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purvi08

@purvi08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#311

Awwwwwwwwwww .......what a lovely update pooja😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

thanks for the pm

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#312

Awe shaan has stepped it up to a romantic date and Woop aditya is back and I'm hoping for a perfect match with zia they would look awesome and poor rohan his fragile heart got broken again but glad he put his differences aside and went to zia for help and haye just loved the moment that shaan and khanak spent and the last part was written beautifully where shaan gave her an answer to her why's which she already knows that answer to but didnt let him say it as she needs time to get to that stage but I must say I'm in love with your shaan and hmm so rohan did something unknowingly which made zia behave like that with him wonder what happened anyways great update and cant wait to read more 😊

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#313

wow wow wow poo..waiting 4 the next...

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Pooja Manhotra

@Dalilangel

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#314

Update soon I can't wait for the next part it getting even better and better within time please update it soon I'd really appreciate it you are truly amazing and the same can be said about your writing I don't think that I've ever read something as good as this and Ian the type of person that does not just reAd anything there is something really magically and amazing in the way you write that can drawn anyone into reading even the one that do not read

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#315

I simply love to read your updates Pooja, especially because of the writing style.
the story flows out of the words and it is a smooth transition.
Nowhere there is a disconnect, nothing OTT......and everything that is contemporary and real !!!
Kudos !!!
About the update - the date was beautiful....!!
loved Zia and Rohan...
Nats is coming back and so has Aditya...
waiting for you to weave mesmerising screenplay around them !!

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#316

Excellent update Pooja
all scene was soo heart tauching
Zia rohan conv..was soo good
loved to see that tashu come back
zia look like a angel
shanak part soo cute and beautiful
awesome and suppperb..loved it
waiting for next part

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#317

Hey pooj...... 🤗🤗

lovely update dear..... Loved it..... Loved it..... Loved it...... Zia and rohan are too cute..... So now zia is going to help rohan...... I guess during this either zia wil start liking rohan or vice versa..... I sooooo want to knw the secret which only zia, shaan and you knw Wat rohan told abt zia...... So now aditya and tashu are bck..... Wow!!! Dats gonna be fun...... And now shanak..... Loved the date..... It was just perfect(saroj khan ishtyle) wo wo wo girl dont underestimate urself...... The way shaan told his feelings was too good..... It was an awww moment...... Continue soon......