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Posted: 14 years ago
I am here ! I made it a MUST today to comment ! I feel so bad that I gave you the task to write it then delay commenting ! Forgive me ! About the update, it was definitely a surprise ! A most pleasant one ! She kissed him ! It was a surprise for us aswell as Shaantanu ! I think she must have got lost in the moment, where she was enjoying the rain, something she liked so when he came she got to enjoy him, another thing she liked LOL ! But then she got out of the moment + retracted. Poor boy. He must have been so shocked he didnt get to kiss her back LOL she is confusing everyone, even us ! Aww; he tried to hold her back. He was right. They needed to talk it out otherwise he would go crazy ! Shes too confusing ! + even she knows it too. Loved the 'I need a coffee' not knowing what to say unknowingly bringing humour into the situation + how she proves shes not being funny by putting her hand on his cheek. He cared + let her go + she cared + told him to dry up. Awww ! Ifelt sorry for Him when he went through the whole 'is it physical only for her ?'. You portrayed how his sure about it being love is DEFINTELY a 'sure' but her sure may not be, very well ! She came ! She knew they had to talk. LOL I grinned at the whole medicine scenario ! That was just TOO good ! She shocked me aswell when she said 'I'll let you put it on my back' I was like ':O'. Then what followed was beautiful ! The conversation, the hugs, the small gestures, the reassurance they gave each other that they actually do love the other EVERYTHING ! The conversation flowed so well ! From the pain of the scorpion to pain of the heart. It was TOO good ! I loved how he told her her worth + she told him his. Beautiful. And how he kept her aside from other women, how he thoughT of her as one of a kind, even seperate from family. Lovely. Now it was time for Shaan to shock us ! Did not expect that so soon ! But his understanding was so touching that she might need time but she doesnt ! She knows what she wants ! I could picture the next scene so well. You bought out her insecurities so well ! It seemed she felt kinda bad saying it all but loved the whole trust line. Awww, they said I lve you to each other ! Bless them ! Aaagh ! They married ?! So quick ?! WOW ! But i have no complaints ! I'm not that big on Marriage processes of any kind LOL ! As long as it doesnt mean your finishing It soon ! Please dont ! The wHole bed scene was a MAJOR blush ! SO cute ! gave me butterflies ! Loved the wiping of the sindoor of his jaw + God ! What is with all the KhanakS wanted to get out of bed early LOL enjoy karo ! Anyways Manita di I LOVED it all ! From start to here ! Even though I thougHt of my Shaan as different yours is SO good ! Forgive me for not commenting ! You see, I Like to go into detail LOL or not at all ! Hope this mAkes up for it !
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome gal !!
It was such a wonderful update 👏
OMG !! I am still blushing... You conveyed the emotions so well.. hats off 👏
Loved every bit of it !!!
Way to go !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowww Manita.. SK and K got married...!!! this seems to be the most rocking part..I just cant stop myself from blushing and enjoying this very moment .this is just amazing.
😛You just Killed Me!!!!
Keep Rocking buddy...
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg mani di this is like shocker omggg thy god married hila...im so happy...ther covo in room was so cute yaar...he he i love the way she buried herface thy r darn cute finally she told him its like fairy tell and thy god married its so cute love this story cantw ait fo next update ur fast
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg..i m so happy..they got married..i luvved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg..Manita..they Got married suddenly...wow..awesome
supperb and Beauiful update...loved ..loved it
whole update was beautiful and amazing
shaan and khanak conv..was very beautiful and reailistic
beautiful part when shaan said "my dear…… 'you' are the most attractive female on this earth ……. confident, headstrong, self dependent, who guards her character and fights for her beliefs……...who doesn't fall for material pleasures……... I have never seen someone like you."
Eagrly waiting for next update...pl update soon🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
WHOA!!
You know when I read "after a week" the maximum I thought of was that they had decided to get married that day. Yahan toh...!!!!🤣🤣🤣

Though I want to see the declaration made public😉😃

Also..Shaan's self talk.
The thing you said abt girls who havent interacted much with men feeling more physically attracted rather than the love feeling...I always had a doubt regarding this..it was funny reading it written so well...hehe...

Absolutely adore the respect and the kind of effort the guy makes to make Khanak feel assured and admit to herself...and loved😳

P.S. Sorry for not commenting lately ...family issues 😳 Sorry! Ab se pakka!!

P.P.S. Do we get a flashback🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago
mani di 🤗
they got married!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳
loved the update
Edited by purvi08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i had to read the end twice. to make sure i wasnt just imagining things...as the first time i read it it was late at night...

they're married! in a week?!

now these kinda surprises i super like!

jaldi seee next part please! wants to know how they went from her finally accepting her feelings to mrs khandelwal!
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI Manita, Loved it! Briliant and so touching! I can't believe their married! WOW! x 2 😍. Hope you continue this FF as its simply too good to stop. x

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