FF- Compltly Ur's FF COMPLETD on pg 83! MODNOTE PAGE 85 - Page 37

Originally posted by: abhaylover

yeah i am a biggg fan of karan and krititka and knw shanak fan too ehehehe he is nt married hehe

Hey congrats for the job

chalo gud the boss is handsome... thora sa kaam bhii kar lena

goin to read the update

so done wid the update

it was fab tia👏

the anger love care concern everything was penned beautifully👍🏼

miss alluwalia gets wht she wants i actually liked it she irritating him so much

the romance was hot as alwayz i found it naughty this time

the sangeet part was nice especially shanak's conv

i loced it she's confessing her love again and again and not hiding her emotions telling him wht she feels and making him realize wht he feels... pure love

the way he took care of her was super cute ... this part was the best

being sick was the best thing or worst even em confused

i was scared that y she's not buking a ticket is there a twist but she'll be there wid him soon

thx for such a lovely and long update... sorry for not posting a long comment

but loved every bit of it... continue soon

eagerly waiting.

Hey,

hey congratulation for ur job
wowww another long updated loved it dear .it was tooo gud loved the way khanak was teasing shaan the next morning and imitating the drunk state of shaan with rashi and having a hearty laugh at it .shaan being all furious taking her to the bathroom and putting her in the shower and things that happened later was wowww shanak in the bath tub i sblisss yarrr .loved it and shaan coming back to senses and telling her not to read in btween lines and he still hates her all poor thing he is fighting hard with his feelings for her .the sangeet khanak looking sexy in black saree and shaan going gaga seeing her hayeee wht a sight and the party .the wash room thing was awesome she spoke her heart out with him that she is not going to let go of him so easily and see will fight to get back him in her life.and shaan telling her that he is not going to take her back in his life and all its going to be fun now how shaan will resiste her in singapore .khanak catching cold due to the rain and shaan being by her side all the night making her feel gud in his arms .ahhh that was such a lovely moment of shanak .loved shaan caring for khanak .he came in the morning and asked her how she felt and making sure that she rested at home.khanak knowing that shaan left to singapore and she missed the fight .feeling terrible that the plan of patching up with him has failed because of her illness .but rashi being her angle gave her idea of catching the next filght so that she can be with shaan .now i cant wait to see wht will happen at singapore hope she succeds in patching up with him and tehy return back as a couple .and some hottt stuff as their are going to stay together for 4 days and 4 nights .ekksss bring it on now u cant wait to the next update

Tia...

wow, singpore , cant wait for next part,

Absolutely love your ff. Please update soon!!

Thanks.

Shilpa

WOW!! Ab khanak shaanko surprise degi...fir shaan khanako daatega lekin uski smily chehra dekhkr wo sbkuch bhul jaaye...aur fir full 2 fun..awesm update..update soon

Hey Tia,

Awesome update,,,,,,Fantastic…,,,,,loved it 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Hey thanks a ton for the update,,,,enjoied the whole part read it twice. but I wish ek aur update milta….. it was just fantastic yaar ,,,,,,you are too good when it cames to detailing. Loved the songs you put in the update,,,,,I can so imagine the whole situation. And I am just loving the whole situation created by you. Shaan is giving a real tuff time to khanak. But she is persistent abt her goal she wants him back at any cost.

Loved the start. Khanak is setting in Shaan's room with Coffee & advils. Shaan got up with the severe headace coz of last night drinks & khanak is also irritating the poor guy.😊 Loved the way she handeled him. She was so clam at his every harsh comments.⭐️ Loved the way she calls him Baby. Becharra shaan is so confused.😕 The whole start was amazing. Khanak talking abt their kids. & how mischivious she was. She is so cute yaar. You potraied the character very beautifully. From the very first update you have showed that she is stubborn & now she is actually giving all us & shaan demo that how Stubborn she is. 😉 Finally she tells shaan not to reveal that they have split coz they are going to be together in the next few days 😆 (wow…..i love reading it. I was actually jumping on chair saying that's the spirit girl) shaan is so mad at her.

Khanak & Rashi are laughing on Shaan's yesterday night condition. When shaan asked about it khanak does his mimic with Rashi,🤣 Shaan decided to teach her a lesson first he let go Rashi in her room than he is back to khanak he took her to his room khanak is scared seeing shaans angry face. She ask for the help to Rashi. I actually laughed a lot while reading it.🤣 Shaan take her to the Washroom. & their Washroom sence was hot *phew* ☺️

Shaan is as usual early in the office & Khanak make her presence & yet again surprise him by her behaviour.😕 She is here to tell him that she is wearing Black for the function so he should also wear something in Black. Her actions & gestures were too smart to handle. Shaan is not able to hate her as he is in deep love with her but at the same time hurt with her behaviour. Khanak tells assistant to book ticket for her too. So now she is planning for the Singapore 😉

Khanak convince Rashi to came with them for the sangeet. Khanak don't want Rahda to get upset on her Sangeet so she gets all the arrangements in the Garden, She dances & enjoies.😃 Loved the way u described Shaans confused gestures. Shaan is desparte to talk to her he goes the ladies Rest room. Khanak lets him knows what he is feeling & apologies for her behaviour. But Shaan is so mad he refuse to forgive her.😔 Loved the way u described Shaans thoughts poor guy loves her so much but still angry as he is not sure wheather this time he can trust her or not. Poor shaan I feel bad for him. 😊

They are back home. & Khanak is not feeling well she is looking out for blanket & shaan cought her in that condition he takes her to the room stays up with her whole night & takes her proper care.😊 Ur discribtion was very touchy about that. Shaan is so caring his love for her makes him restless by watching her in this condition. Next day morning Shaan is back to his behaviour after cheaking that she is back to normal. Khanak is enjoying his care & attention & forgets abt the Singapore. & gets panic & than Rashi give her the idea ro get the next flight

Waiting for the next port. Wanted to see his reaction. He will be super surprised to see her.😉 Waiting Waiting & Waiting 😊. Btw hows ur day at work hope u enjoied working with look a like Karan Kundra.😆(don't mind just kidding) Please update the next part &it should be Long one 😳

Love

Pranjal.