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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: mystory

@bold: khanak ki jeeju hai na delhi mein..he'll take her there for studies r something so that she can forget the things happened here..(orignally posted by ramani)


hay ramani m gona kill u yaar.meri story ka dahi mat kar.aisa kuch nahi honay wala.uskay jeejoo nahi lekar jayengay usay. bas aur kya jana chahti hay meri maa.


that was just my prediction yaar..its up to u to make shanak meet..😛😛😛..u r the author n its fully upto u..
@bold:ithne hi..when r u updating next??😃😃
Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
Hey Priya,

When are you updating ??
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73

kak kari thi update

bhagwan ki daya say network urgaya, sath may update bhi urgayi

aaj noon may karungi
do read
luv yaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: mystory

kak kari thi update

bhagwan ki daya say network urgaya, sath may update bhi urgayi

aaj noon may karungi
do read
luv yaa

🥳🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
thanks
to
all
hay guys
i dedicate this part to prerna coz she has inspired me in a way nd also coz she is in love with shanak nd m in love with everyone who's in love with shanak.👏👍🏼
thanks to all who pressd the like(read love) button.😃
special thanks to lil purvi, chugli didi ramani, regular sweetshona, besharam kari, jani anjani if-rida, inspiring prerna, sweet shriya, busy bee mani, aunty jessica (pls dnt kill me), helpfull disha, bright rosh nd new frnd @ iluvmanar fr ur beautiful beautiful comnts. 😉
if u guys had nt been there i would have stopd writting in the mid itself.👏
thanks for bearing me coz i pmd u guys nd forced u to read my silly ff..😳
thanks to all secret readers.😊
thanks to all shanak lovers nd rbo fans out there.👏😆
love u all dil se.❤️
Edited by mystory - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76

part 3

1 a.m.

Max hospital

Delhi

The red bulb of the ot is turned off nd the doctor comes out. shaan runs up to him nd asks him about pankhu.

Shaan: doctor how is she? Can I see her? Is she speaking?

Doctor: (patting him on his right shoulder) shaantanu ji , calm down , she is completely fine. Right nw she is sleeping as we have given her sedatives.4-5 ghantay may jab woh uthjayegi tab she 'll be back to her own self(annoying nd talkative like always).

Shaan takes a deep breath nd feels a lil lighter coz before this his heart was beating on horse power.

Doctor:aur haan we r keeping her under observation for another 24 hrs.after that u can take her home.take care.

Shaan: thanks doctor(relieved).

Sunil:thanks doctor , we were all very scared . actually her parents r not here in delhi, that makes the situation more worse.

Doctor:oh(realizes his presence) helo mr khandelwal. She is out of danger.nd she is responding very well.infact aap mr nd mrs modi inform kardijiye ki unki beti bilkul theek hay.usay kuch nahi hua, aisi choti moti chotay toh lagti rehti hein.(cheering them up).

every one is overjoyed to hear this from doctor

mrs parekh: shaan beta m really sorry for my behaviour.mein pankhu ko lekar dar gayi thi isi liye manay tumhay who sab kuch boldiya.pls meri bato ka bura mat man na.

shaan: aunty pls aap sorry mat boliye. infact m sorry ki mery wajah say aaj pankhu hospital may hay.

mrs parikh: nahi beta tum kyun sorry bol rahe ho, tumharay dad nay mujhay sabkuch bata diya ki galti tumhari nahi thi . aur aaj tumharay dad ki wajha say hi woh driver jisnay accident kiya tha police custody may hay.thanks ki tum jaldi pankhu ko hospital le aye.

shaan:any thing for u aunty,after all she is my best buddy.

pankhu ko subha 6 bajay hosh aata hay. jab woh apni ankhay kholti hay toh sabko apnay samnay pati hay.unki swollen ankhay dekh kar who samajh jati hay ki no one has slept the night before.

pankhu:toh aaj pata chala sab mujhsay say itna pyaar kartay hay(weakly)

shaan:(runs to hug her) thank god petals, you r alright.u scared me big time .

mausi:aray mera baccha tu theek toh hay(kiss her repeatedly on her forehead).aanay soo kare shoo(tunay ye kya kiya). mein kitna ghab ra gayi thi, janti hay tu. tere mom dad atay hi mujhay datengay ki mein unki bachi ka khyal na rak saki.

pankhu: (cheery)hi mausi, kem cho(kaisay ho). tu toh aaj hi ayi hay tujhay kuch nahin kahengay woh.aur mein toh maja maa hoon.

madhawi:(concerned) pankhu beta abh tum theek feel kar rahi.

pankhu: yup aunty, m fine. don't worry.

sunil: pankhuri beta tum theek ho tho sab theek hay.

pankhu:helo uncle.m fine. aur ab toh mein is dude say bahut khatir karwaon gi.

sabhi has partay hein.jab uskay frnds ko pata chala toh woh bhi us say milnay hospital aye. un sab nay hospital may itna shor machaya ki nurse nay unhay gussay may bahar nikal diya. meanwhile pankhu kay parents bhi apnay private

jet may india wapis a gaye.nxt din pankhu ko discharge miljata hay. aur doctor usay 15 din kay liye rest karnay kay liye kehta hay.

khanaks house

dhulwadi

besud si khanak apnay ghar pahuchi. uski behan uskay behal roop ko dekhkar dar jati hay.uskay sar par koi lal chunnar nahi hay,uski choli par khoon kay dhabay hein, uskay bal bikhray hein, uski kalaiyo say khoon beh raha hay(shikhar kay janay ka dard kya kum tha jo marjani churiyon kay tute tukray bhi usay dard day gaye).

jhallak:khanak!khanak (usay hilatay huye), tujhay kya hua. shikhar kaha hein. bolna khanak , meri jaan niklay ja rahi hay

khanak:shikhar(phir say kahi kho jati hay)

jhallak:bol na(shouting)

khanak:who shikhar usay toh shikhar mil gaya, usay chahiye tha na.

jhallak ki awaz sunkar sabh log ghar say bahar aa jatay hein . khanak kay hal ko dekh kar sabhi log shocked ho jatay hay.khanak chup chap apnay kamray may chali jati hay aur andar say kundi bhi lagaleti hay.jhallak sab ko batati hay ki khanak shikhar kay sath mandir gayi thi. jasay ki khanak nay kisi ko kuch nahi bataya toh sabhi baray log ye sochkar kay kuch galat na hogaya ho, khud hi mandir ki aur chal datay hein.

mandir pahuchkar sabkay hosh ur jatay hein.waha pari shikhar ki lash dekhkar khanak ki bai aur jhallak phoot phoot kar ronay lagtay hein.is anhoni ki khabar shikhar kay maa baap ko toh tabh lagi jaab uskay bejaan sharir ko ghar le jaya gaya.us ki maa ye dekhkar behosh ho gayi , aur jab hosh aya toh who apnay hosh kho bethi thi. uskay aada ko toh vishwas hi nahi ho raha tha ki shikhar unhay chor kay jaa chuka hay.

wahan khanak kay ghar par uski fai khanak kay kamray ka darwaza khat khata rahi thi. tabhi darwaza khulta hay aur khankak apnay bidai ka joda pehnay hath may ek jalta diya liye bahar nikalti hay.

fai: khanak ye tu kya kar rahi hay. tujhay is jode ki ab koi zarurat nahi hay, chal utar day issay.

khanak :nai fai mera shikhar meri doli lekar bas aanay hi wala hoga, dekho manay toh uskay naam ka deepak bhi jalaya hay.

uski fai us deepak ko bujha deti hay(ek maray way insaan kay naam ka deepak nahi jala saktay).jaa andar jaa kapray badal, koi dekh lega kya sochay ga.(teary).magar khanak us deepak ko phir say jala leti hay.

shikhar kay aanay ki aass hay usay

shikhar kay saath apnay ghar janay ki pyaas hay usay

shutgaya khushion say rishta uska

gamoh si hay ab naata uska

bheegi palko par hay naam uska

yaadow tak hi saath tha uska.

after a week

pankhus home

delhi

shaan:hi aunty

mrs modi: helo shaan beta, kaisay ho.

shaan:m fine aunty. how r u, were is pankhu.

mrs modi: mein bilkul theek hoon. she is in rec room I suppose, go see urself.

shaan enters the rec room finds her reading some book.

shaan: hey sexy(husky) , wats up?

pankhu:(keeping the book on coffee table, concerned look) hi shaan(gives him a hug). sit I need to talk to u.

shaan: kya hua petals(serious) anything wrong?

pankhu: yaa, my mom nd dad r going back to london nd this time they want me to go with them.

shaan: cool, yaar(happy) . toh kab ja rahay ho.

pankhu: shaan tum khush ho, this is serious yaar. mujhay toh ye sab kuch fishy lag raha hay.

shaan: tu pagal hay(typical delhi wala tone).that day u said na that u feel lonely at home when ur parents r not here..toh prob kya hay. jaa naa unkay saath time spend kar. njoy kar. its matter of only few day.

pankhu: nahi ray 3 mnths is a real long time nd that too without u. cant survive yaar.

shaan: (grinning) apnay parents kay saath ye bahut kam time hay. aur mein toh yahi hoon, mein kaha jaa raha hoon. aur phir tu jayegi toh mein kuch aram sa mehsoos karoonga. duniya (read chicks) pukar rahi hay mujhay.

pankhu:(hits him with cushion) cheepo ab toh may wapis hi nahi aaongi.

shaan: ah bliss! a slice of heaven(mocks)

pillow fight begins nd ends up in an emotional hug.so shaan had convinced her to go. pankhu ws leaving for london in a week.all the frnds meet up nd give her a fairwell saught of a party.

shaan nd the gang accompanied pankhu nd her parents to there private jet .

shaan: bi petals , take care(smile).

pankhu: bi shaan(moist eyes) .

she kiss him on his cheeks.

shaan: ab jaldi jaa na.

karu: actualy pankhu, shaan wants to make it sure that u don't come back, he is restless. so pls don't waste time in all these rituals. jaldi jaa. infact isnay toh aaj raat ki date bhi fix kari vi hay.(mocking)

pankhu hits both shaan nd karu. abhi ek pal pehlay sabhi has rahr thay, magar jatay jatay sabhi ki aankhein nam hay.they all exchange hugs nd good wishes with her.once again she tightly hugs shaan. bi baby , take care.

kuch logo ki zindagi ek dusray say bilkul alag hay. alag hay, haan magar khani ek hay. kisi kisi ko ek dusray say vida lena ka mauka miljata hay, magar har kisi ko nahi. najanay kyun?

p.s. hay guys shaanak ko milnay may abhi time hay. I know u guys r egerly awaiting there milan , bt pls bear with me. keep reading it. don't u dare to abonden my ff in mid . aur pls mujhay galiya mat dena fr this ghor apradh.

mystory

Edited by mystory - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: mystory

hay guys

i dedicate this part to prerna coz she has inspired me in a way nd also coz she is in love with shanak nd m in love with everyone who's in love with shanak.👏👍🏼
thanks to all who pressd the like(read love) button.😃
special thanks to lil purvi, chugli aunty ramani, regual sweetshona, besharam kari, jani anjani if-rida, inspiring prerna, sweet shriya, busy bee mani, aunty jessica, helpfull disha, bright rosh nd new frnd @ iluvmanar fr ur beautiful beautiful comnts. 😉
if u guys had nt been there i would have stopd writting in the mid itself.👏
thanks for bearing me coz i pmd u guys nd forced u to read my silly ff..😳
thanks to all secret readers.😊
thanks to all shanak lovers nd rbo fans out there.👏😆
love u all dil se.❤️


oye!!!
tu el saal ki bachi hai kya?mujhe aunty kahthi ho😡...not fair priya...not fair...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: RB81


oye!!!
tu el saal ki bachi hai kya?mujhe aunty kahthi ho😡...not fair priya...not fair...

ab chalega kya
sory yaar i dint mean to ofend u
tumhay pyar say mainay ye naam diya hay.
change kardoo?
pls bura na mano ye toh dosti hay, luv yaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
hei priya,
so pankhu is going to be hale n healthy..
waise ithne bade accident ke baadh critical condition mein ek hi din mein discharge karenge kya??😕😕 tho she is not that serious..ok fine..
pankhu has good sense of humour it seems..being in such condition she said "
toh aaj pata chala sab mujhsay say itna pyaar kartay hay(weakly)"
acha tho pankhu survived..happy abt that..
oh no!!!very much emotional..bring khanak back to her senses yaar..someone..
pankhu n shaan have a good relation..i have a doubt..r they bf-gf kind of or just good buddies???
loved the bidaai of pankhu by all her friends and the teasings..
loved this..
"
kisi kisi ko ek dusray say vida lena ka mauka miljata hay, magar har kisi ko nahi. najanay kyun?"
ab..jaldhi se next part likhna shuru karo samjhi meri maa...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mystory

ab chalega kya
sory yaar i dint mean to ofend u
tumhay pyar say mainay ye naam diya hay.
change kardoo?
pls bura na mano ye toh dosti hay, luv yaa


koi baat nahi...pls start writing the next part soon..ok..

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