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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Beautifully written....
short but very cute....
thanks for the pm !!

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

areeeeeeeeeee, itna short update😕😕😕 I want more, but it was awesome , shaan gifitng her the book was the best😊

and tu to bahat punctual ho gayi, wednesday bolke wednesday ko hi update diya😆😆

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

^^ rupa, thanks... main aur punctual, wah kya complement hai!

and thanks again...

and I knw it is a shrt update, but adding fun shanak part wld hve nt been sensible...

thanks again

🤗

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Kyaaa??? Itnaaaa chota part !!

Iske liye you made us wait itnaaaa saaara....!

Itnaaaaaaaaa tiny sa part tha.......!! Uff !

Jaldi continue !!

P.S - Yay !! Coco said she needs scotch......Where is the siggy !! I want to see !!

You Better Continue Soon !! And a longer part !!

Luv,

Vandu

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: yasharan.love
^^ rupa, thanks... main aur punctual, wah kya complement hai!

and thanks again...

and I knw it is a shrt update, but adding fun shanak part wld hve nt been sensible...

thanks again
🤗

i m badly madly waititng for fun shaan khanak part yaar, ye rote hue shakan ko padte padte main bhi bahat senti ho gayi hun😭😭😭😭

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

PD * hugs*

What an awesome update!!

Loved Khanak and her mom s picnic... very touchy and heartfelt and soothing and different... and loved her dad s reaction to it.. natural.

Omg.. Shaan actually planned to gift Khanak her mother s book... that was so cute and what a way to begin breaking the rules....

The dedication was emotional and awesome.... loved it.. could actually feel the emotions....

The wild dance... i can so relate to it.... Two friends take off and dance like crazy....

The hug and the flirting..What do i have to say abt it... They do that best.. ahem ahem and u write it best ( i did try.. but u r simply the best )

Thanks for putting Coco aka Lucy s pic...She so cute....

So when is the next update coming... cant wait to see how things shape up

Hope u had a nice time on ur mom s b day...

Love u

Priya

Ps.. oh i had to type it the second time.. my first post went missing....

Thanks Priya 🤗🤗

and I ma glad U liked lucy's pic!

and yes we had a blast on mum's b'day....

the next update is on sat/sun.....

Love,

P😃😃

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nk.mail

@nk.mail

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Hey Pooja,

Can i get to grumble here? Update was very short 😭 😃 But will agree that u very beautifully conveyed through this post that it's not always about the quantity but quality! 👏 I'm lovin it how Khanak is openin up to Shaan! Dostana is gettin interestin with each update..

Jaldi se upload karna next time! Bacho ki jaan aise wait karwa ke mat liya karo 😆

Oh yeah, do i need to say that the update was jus awesome? 😉

Thanx for the PM 😊

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: togepe30
Kyaaa??? Itnaaaa chota part !!
Iske liye you made us wait itnaaaa saaara....!

Itnaaaaaaaaa tiny sa part tha.......!! Uff !

Jaldi continue !!

P.S - Yay !! Coco said she needs scotch......Where is the siggy !! I want to see !!

You Better Continue Soon !! And a longer part !!

Luv,

Vandu

@- bold-vandu in the siggie the post, right main neeche ki taraf, lucy's (my dog) photo is there, and she is saying "I need scotch" I cast her as coco😆😳

and thanks! 🤗🤗

and next update will be satisfactorily long and cute and flirty and well, let's just say it'll be good... and it will be on sat/sun....

Love,

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best
To get full effect of this part ... I re-read the previous part containing the letter ..... And now the post-letter Shanak moments !!!!

Pooooja - You did it .... You made me cry ... But i love you manifold for giving us all Dostana ..... Thankyoooo for writing this FF !!!!!

I just dont know how to express the pain and the happiness together !!!!!
Will edit and add more when i can get words for this lovely Shanak Story !!!!!!

thanks shalini!🤗🤗🤗