hmm..well, i have tried to write a Shanak OS, based on current situation, and tried to make it emotional, hot and passionate., don know if it will meet ur expectations.
Shanak OS
It's been quite a few days passed since Shan and khanak had settled in the new house. Gangu bai had returned and with her strict orders, she had made sure that each and every member follows her rules and thus maintained a peaceful environment in the house
Shan and Adi agreed to share the same room, along with puppy while Khanak and Khushi shared the same room, along with priya.
Even though accommodation problem was solved for Shan, yet the major problem was still prevailing and that was , he still could not manage to get even a single contract. Every day, he could go and knock at the doors of the music companies, but his fate never seemed to be with his side.
Meanwhile, khanak had started spending her time, helping Gangu Bai in her catering services, and thus utilizing her cooking talent, and not only created a good impression on Gangu Bai, but also the customers.
One such day, Shan came back to house, frustrated and pissed at his helpless situation. He wanted to share his sorrow, his feelings with someone, he was tired of everything, and who could be the best person, other than his wife, to share his sorrow.
He searched for khanak, without getting into the notice of anyone. When he din find her, he took out his mobile and send an sms..still, after much time, there was no reply.
After getting to know that Gangu Bai and puppy had left for the market, he mustered some courage to go to khanak's room. He went inside, he saw khanak , Adi and khushi n Priya cracking some jokes and gossiping with each other.
He goes inside, greets all, and gives a faint smile to Khanak, who just returns his smile. Initially he halfheartedly joins their convo, but soon starts getting restless as he wanted to spend his time with his wife. After much gesture, Khanak finally gets to understand that he had send her the sms and while, she notices Adi, Khushi and Priya, getting engrossed in some other talk, she grabs the opportunity to take out her mobile and check Shan's sms
"mujhe tumhare sath waqt bitana hai'please"
She looks at Shan, he gives a pleading look. However, she mistakes it as just a teasing and when the trio offers her to come with her for somewhere out, she agrees, just to tease Shan, and much to his annoyance, they even start pestering him to come with them. He becomes more frustrated from inside, but calmly refuses.
They leave, while he remains alone in the house, feeling lonely, sad , dejected and frustrated.
After sometime, Khanak returns with the gang, only to find Shan fast asleep on the sofa in the living room. Its already late, around 10 in the night. Even though she had a moment of her life, enjoying with Adi, khushi and Priya, yet she was not happy. How could she be, she was missing her love, she wanted to be with him always, she did send him sms, but never got the reply. She goes inside, changes her dress.
After checking all the members of the house had fallen asleep, she quietly goes to the living room, where Shan is sleeping on the sofa. Her heart fills up with love seeing him sleeping on the sofa, on his back, one hand down. She quietly goes near him, takes his hand and places on his waist, bends down, carasses his hair slowly and kisses him on the forehead. Her touch creates a sensation inside Shan and his eyes open up immediately. He looks at her smiling face for a second. Suddenly something else creeps in his mind, he jerks away her hand, gets up.
She goes and sits besides him
"Aap uth kyun gaye?"
"haan who.bas meri aankh lag gayi thi" Moves further away from her
She is confused at his response
"Shantanu, aap theek toh ho"
He looks at her- "haan, main, main theek hoon'.tum, tum theek ho na, how was ur day?"
Her face enlightens like a baby and as soon as she starts to tell about her whole day, he interrupts her
" tum khush ho na..bahut maze kiye"
"haan par'."
"good, aab so jao jake..raat bahut ho chuki hai"
He says with a sarcastic tone, she understands that. She goes near him, places a hand on his shoulder
"Shantanu! Aap ko bura laga?"
He nods his head. She is further confused.
"Aap ne bataya nahi aapka din kaisa raha"
"tumhe batana chahta tha khanak, tumhare paas waqt hi kahan tha"
He says this while looking at her, she could see pain in his eyes.
"Shantanu!! Aap aisi baat kyun kar rahe ho'mere paas aapke liye nahi toh aur kiske liye waqt hoga"
"phir mere mana karne ke bavjoot, bahar kyun chali gayi khanak"
"kyunki bahar jana mere liye jaruri tha"
He gives a sarcastic smile- "oh! Yeah..apni khushi jo celebrate karni thi ..hai na"
She is shocked and hurt at his reply. Yet she maintains her calm. She gets up, goes inside her room, while he sits on the sofa, heads down, hands on his forehead
After a while, she comes back with two small boxes in her hands. She opens the box in her right hand, takes out a sweet and offers it to Shan. He looks up at her perplexed
"Prasad hai..Main mandir gayi thi Shantanu, apne pyar ke liye khusiyaan mangne"
He looks at her with guilt in his eyes. Suddenly he feels low, angry at himself, he gently takes the sweet, grabs a bite, offers her the remaining bite.
She refuses, stands there without saying nothing, just looking at him. He stretches his hand, gets hold of her hand, gently pulls her towards him, making her sit on his lap.
She is amused at his sudden behavior. They look at each other, with pain and tears in their eyes.
He doesn't says nething, just takes her hand and kisses , rather sucks her hand. She closes her eyes in anticipation.
"Khanak!" He takes her hand in his hand, his one hand around her waist and her's around his neck.
"hmmm"
"I am sorry"
She opens her eyes.
"Aap apni taqleef mujhse nahi kahoge toh kya mujhe pata nahi chalega Shantanu'Aap aur main alag nahi hai na, phir aapne kaise soch liya ki aapka dard mujhse chupa rahega"
He gently places his hand on her cheek
"bahut pyar karti ho na mujhse"
"hmmm..bahut, lekin aapse kam"
"nahi"
"haan"
He looks at her, she looks like a baby when arguing, a adoring smile creeps on his face.
"Mujhe sweet khilao, Khanak"
She tries to bend ahead to take the box from the floor, he stops her, and takes the sweet in his hand and feeds. Before she could even take the whole thing inside her mouth, he comes closer, grabing a bite of the sweet from her mouth. She blushes at his gesture. He pulls her towards himself more, and says in a very husky tone
"Aab tumhari baari"
She , although in a blushing manner, gently grabs the bite from his mouth. This continues, as he pulls her more closer, now his both hands around her neck, while one hand of hers around his waist and another on his hair, while the remaining sweet vanishes as their lips come closer, and move with each other, what resulting in a long, deep passionate kiss.
After a while, they move apart, breathing heavily, both gasping for free air, but their foreheads still touching. Suddenly, he feels something at his back, like something in her hand is digging her back. He brings her hand to the front. It's a small box of sindoor. He looks at her lovingly.
"woh mandir mein sari suhagan auratein pooja kar rahi thi toh, maine socha, main bhi kar loon aur phir wahan panditji ne har ek ko yeh maata ka sindoor diya."
He looks at her lovingly. There was a time when all these things seems stupid to him. He has never seen his mother nor his sister in law , doing these things for their husbands, and here was his wife, who loved him so much, that she could do nething for her him. He looks at her empty partition. Tears well up in his eyes. He gently takes the box from her hand, opens it and fills her mang with sindoor and kisses her forehead. She looks at him with love and respect, while a tear falls from her eyes.
He cups her face with both his hands, brings his face closer, breathes in her ears
"Aaaj phir se meri dulhan ban jao Khanak"
"Shantanu ! yeh kaise ho sakta hai" Her voice is husky.
He kisses her ears, traces her neck with his fingers, and bends down to nuzzle her neck, while she gasps at his touch.
" pyar mein sab kuch ho sakta hai" He breathes on her neck.
"par !"
He stops her from further saying nething, places her on the sofa, while he bends towards her, their legs between each other, their hands intervened. He unbuttons her kurta, while placing a kiss down her neck.
"Shantanu! Koi aa jayega"
"hmm'aane do"
He moves further down, kissing her neckline, while she lets out a slight moan.
He gently lifts her kurta up, revealing her bare waist, placing a gentle yet passionate kiss on her belly.
She is unable to bear the heat, the passion, pushes him, while a loud moan escapes her lips
"Sha'n''tanu!!!"
Before he could even react, she gets up and hugs him tightly, her face buried in his chest. His hands around her waist while one of her is on his chest, clutching his shirt, while other is around his back.
Her fingers automatically open up his shirt button and her lips kiss his bare chest.
"Khaaanaak!!"
A soft moan escapes his lips. She looks at him. He looks at her, brings his hands forward, cups her face and bends forward to kiss her inviting lips, when suddenly
"Yee Puppy!!"
Its Gangu bai's Loud voice, Khanak pushes Shantanu away and tries to gets up from the sofa.
He tries to stop her , by holding her tightly, she pleads with her eyes.
"Shantanu..please, mujhe jane dijiye na"
"nahi"
He tries to come closer, while she relents, and later is almost going to give up, when again
"Arey yeh!! Eh Melia!! 'arey aata kay re 'Zopliya kay! ..arey ooh! Puppy !
This time the voice is so loud that it scares the hell out of both Shan and Khanak and the she manages to get up from the sofa this time.
"Khanak!"
He tries to hold her hand, she doesn't lets him do so.
"Shantanu!"
She just gives him a smile and says ' "good neend"
He smiles back- "good night!"
She turns to go , he calls from back- "I love you"
She turns back, gives a flying kiss. He makes a gesture to grab the kiss and places it on his heart, while she smiles and goes inside her room, and he falls back on the sofa, burying his face on the sofa.
PS: Hope U like it priya and Anki!! 😃
Kumkum Bhagya
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