hi everyone..today its me ...
note: red are my thoughts and blue are the english translation of the dialogues..
yes i am the lucky one , honoured to do the written update, woh bhi 250th episode ka...
so, the episode starts, and tada!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
what a start....ankhon ke samne mera shehzada, my . ..prince charming- Karan Tacker, aka Shan, woh bhi subtle look mein..so hot!!!!!!!!!!!)
wacks on the mind, stop drooling, start the update
Sunil and Shan's convo
Shan-" dad, hum aaj factory kholne ja rahe hain…DM aaj char baje ajayenge ..agar unhe sab kuch theek laga, toh dad hume license mil jayega."(shan was looking determined) ( dad, today , the factory is going to open..the DM will come at 4, if everything is alright, we will get the license)
Sunil-" fantastic! Good"
Shan-" bas dad power station ko lekar pareshan hoon main, lekin I m sure sab kuch theek ho jayega dad" ( bas, dad, i m tensed only about the power station,but i m sure everything will be alright)
Sunil-" bte, tum kaho toh kisi ko yahan se bhej doon, tumhare help keliye"( son, if you say, i will send someone from here, to help you there")
Shan-" nahi dad, main yeh kaam khud karna chahta hoon" ( no, dad, i want to do this work on my own capability)
Sunil-" don't worry beta, tumhe kamyabi jaroor milegi, I am sure about it..khanak jo tumahre sath hai( haye kya sharm se nazre jhukh gayi shezade ki, apni mehararu ka naam sunke), anand jaisa dost jo hai aur phir hamara ashirwad tumhare sath hai……yeh factory khul ke rahegi….all the best , beta"( don't worry, son, u will get the success, Khanak is always with you, you have a friend like Anand, and also our blessings are there with you)
Shan-" thank you, dad, bye"
Sunil-" ok"
Shan keeps the phone..Sunil has a proud expression on his face…
Loved the father-son scene, Sunil had the expressions of a proud father and Shan……..iska toh kya kehna..badshah of expressions
Lal batti wali gadi arrives in the village, Anand and Shan come there ( why is Anand rushing, seems like baraat ka swagat kar raha hai)…nahi..anthem music, dhan te dhan arrives……..the DM- he gets down,
Both Shan and the DM greet each other with folded hands, then the DM is escorted to the factory.
In Khanak's kutiyan ( sry, can't say it a house…it is a kutiyaan).
Khanak comes out of her house and she seems to be in a rush( pata nahi kahan jana hai ise). But 'mummy' calls her- " Khanak"
Khanak, stops, looks at her-" haan" ( yes)
Mummy-"mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai" ( i want to talk to you about something)
Khanak-"abhi" ( now)
Mummy-"haan" ( yes)
Khanak ,-"thik hai chalte chalte karte hain"(ok, lets talk on the way)…she grabs her hands and tries to walk, but mummy refuses-" nahi, main chalte chalte nahi karungi."( no, i won't talk, while walking)
Khanak-" kyun?" ( why)
Mummy signals khanak to bring her ears closer. Khanak bends, mummy whispers-" personal hai" ( its personal)
Khanak gets upright-"personal hai, kal nahi kar sakte" ( doubt- the child , in the village knows how to pronounce the word, but Khanak doesn't knows..why?,,Shan ne kuch sikhaya nahi)
Mummy gets offended-" thik hai , tumhare pass mere liye time nahi hai, toh main chali..( ok, u don't have time for me, i m leaving) she turns back and starts to go, but khanak stops her and turns her by the shoulders and says-" arey, ruko, ruko..time hai ..chalo" ( wait..i have time..comeon)
They go inside
Khanak-" arey jaldi bataon na, mujhe shantanu se milne jana hai" ( tell quickly, i have to go to meet Shantanu)
Mummy bends down , holding her stomach and starts writheing in pain. Khanak holds her, asks with a tensed expression-" kya hua" ( what happened)
Mummy, holding her stomach-" pet mein dard hai".( my stomach is aching)
Khanak makes her sit on the bed,
Khanak-" abhi tak toh dard nahi tha…lau dikhao".( till now,there was no pain, comeon, show me) .mummy continues shouting as khanak tries to touch her stomach- " yahan hai, yahan" ( is it here)…the girl again shouts..
Khanak, pointing her finger-" jaroor tumne kuch galat khaaya hoga ( u must have ate something un healthy)…she consoles the girl-" main abhi pani lekar ati hoon , haan" ( wait, i m bringing water)
Khanak gets up, goes to bring water. Meanwhile , the girl gets up, gives a sigh..but then sees khanak coming with a glass of water. Mummy again sits on the bed, this time, holding her head and shouting-"aahhhhhh"
Khanak understands her drama, she says –" acha..dard sar mein hai ya pet mein" ( ok,so the pain is in ur head or stomach)
Mummy gives a innocent look-" dono mein",( both) holds her stomach with one hand and head with another.
Khanak-"acha! Mere pass ek aisi cheez hai, jisse sirf sar ka aur pet ka nahi, sab dard bhag jata hai…" ( ok, i have a thing, which can cure all pains)
Mummy looks at her in fear-" dawayi" (medicine)
Khanak nods to signal a no. She shows her finger and says-" injection"
Mummy-"injection!"
Khanak gets up- " abhi lekar ati hoon," ( i am bringing it now) she tries to go away, but mummy holds her hands and stops her-" nahi, nahi..mujhe injection nahi chahiye, main thik hoon , bilkul theek hoon." ( no, i don't want injection, i m ok..absolutely ok)
Khanak-" pakka"
Mummy-" pakka"
Khanak-" dard bhag gaya na, chala gaya" ( the pain has gone away)
Mummy-" haan"
Khanak, pats her on the cheeks-" toh aab main bhi chalti hoon" ( then, i am also going)
She goes away. Mummy is helpless, thinks-" aab kya karu ( what will i do now) ..then shouts-" khanak, goes after her.
The scene was so sweet..seriously this child is very cute..they should have given her a proper name, instead of ' mummy'.
In the factory
The villagers are sitting in a dharna, shouting –yeh factory nahi khulegi"..with Mangal , being their leader. The DM arrives with Shan and Anand. The villagers continue their protest.
Mangal signal with his hand , to stop.
Mangal anthem starts- dheemta , dheemta…-" is phactory ne mere bha ki jaan li…agar yeh phactory khuli, toh gaon wale maar bhi sakte hai, ane mar bhi sakte hai" ( this factory has taken my brother's life, if it opens, then the villagers can die and even kill also)
Watch out for shan's expressions as Mangal says the line. It was like-idiot, stop ur rantings, I m gonna open this factory, come what may".
Shan looks at him in anger. Anand and the DM have expression of bewilderment.
Mangal plays with his moustache and thinks-" chahta toh main bhi hoon ki yeh phactory khule..par thodda natak toh karna padega ne" ( even i want this factory to open, but i have to do some drama)
The DM says-" dekho Mangal, main tumhari bhavnaye samajh sakta hoon, aur phi raise hadse kabhi kabhi ho jate hai…chinta karne ki koi baat nahi, main apko vishwas dilate hoon, poori tassli kiye bina main is factory ko license nahi doonga..( see, mangal, i understand ur emotions, but accidents do happen....don't worry, without proper checking, i won't give the license) he assures Managl" ( again doubt....how does a district magistrate knows a ordinary villager's name)
Mangal is now tensed.
DM-" aab thik hai" ( is it ok now)
Shan-" thank you sir…Anand tum jake machine check karo, main power station jake button on karta hoon.( Anand, you check the machine, i ' l go and switch on the power station button)
Anand nods in agreement
Shan –" mangal, chabiyaan" ( mangal, keys)
Mangal reluctantly takes out the keys from his pocket and gives to Shan. Both give deadly expressions to each other.
They enter inside the factory ( btw the bg is too scary, seems like it is a bhoot bangle..am I watching rbo or ahaat).
Shan says-" Anand, main jake main switch on karta hoon, tum machine switch on kardo" ( Anand, i will go and switch on the main switch, you switch on the machine switch)
Anand nods in approval, says- done.
Mangal has a evil smirk on his face.Shan moves forward, suddenly stops, looks at the main switch.. His mind goes to the past, the day when Suraj died, the scene flashes in his mind ( everytime , I see the scene, I feel bad for poor suraj)
In front of Khanak's kutiyaan, oops house..she sees few kids fighting among themselves..She rushes to them and says-" arey, arey, kya kar rahe ho..chodo" ( arey, leave, what are you all doing)
Boy1-" tune mujhe mara" ( u hit me)
Boy2-" nahi, maine nah maara" ( no, i didn't )
Boy1-" nahi, tune mara" ( no, u did)
Khanak stops them-" jhagda band karo" ( stop fighting)
Mummy comes out.
Khanak-" kya baat hai, tumlog toh kabhi nahi jhagadte, aaj kya hua" ( what happnened, you all never fight, whats wrong today)
Another girl comes there, limping and holding 1 leg,
Khanak-" kya hua , dikhao" ( show me, what happened)
The girl says-" didi, mujhe kutte ne kata" ( didi, a dog has bitten me)
Khanak gets their drama, scolds them-" kya masti kar rahe ho tum log, kyun jooth bol rahe ho" ( what is this joke, why are you all lying)
Mummy now says innocently-" bas aise hi"
Khanak goes to her , takes her hands and place it on her head and says-" mere sar ki kasam khao aur sach sach bolo, kyun jooth bol rahe ho" ( swear in my name and say why are u lying)
( khanakdi..bacche ko toh chod de yaar, jise dekho sar ki kasam dila deti hai...i swear she should have been in CBI, kasam dila dila ke criminals se sach ugalwati)
Mummy thinks and then says-" kuch nahi hua, who toh factory gayaa hai..Anand aur Shan ne mujhe bataya ki khanak ko factory mat aane do." ( nothing serious, he has gone to factory, Anand and Shan told me to not allow Khanak to reach the factory)
Khanak is shocked to listen to that.
girl 1-" didi, aap shan bhaiyya ko factory kyun nahi jane dete ho" ( didi, why don't you allow Shan bhaiyya to go to the factory)
girl 2- " hum bhi toh factory jate hai" ( even we also go there)
boy1-" wahan mangal bha aur unke dost bhi the" (mangala and his friends were also there)
khanak gives a tensed expression. She says-" tum logo ne mangal bha ko wahan dekha" ( u all saw mangal there)
The kids say-" haan"
Khanak asks them- " kya kar rahe the woh , turns towards mummy-" kya kar rahe the" ( what was he doing there)
Mummy shrugs her shoulders and says-" pata nahi, who kuch wire kaat raha tha aur kuch wire jod rahe the." ( the child is so cute..says so sweetly) ( i don't knwo, he was cutting some wires and joining some wires)
Khanak recalls Mangal's warning, she gets tensed( YM was superb , in the scene, the way her expression made a transition from mock anger to shock to tensed to fear was mindblowing)
Mummy says-" humne unhe dekha aur hum bhag gaye"( hein! mangal koi bhoot hai kya, job ache use dekh ke dar jate hai) ( we saw him and ran away)
Khanak rushes from there.
In the factory, Shan is in a dilemma..He says- " Anand, ek kaam karo, main power station, tum on karo, machines, main jake on karta hoon" ( Anand, do 1 thing, i wil switch on the machine switch, you switch on the main one)
But Mangal intervenes- " kyun, tu dar gaya kya..ki kahin tere sath bhi waisa hi na ho, jo mere bha suraj ke sath hua tha".( why are you scared, that you will face the same thing which happened to my brother Suraj) .Shan looks away.
Anand –" aisa kuch nahi hai" ( its not the case)
Mangal-" aisa hi hai..badde kamjor dil ka nikla yeh" ( it is the thing...he is a weak hearted person)
Anand-" Shan, inke baatein mat suno, main main(english wala) power on karta hoon, tum machine switch on karo" ( shan, don't listen to him, i switch on the mains, you start the machine)
Mangal-" nahi..jo karna hai yehi karega..hum is manhoos zameen ke chakkar mein kisi aur gaon wale ki bali nahi chada sakte ( no, he will do it, i don't want any other villager to pay his life for this inauspicious land)…he looks at shan and taunts-" kyun shehri babu, hai dum" ( why, do you have the courage)
Shan glares at him, then after Anand pats him on the shoulder, he gives his consent and Anand goes to switch on the machine switch..
Mangal thinks- " idhar tu button dabayega ane thari zindagi khatam" ( here, u press the button and there ur life is finished)
KT was superb..his face had all expressions-guilt, fear, slight determination…just superb.
Khanak is rushing towards the factory. Shan moves towards the switch. Everyone looks on, Mangal has a evil smile on his face. Shan stops , takes a deep breath, moves slowly forward., ( btw, Shan was behaving as if football match mein penalty shot marne ja raha hai…ek switch on karne mein itna build-up kis liye…me thinks….)
Khanak is on the streets(she seems to walk now, haila..pati ki jaan khatre mein aur biwi araam se chalk e aarhai hai).
Anand goes to the machine switch. Shan slowly moves towards the Main switch. He is lost in thoughts. Khanak reaches the spot, she shouts-" Shantanu , ruk jayo" ( Shantanu, stop)
Shan turns back at looks at her, everyone looks at her. Khanak comes running towards Shan, she holds him by the shoulders-" Shantanu, shantanu aap us machine ko hath mat lagayiye..uska switch on mat kijiye..aap nahi jante ki Mangal bha…".( Shantanu, don't touch the machine, don't switch on it..u don't know Mangal bha...).She is sighing and in a tensed tone
(ooh, the way she was running , mujhe laga, she is goin to hug him).
Shan cuts her in between-"main nahi janta khanak, main nahi janta ki switch on karne se kya hoga..lekin yeh switch on karke agar meri jaan bhi chali jati hai toh mujhe manzoor hai…kyunki yehi ek tarika hai gaon walo ko vishwas dilane ka…main jo kuch bhi kar raha hoon, sab unki bhalayi ke liye kar raha hoon..aur agar aaj jaan deke mujhe inka bharosa jeetna pada na khanak, toh theek hai" ( i don't know khanak, what will happen, but even if my life is at stake because of this, i am ok with it.....because this is the only way to convince the villagers that whatever i am doing is because of their welfare and if i can win their trust by giving my life, yet i will do it)
Khanak-" thik hai, agar aapka yahi faisla hai toh humdono sath mein ise on karenge".( ok, if this is your decision, then we will do it together).Shan looks at her with love .
Khanak continues-" aaaj tak humne job hi kiya sath mein kiya , yeh kaam bhi sath mein karenge."
( till now, we have done everything together, even dis time also, we will do the job together)
(hein! kaun sa kaam ek sath kiya- khanak toh din bhar kitchen mein kaam karti hai and Shan either gane ka kaam ya timepass ka kaam..haan sirf 1 thing they do together- ahem, ahem)
The way shan was holding her by the hands, it seemed yasharan to me..hehee..aajkal har shanak scene mein mujhe Yasharan dikhte hai
Shan takes her hands, ( bg music starts, it sounds like anthem…mujhe bachpan mein marchfast ki yaad aagayi)..both share a look to each other..
They turn towards the switch, both move forward , hand in hand(…btw yashu was looking so cute..pinky pinky..i wanted to pull her cheeks…KT was hot!!!!!!!... i can't say here, mujhe kya man kiya.)
Shan looks at her, she gives a assurance smile. Their hands move together, up towards the switch. Shan stops for a second, looks at her, she nods her head in approval, he sighs,..They pull the switch up , together with their hands.
god! I had tears watching the scene..such a emotional scene…this is surely the best scene ..among all the memorable Shanak scenes..
They love each other so much..their love is eternal.
A spark occurs, everyone is tensed, looks bewildered. Anand switches on the machine switch.
The machine starts to run. Shan, Khanak, Anand, Sarpanch, all become happy,a smile flashes on their face..
Only Mangal is shocked, he thinks-" arey yeh machine kaise chalu ho gayi" ( how has the machine started)
Shan and Khanak come near the machine.. Anand also comes near ..He notices Khanak crying.. Shan also sees that..Shan puts his arms around her, she rests her head on his chest- they hug.
Anand says-"kitni baar kaha hai pushpaa.." ( how many times , i have told you pushpa)
Shan is holding her, and slightly moves his face and completes-" that I hate tears"..He holds her tightly..
Anand-" yeah , I hate tears."…Shan and Khanak both smile.
Aww such a cute scene…Hiten , Yashu and Karan were so cute in that scene…whispers, btw I again saw yasharan in the hug..kya karoon aadat se majboor hoon..blame my sister-billi aka rooji.
Shan goes to the DM, who shakes hands with him and says-" congratulations, aab aap factory chalu kar sakte hai aur jald hi aapko license bhi mil jayega" ( now, u can start the factory, u will get the license soon)
Shan-" thank you so much"
DM-" ab thik hai" ( is it ok now)
Shan-" jee"
Everyone, except Mangal are happy.. the DM takes leave.
The Sarpanch places his hands on khanak's shoulders and says-" khanak bte, bhai tera pati toh heera nikla , heera.." ( khanak, ur husband is a gem)
He folds his hands and says to Shan-" Shantanu bha,mafi chahta hoon, apko pehechane mein jara si galti hogayi" ( shantanu bha, i beg ur pardon, i failed to recognize you, its my mistake)( bha!..shan looks like his bha to him..khanak ko beta and shank o bha..yeh kya logic hai)
Shan feels embarresed, he folds his hands and says-" nahi, nahi sarpanch ji, mafi mangke, hume sharminda na kijiye.." ( no, sarpanch ji, don't embarass me by saying sorry)
Khanak gives a proud smile to shan, who continues-" aap hamare sath hai, bas itna hi bahut hai"( you are with us, and this is enough)
Anand-" yeh hui na baat, maine kaha tha na aant me achayi ki jeet hoti hai..".( thats it..i have told , truth always wins in the end) ( hein ! yeh kab kaha tha isne---jhootha kahin ka)
He starts the chants- " shehri babu , jindabaad, phactory jindabad..the villagers join him( mujhe apne bachpan ke din yaad agaye..i loved ralies and chants..specially Zindabaad and Murdabaad ka naara..used to walk behind the rallies)
In the meanwhile, Shan and Khanak look at each other, they share a smile.. Shan wraps his arms around her shoulders,and she hugs him.( phir se yasharan, aab joote mat marna yaar—plzz)
Its Mumbai.—Rajen scene ( me cries, becoz of my phuti kismet)
Rahul is driving, he has a flashback in his mind-
He is leaving the house and is giving the papers of the house to Jenny. She is stunned..He says-" yeh ghar tumhara"
She says-" tum bhag rahe ho?" ( u are escaping)
Rahul-" haan tumse" ( yes, from you)
Jenny-" nahi Rahul,mujhse nahi, apne aap se..tum wahi kar rahe ho, jo tum hamesha se karte ho,- bhagna" ( no, not from me, u are running away from yourself)
Rahul-" tum mujhe janti kitna ho" ( you don'y know me)
Jenny-" bahut achi tarah se janti hoon tumhe Rahul..tumhe logon ka istemal karna aata hai..sachayi ka samna karna nahi aata hai tumhe…u r an escapist rahul.." she throws the papers at his face and says- " rakho apne paas"..
Rahul comes to present and stops the car…thank god..rajen scene also stops there..
Anand comes near Mangal- " Mangal bha!,
Mangal looks at him sideways. Anand places his hand on his shoulders.
-"chaunk gaye na……..maine toh bas apke kiye ko sudhara, varna aaj yahan shan aur khanak nahi, unki lashein padi hoti. ( are you shocked , i have just rectified your mistake, else today there would have been Shan and Khanak's dead bodies instead)
Mangal has an expression which of loosing.
Shanak hug ( hayee, kya hug tha, dono smiling , smiling..yeh toh pakka yasharan tah yaar..kitne pyar se dekhte hai dono ek doosre ko…hai mai marjawaan , nazar na lage dono ko..kala teeka laga doon....seriously these two should register their names in guiness book of world records- for the most number of hugs.)
episode ends..
Precap for tommorow
Sarpanch, pointing his fingers at Mangal-" agar tune dhulwadi ki gaon ko nuksan pahuchane ki koshish ki na , toh yaad rakh, yeh gaon ka bacha bacha tujhse badla lega" ( if you try to harm the village, then remenber, even a child of this village will take revenge from you)
What a dialogue and way to express it..watch out for the voice modulation..Pankaj Dheer is superb.
Mangal-" nahi, nahi, sarpanch bapu main toh, main toh gaon ka acha hi chahta hoon, sarpanch bapu" ( no, sarpanch bapu, i always think good about the village)
Mangal sounded like a kid , who is being scolded by the teacher.
Anand-" agar aisa hi tha to kyun apne power switch ki main wires mein short circuit karne ki koshish ki" ( if this is the thing, then why have you tried to short circuit the mains wires)
Shan is shocked, looks up..even Khanak is also shocked. ( ise toh pata tha, phir itna kyun chaunk rahi hai).She has a expression of disgust.
The Sarpanch looks at Mangal with shock and anger. Mangal looks here and there.
over all- a superb episode- full of shanak-
gives 9 and half out of ten ( half marks cut for Rajen)
So, i hope u all like my first attempt at written update..
P.S. Veena di, sry itna late hone keliye...kya karoon..itna lamba post ke liye time lagta hai..
if you all like my update, don't forget to thank billi aka rooji also--she is my inspiration for written update ...usi se tooh seekha hai maine red mein apni thoughts likhna.
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