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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Priya...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

awesome updates...loved the story so far...

wonderful description ...

update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey priya
waiting for shanak's meeting
update it soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_9

Hey Priya...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗


awesome updates...loved the story so far...

wonderful description ...

update soon...

hi angel_9
wats ur name yaar
thnks fr likin it
welcome here at riddle of love
luv yaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

hei priya,

update soon yaar..

hi ramani
monday ko karu toh chalega kya???/
bcoz abhi thaanku note aur sabko pm karnay ka time nahi hay
movie dekhni hay 😃
luv yaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mystory

hi ramani
monday ko karu toh chalega kya???/
bcoz abhi thaanku note aur sabko pm karnay ka time nahi hay
movie dekhni hay 😃
luv yaa

ok shall wait..but i'll read only on tuesday..have to write an exam on tuesday..so will read after that..
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok shall wait..but i'll read only on tuesday..have to write an exam on tuesday..so will read after that..
theek hay ramani
thnks fr waitin
all the best fr ur exam 👍🏼
🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks dear frnds
hi prerna, love yaa coz u were the first one to read it.thnks fr ur beautiful comnt. me too hope that it never ends.
ramani dear ramani m happy that u likd it coz ur appreciation matters to me the most. love yaa. all the best fr ur exam.
disha darls u r a buddy. u will always feature in my thnks note. love yaa. apki agya ka palan karna mera saubhagya hay.
shri jaaneman thnks fr likin it yaar. apki demand ki supply karnay ki puri koshish ki hay, hope u like it . love yaa.
rosh thnks fr callin me di. love yaa. love this one also as u lovd the previous one.
hi shona thnks fr likin it yaar. apka intzaar pura hua. sorry ki apko wait karna para. love yaa.
karishma ji sorry ye wali update zara chotu hay. plss bear with me. love yaa.
jess dear ur comnt is always fantastic, no matter it is short or long.thnks fr likin it. love yaa.
n.n. yaar thnks fr likin it. thora late hogayi update may sorry.
love yaa
purvi baytu m happy that this time u gave me ur longest comnt. m on cloud 9. love yaa. missing u. muah n huggy.
rira thnks fr ur beautiful n long comnt. love yaa.
minnu ji koi dikkat nahi hay ki apnay late comnt kiya, zaruri ye hay ki apnay rol ko para aur like kiya. thnks re. love yaa.
hi there @ angel_9 , wats ur name yaar. thnks fr likin it. welcome here at rol. love yaa.
mani ki bachi m still waitin fr u to read it. love yaa
kkrithika n pooja welcome here at rol
thnks pooja, shona, minnu, prerna, rida, kkrithika, roshni, naveen, @angel_9, purvi, disha, ramani, karishma, sshriya, fr pressin like button.
sabhi shant ( silent ) parnaywalo ( readers) ko dhanyawad.
rbo kay chahnaywalo ko dhanayawad.
shanak deewano aur deewaniyo ko dhanayawad.
aur un sabhi logo ko dhanayawad jo apni tipni denay say bach rahay hein. comeon guys comnt karo.
mafi chahti hoon agar kisi bhi priye dost ki sarhana kar na bhul gayi hoon.
this one i dedicate to all shanak deewanis,guys ur love towards them is unbelievable. shri, ramani, disha, rosh, shona, kari, meenu, jess, n.n., purvi, prerna, rida, mani aap sabko dedicate karti hoon.guys ur wait is over. plsss parkar mujhay gaaliyan mat dena. i love u all very much.
njoy there milan!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 6

happy birthday shaan

7 a.m.

IGI airport

delhi

shaan apnay dadu ko lenay airport aaya wa hay. subha kay 7 baj rahay hein, itni jaldi who kabhi nahi uthta, aur phir aaj toh uska birthday hay. par apnay dadu kay liye who kuch bhi kar sakta hay.uskay dadu checkout karkay bahar aatay hein. unhay dekhkar shaan bahut kush ho jata hay.woh apnay dadu kay pao chuta hay( nt bad sexy ) aur uskay dadu usay galay laga letay hein.( a long emotional hug)

k.k. : happy birthday to u my son ( again hugs him n hands him a gift box)

shaan: thnks dadu, m so happy to see u. aap kesay hein . aur chotu dadu, baru dadu , puppy dadu woh sab kahan hay?( his dadus three frnds)

k.k. mein toh hamesha mazay mein rehta hoon. meray who lafandar yaar abhi waqpis nahi aye, salay abhi aur mazay lengay. mein toh apnay pyaray shaan kay liye wapis aya hoon.( again hugs him)

shaan: I knew it dadu that u would never miss my birthday. I missd u so much

dude.

k.k.: dekhay ga nahi teray gift may kya hay.

shaan jaldi jaldi gift ko unrap kartay huye

shaan: wow dadu it's a watch, apko kaysay pata ki mujhay yahi chahiye thi

k.k. : meray grandson kay pass agar ye na ho toh kisay kay bhi pass nahi hosakti. I knw its ur favourite . ( limited edition )ek bat aur , mein chahta hoon ki absay tu wakt ki kadar karna sekhlay. nahin toh ek din aisa ayega jab wakt teri kadar karna chor dega.

shaan: ok sir ( gives him a salute) magar is time par aap ye kya baatein lekar bethgaye. lets go.

k.k. : haan bhai chaal , par rastay may mujhay neel mandir kay darshan karwa diyo.

shaan: dadu ! ( sleapy) seedhay ghar chaltay hein na

k.k.: nahi beta aaj tera janamdin hay. chal shivji kay darshan kar kay , unsay ashirwad le lay. ayr kuch daan bhi karna hay.

7 a.m.

star appartments

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gurgaon

khanak naha kar tayiyar ho chuki hya. uskay jijoo bhi office kay liye ready ho rahay hein. aaj toh unhay thori der ho jayegi office pahuchnay may, pehlay unhay girls ko school drop karna hay, phir khanak kay saath kuch institutes bhi jana hay.

jhallak: khyati palki ! thori jaldi karo, tum dono late ho jaogi school kay liye. saath may mujhay bhi late karwaogi . fast fast fast ( shoutin)

palki: mumma ye khyati hay na , isay sabsay zada time lagta hay potty may.aap isay hi bolo.( cutely)

khanak apni niece ki baat sunkar hass parti hay. ( chalo der say hi sahi uskay chehray par ek muskan toh aayi.) subha kay saray kam nipat jantay hein, aur khanak apnay jijoo kay saath nikal parti hay institutes dekhnay.

in car

khanak: jijoo mein chahti hoon ki apna din shuru karnay say pehlay mein bhagwan kay darshan kar loon. pls mujhay mandir le chaliye.

jatin: theek hay khanak. jaissi tumhari iccha.

neel mandir

shaan: dadu uthiye chaliye , mandir a gaya. ?( dadu ws napping)

ko dekhkar

k.k. : ( startled) haan a gaye ( rubbing his eyes). chalo chalo.

jatin aur khanak bhi neel mandir pahuchtay hein. mandir ko dekhkar khanak ghabra jati hay, kyunki mandir kay main aalay tak pahuchnay kay liye seediya (steps ) thi. magar uskay jijoo uska hath pakar kar usay uppar ley jaatay hein.

mandir may shaan bhagwan kay samnay apnay hath joray , ankhein band karay khara tha. usay pooja karni toh aati nahi thi, bus who jo kuch kar raha tha , apnay dadu ka mann rakhnay kay liye kar raha tha.

khanak: ( in her thoughts) hay shivji aaj mein apni zindagi ki shuruaat phirb say karnay ja rahi hoon, mujhay ashirwad do ki mein is bar zarur safal hoon.(teary)

jijoo bhi haath joray wahin kharay thay. apni pooja kar kay jaisay hi khanak mandir kay bahar kadam rakhti hay, who dekhti hay ki seediyo kay paas ek ladka apni chappal pehan raha hay aur pehan tay pehan tay uska pao fisalta hay.

khanak: shikhar ! shikhar ! ( shouting) sambhalo apnay aap ko. mein tumhay kuch nahin honay dungi. ( starts running towards him bt faints midway)

shaan girnay hi wala tha par sambhal jaata hay. who dekhta hay ki ek ladki usay dekhkar chilla rahi hay aur us s hi ki taraf bhhaagi chali aa rahi hay.lekin bhagtay bhagtay who beech may hi gir gayi. shaan aur dadu dono us ladki ki aur jatay hein.

jatin: khanak utho kya hua tumhay ( touching her forehead) . aray koi pani lao ye toh behosh ho gayi.

k.k. : jaa shaan , jaldi say pani lekar aa.

unkay charo aur bheer ikathi ho jati hay. jitni der may shaan pani laata hay, utni der may kisi aurat nay pani day diya tha. aur who log wahan say chalay gaye thay.

shaan: aray dadu woh kahan chali gayi.

k.k.: kaun ? woh ladki jo behosh ho gayi thi.

shaan: haan dadu , dekho mein uskay liye pani laya hoon.

k.k.: aray kissi nay pani day diya tha. uskay hosh may aatay hi woh toh yahan

shaan soch nay lagta hay ki woh kaun thi. achi tarah say tho woh usay dekh nahi paya tha, haan magar khanak ki moti moti aankhein shaan ki aankhon kay samnay say hath hi nahi rahi thi. jasay ki woh aankhein us say kuch batein kar na chahati ho.shaan ka dhyan kahin lag hi nahi raha . kyunki woh un aankhon say baat karna chahta hay.pata nahi kyun magar pehli bar kisi ko dekhkar shaan itna bechain mehsoos kar raha hay. gari chalatay hue bhi woh bar bar sarak par dekh raha hay ki kahin woh ladki usay nazar aajaye.

in car

jatin: khanak tum theek toh ho, mandir may tumhay kya hua tha?

khanak: ( visibly tensed ) who jijoo wahan mandir ki seediyo par ek ladka fisalnay wala tha, mein uskay liye bahut dar gayi thi. ab woh theek toh hay na?

jatin: nahin khanak wahan toh aisa kuch nahi hua.

khanak: jijoo mein sach keh rahi hoon , menay apni aankhon say usay fisaltay hue dekha hay.

jatin: tumnay dekha hoga khanak , magar aisa kuch nahin hua wahan. chalo mein tumhay ghar chor deta hoon, aaj tum aaram karo . hum kal chalengay.

khanak: jijoo mein bilkul theek hoon, aaj hi chaltay hay na.

jatin: woh khanak mein late ho raha hoon , actualy meray office say urgent call ayi hay. mujhay jaldi bulaya hay. hum log kal pakka chalayngay. lekin ek mushkil hay , aaj toh tumhari didi bhi school gayi hay, kya tum dopehar tak ghar par akeli reh paogi. mujhay lagta hay ki mujhay tumhari didi ko phone kardena chahiye, woh half day leave lekar aajaye gi.

khanak: jijoo aap chinta mat karo mein aram say akeli reh lungi. didi ko meri wajha say kya pareshan karna. waisay bhi woh meri wajha say itni chutia pehlay hi lay chuki hein..

khanak ghar par apna mann laganay ki koshish toh bahut karti hay.magar kabhi usay shikhar yaad aajata toh kabhi woh mandir wala ladka.

aur udhar us mandir walay ladkay ko us moti moti aankhion wali ladki kiyaad sata rahi hay

zindagi dono ki bahut dur say akelay chali thi

saath saath toh ana hi tha

milnay kay liye jo bani thi

mystory

p.s. sorry guys fr a short update. thnks fr reading it. aap sab ko pasand aaye yahi iccha hay meri. luv u all. till then njoy. I knw abhi pura milan baki hay, par pls mujhay galiya mat dena. take care all.

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Posted: 14 years ago
😊Its awesome and pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei priya,
it was good..
so shaan's daadu present him a watch n gave him advice too..
wish to see responsible shaan soon..
shaan n khanak ka meeting..
not an actual one..
but both are disturbed with the thoughts of the other..
eager for their proper meeting..
do conitnue soon..

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