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Hey Mani di... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
awesome update...& what a cliffhanger...😛
so here goes what i felt about ur update...
shan said her time starts now i.e 12:30 & she got 48 hours...awesome description...👏👏👏
khanak sat wondering how can she manaofy him...she cursed herself for behaving this way with her love...& the words she used...her choice of words spoken to him...
& thought he would be extremely hurt & insulted...& he will not forgive her until she move in with him ...excellent description...⭐️
khanak thought how insecure he was instead of reassuring,calming him she pushed him to the edge & made him behave stubborn ...insecurities was not there with him it slowly crept inside him...going to Delhi,Samir & jassi's break up...superb description...😃😃
she was fighting with her own flow of emotions & can't say what she was feeling she knows that she is feeling uneasy...& then she again thought what word she said him...PAY BACK ?...she thought he may be feeling disgusted,insulted...amazing description...👏
.khanak's feeling's description awesome...khanak neglected what she said to him...very impressive lines...😃😃😃
she thought how smart he is by rejecting all three conditions that can melt him...she admired him for his presence of mind...lovely & adorable description...😳😳
what a amazing way to impress him ...she knows that he working was something that impressed him so she skipped her lunch & completed her BD plan...amazing description...😉😉
when he called 4 AMs for meet she was first one to enter his cabin & observing his cabin...& he was not present there...he went to have coffee to have glimpse of her at canteen he have not thought that she would be working...but he didn't not find her so without having a coffee came back...awesome description...loved it...they both just can't stay away from each other...😃😃
loved the description of their attires...amazing...😉😃
when he saw her in his cabin he was relieved but...his sudden urge...so he deviate his attention to other things...👏
loved their convo...awesome description...
when he thought why he thought so carelessly for her she had never given him single chance of getting embarrassed at work
he was impressed when she gave him file but he could not show it to her...amazing,fantastic...loved the description...😃
he was amused at color of the file but didn't speak...the way u describe these small thing...excellent ...loved it...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
when he opened the file he found a strip ...
"I hate to fight
with you
I'm Sorry
for my part in the above"
loved the phrase ...when he crumbled it & throw it in dustbin...i know he will take it back because she wrote it for him & he will collect it...😉😉
"I know I've hurt you
with bad choice of words
I didn't mean a word of what I spoke
Let me take them back"
loved the lines...& he did same again...but it sure was difficult for him...😊
"I can't see you upset
And I can't take myself to be the reason for it
Please Forgive me"
he again crumbled the paper & threw it though it was very hard...now she was loosing her cool she just said in her mind she is here to make him cool not for getting herself angry with him...😡
"No fancy sentences this time,
Simply love...
I Love You"
this time he really can't do that but very hardly threw it...& shown her victorious smile...
she was ready this time ...amazing description...
he was loosing he watched the time it was only 2 hours & he was falling in her trap he decided not to meet her next two days or he will melt...awesome description...
when she tied her hair he was getting attracted to her ...& he told Sanjay to leave by giving him work...& talked with her...& told her the way you tie your hair is this you always do?her reply was always...& he said with authority...you won't tie your hair in public do it in your home...wonderful description...loved it...❤️
shanak convo awesome description...i am at loss of words don't know how to describe it...loved it...
"Living together is not a solution to insecurity. Two people staying miles apart can be confident of their relationship...and two people staying in one room can be insecure."
loved the lines ...khanak said it right...melting him further...but when she said just put the ban on ur third condition...you r jerk u simply need a tight hug & everything will be fine...superb description...👍🏼
the way she said cute things made him smile but resume his attitude...she said him i didn't know you can be this stubborn...&...he said that " i am tougher than steel"...awesome .amazing description...👏
when in evening she brought coffee for him...awesome description...loved it...
he decided to stay late...he wanted her to stay with him...lovely description...
i am not going to describe each & every line ...i loved it all ...so i am skipping some description...
What happened Shantanu? you were not like this..you were far more sensible. Why are you so insecure, so edgy and so possessive .you know that she loves you..she cares .unnecessarily you are troubling her !!
loved the lines & his feelings r justified...
"Words were never needed between us
So I could never figured out
how to say it correctly
that I really care"
i loved her note...this one amazing way to make someone happy...
i knew he would collect all the notes...he did the same...lovely description...
she made dinner for him wow...but she was not present in his apartment at present...lovely description...
"Gosh !! what have you done to me?
See... no flowers, no cards, no chocolates,
no mushy mushy thing...
I'm trying to say 'sorry' in the most non filmy way...
And then, three trump cards you canceled before the game began...
how to shake you now?
Do you even know how difficult it is?"
loved the lines used amazing...& wonderful...
"Dinner is in microwave heat it before you eat.
Yeah, you forgot to enlist this weakness of yours, as a condition for bet
I thank my luck!!"
this note is wonderful it describes that she would do any thing to make him forgive her...loved the description...😃
"I didn't get it packed from some hotel,
I cooked it myself,
Dare if you throw it away or put it in the fridge !!
I spent 2 hours on it..."
loved the demanding note...the way she put it amazing...😛😃
when he said i don't want stickies i want you...& said that you just win...this shows that he loves her lot & can't live without her...& sometimes love make you behave very stupidly...lovely & amazing description...😃😃😃
khanak in her home was thinking to make a sandwich & thought why she have not packed food for herself...he came there & she was at loss of words ...amazing & wonderful description...
there convo ...lovely & wonderful...loved each & every line...
khanak is now agree with his offer...😲😲
Mani di you made both of them win...love you...amazing description...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
their romance...awesome description..."faints"...
what ...Jai is on the phone...he heard shan's ringtone...loved the description...😲😲😲
i now want to know what jai's thought are so update soon...
i am speechless, have no words...but take a bow...
amazing description...ur writing style...awesome...
loved the update...
after this long comment ...please update soon...
P.S this looks like i have written a OS...its not a OS its detailed comment...as i promised...next time i am not typing this much...(i have exams)...i took me 20 minutes ...well i have never written this long comment...so its for you ...Mani di
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