an expression that signifies……….'whatever' …………

He looks at her and is confused at her 'lost' expressions………….once again he reminds himself that he is not supposed to let her affect his peace of mind……

He looks away and she doesn't look at him trying to avoid any kind of conversation that could remind them of the morning debacle………….they look opposite sides waiting for the lift………..

The lift seems to have stuck at some floor and takes more than usual time.

When the lift arrives, he halts for a second to let her step in.

'Oh………he is trying to prove that he is a gentleman?'…………….'jerk'……….. no matter what he does, he cannot make up for the lost first impression'

He doesn't enter and she gets confused at his demeanor as he keeps standing at a place where he was.

She gets impatient, standing inside the lift, and asks politely, "Don't you want to go up?"

"With you??... Sorry……………..Not again."

"What????"

She gets shocked beyond comprehension could afford her………… 'like what??'

She pushes the button to keep the door open when the sliding doors start closing and steps out.

"How dare you? How insulting to a lady?"

"Lady?? Excuse me…………!!" he said smiling and walked off non-chalantly insulting her even more.

He had been trying hard but could not afford to let go of an opportunity to teach her a lesson for what she did in the morning.

She was zapped to see him walking off and followed him extremely infuriated……….

He avoids her and she goes marching behind him……

"What kind of a mannerless behaviour is this………you misbehave in the morning… again you misbehave now……….. it seems you never went to a proper school."

"Are you talking to me?" he answered very coolly………..completely indifferent.

This infuriated her even more………….she tried hard to control her anger but finally couldn't.

"You know what ??...You are a typical rude guy who needs a crash course in 'basic etiquettes'……………….asap !!"

"Ma'm, have you ever considered visiting a doctor?" he was as calm as cucumber.

"Doctor???"

"I mean……………..kind of a Psychiatrist?"

"How dare you? I am trying so hard to NOT fight with you………but it seems that there is no other way!! First of all, you do not co-operate when you see someone from your building in trouble……… then you ask a girl to walk UP the stairs for 5 floors……… you talk rudely all the way……….. fight at the auto and behave completely ungentlemanly….. and you have the guts to insult me like that ???……….. today, I got late just because of you………"

"Oh hello………I got late because of you……….. I had to wait for hours outside the officials room as my appointment got cancelled……… My day was spoilt…………. Just because of you."

"Even my day was spoilt…………I lost an important project."

"Serves you right…………. I lost on the meeting time with the senior manager……. Didn't even have food, the whole day, just because I was waiting outside his room all the while……."

"You were already late……………..don't blame it on me………. At least you could meet that person after waiting for hours………. I couldn't attend the audition for what I was called………"

"Even if you attended they would have thrown you out looking at your attitude……"

"Look at you…………you have the nerve to talk like that………..when you don't even know the ABC of manners and how to talk to girls…….."

"I don't need to learn etiquettes and manners from you…………you think you can drop your phone and all at home and the whole world will wait for you till 'Her Highness' gets it and graces the lift by boarding it………."

"I was late………. I was nervous ……….and I was worried about my phone…….. human beings do behave like that…………but how would you know……….. there is nothing human about you……….."

"I agree………I am not human…………I should not have waited at that stupid lift where your stuff lay spread all over………..I should have gone, then……….. okay, tell me… …..Why did you stop to talk to me, now ?? Why didn't you just go up when I let you…..? I tell you…………because, you are fond of fighting……….you won't get a good sleep unless you quarrel with someone………"

"Do you even know how hard I tried not to fight……"

"Well…………you failed……….you need more practice………….Don't you ever cross my way, next time………."

"You take care about yourself…………"

She walks off fuming and fretting and finally deciding that there is no point talking to him, anymore…………..takes the lift and goes up. He strolls around, for a while, trying to cool off and then rides up to his own floor.

…………………………………………………………………

Shantanu enters the apartment and drops dead on the bed…….

The day had been unusually hard on him……………the whole interaction with Khanak, twice in a day and not-so-productive meeting with the music company manager, lack of food and proper rest left him drained……..

He took a long shower ( Come'on, I'm not putting shower pics, now………..lol……)

And when he came out of the shower, he was much relaxed………..too tired to cook something for himself, he decided to go out and have dinner at a quiet Udipi restaurant….

Khanak was tired too………..

Her landlady, Gangu Bai, a middle aged female, finicky about everything her tenants did, asked her about food, but she didn't feel like having it…….. She took a shower and lay wondering on her bed about the lost project. She still felt bad about it and a small tear escaped from the outer edge of her eye…………it had been a hard day !!!

She called Sam and asked her if she would go for a movie with her. Sam readily agreed.

A movie was a perfect plan according to her to get out of this mood !!

She was upset at Shantanu too…………who had ruffled her feathers on the wrong side………. At the wrong time …………

"How dare he insult me like that…………… First things First………… …………I have to teach 'him' a lesson now !!

Shantanu entered the lift while talking to Duck on phone………

The lift opened at tenth floor and he was literally 'out-of-his- wits'…………

'What a timing'…………….he murmured to himself …………..!!!


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Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😲 how man how ??????? how could u write every dialogs so perfect without even a single miss and now a perfect pics too . I M DEAD now 😳 😳 and a complete fan of ur writing ...😉

amazing , beautiful loved it and the tiff was just awesome 😆

and of course the timing too is perfect for them and now again a lift 😆

yay first khanak win , and now shaan , 😉 waiting who will win next tiff 😍 🤣


and the psychiatrist part was amazing 🤣 , god job by shaan 👏

but both of them told every thing to each other in between their talk 😳 , what was that for ... waiting for next update 😍

gangu bai is the land lady ...wow 😆

and again " jerk " 😍 yaar whenever , i read it again i miss someone very badly 😭 , cant control my emotion 😭


love u
suchi


Edited by suchi_245 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Manitaaa superb!!!.. I loveee the nok jhok interaction and again they are going too meet.. poor shanak.. I wonder how they are going to fall in love... hats off to u for choosing apt pics..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update di...
Another fite han...is it in dere blood 2 fite wid each other as soon as dey see each other...lolz...
Loved d nok-jhok...
N i so adore d fighter Khanak..:)
Am waiting for a love filled part...
N i.m not finding any problem in seeing d photos as of now...wil tell if dere is some in future...:)
Love...
Disha:)


P.S...i read dat u had written all those who r not commenting have boycotted u coz of disclaimer 6...i told u d reason for my late comment...:(
I Wil never boycott u...pakka wala promise..:):)
Waise i sincerely hope dat d disclaimer 6 was not meant for me..:):p
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW!!! Another update...my lucky day for sure...God they meet yet again near the lift LMAO...they are maha adorable...their fights add flavour to their character and makes it hot n spicy for us readers...i have been laughing like crazy reading the update...The pics are simply fantabulous...they match their expressions, their feelings to the T...hatts off to you dear...its a sheer delight to see these two burthals and read...sone pe suhaaga!!!
Thank god Khanak realises it was not his fault solely...but her pride won't let her bow down...agar yeh pride na ho to, story will be boring...LOL...gangu bai phir se landlady...wah wah!!
Both trying hard not to give in to the temptation to have an argument...par kashish or is it destiny that keeps pushing them towards each other...
So Shaan is the winner of the second round...abhi to silsila shuru hua hai...hote hote pyaar ho jayegaa...loving their tu tu mein mein...
...phir ek aur mulakat...or should I say...mukka laat...lift zindabaad...🤣🤣
P.S...shower ki pic nahi daali...wait for dhamaal!!!!
Can't wait for next update...shubham shighrasaya!!!!
Manita Jai ho !!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Manita-



PS -- Pranjal and everybody who doesn't comment...I will assume that you boycotted me due to Disclaimer 6...😉...






Hey Just read your Disclaimer 6 😲 & I am seriously not looking out for any besharmi 😳……I am a acchi bacchi yaar.😳 Hayye meri Image ki band baj gayi.😭 😭

Can Never boycott you in my life………& you know that. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
I loveee elevators...
Ek main aur ek tu...
Dono mile is tarah...
Aur jo tan man mein ho rahaa hain...
Yeh to hona hi tha...
Lmao... Tu tu main main.. the volleying back and forth... loverrrly...
👏👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by jparker - 14 years ago

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