FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 97

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Posted: 14 years ago
mani di
superb update
'shantanu khandelwal' the used to be brat of rbo is totally different from this 'shantanu khandelwal'
so loving ,caring and protective
and also at this serious time he tried to make khanak feel happy and relaxed by telling , "You know, you will make a typical wife……you never get tired of nagging and questioning."
and khanak is so innocent and loyal that she can't do this
she remembered jai while hugging akki was very sweet and touching
keep writing🤗 👍🏼 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
As usual...AMAZING..!!!
thnks for updating!!!😊
Edited by tara_kriya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Manita
Wow what an amazing part 😃
Awesome update once again too good just loved it 👏
Beautifully written I love all the characters in this FF u have described about everyone so well superb writing and I love this Shantanu and Khanak so much and I know its hard to find such people in reality but i know there are such people in reality who love their loved ones unconditionally 😃
I enjoyed reading this update it was so real.
I loved the last part beautifully written 😊
"We can go back anytime, but right now, the most important thing is to keep our self- respect and dignity intact. We will not leave as traitors. We will prove that we were loyal to the organization that we worked for."

"I am so proud of you Chotey," said Akshay with a glint of pride in his eyes.

"Me too……" she whispered very softly again, smiling at him, missed by Akshay but heard by Shaan.

Please continue soon want to know how they solve this issue and i want them to be awarded for their loyalty and hard work by their organization.

Thanks a lot 😊

❤️ Krithika

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello all...my cute FF friends !!!

I am taking this opportunity to thank all of you right now, as there is a cute crazy bunch of my FF friends who just don't allow me to thank before updating everytime !!😉😛😆
not that I am complaining😉...I simply love this attention...😳😃...

But I feel indebted to all those who read my FF without me sending any pm's to them... press 'like' and then write looong comments in detail...investing so much time in my story and efforts...
Can't express how much I love you all..
🤗...Muahhh !!
this FF is here because of you all !!!

Thanking for Part 25 --


Thanks for pressing like -

Ujjwala, fariya92, mitraraaja, pooja.88, minnu345, rockingneha, dishbhan, angel_9, purvi08, RB81, deepa_01, KrazEee, k.krithika, Roshni_M, -shamima-, sweetsute, simiv, jparker, iluvmanar, -Saira-, -Ray-, rbo_d_best, vatsalya, Ammu_SunshYn, The_May_Rose, priya_cool_123, togepe30, adventure_gurl, shanakyasharan,

Thanks for leaving looog comments -- I will try to live up to your expectations as long as I can !!

@ Vatty - I love your comments as they are 'direct dil se'...you love this FF and this FF too loves you and keeps waiting for these encouraging comments !! Khanak sure is a sweetie, just like you !!
Yes, I don't like sad stuff...and I have decided that no more sad stuff from me "as long as I can"😉😛

@ Priya cool - And I am hopelessly in love with you all 😃!! you have thanked me for updating regularly...lol...shall I say the credit goes to You darling ...along with Vandu, Shals, Rosh and Vatty, Dish, Ramani...apart from many others...the first question you all have when you spot me on FB😆...
and you a stalker ?? No ways🤗...I love it ...as I have told before too, that it would be depressing if nobody asked for updates

@ Vandu - I am impressed with your predictions.👏...and I am calling you a queen of predictions now...I was so impressed to know that you have been an avid reader and the long list of authors who you grew up on...still has me reeling under the effect !!!
and No , I don't hate Shanak...if I don't disturb them regularly...they will never stop 😉🤣

@ Rosh - Awww...thanks sweetie !! I loved your comments about Shanak and their convo... and you too smelt rat with Zarine's re -entry ? Don't worry our cat is fierce enough for Zarine..😉...

@ Karish - Thanks a lot hon...I miss your omggg and eeekkksss whose length tells me how good an update was . This time it was sooo looonggg that it left me smiling !!😃

@ Dish - Thanks a lot for the lovely comments !! glad that you liked it !!

@ Saira - I have no words to thank you for this looong comment. Hope I can continue to write to inspire you all to discuss the characters and post long comments...I loved reading each word of it for the pure reason that I love talking about my FF and it's characters...selfish reason, of course !!😛😆

@ Simi - thanks a lot dear !! you are quite modest when it takes to accepting appreciation but you are an awesome writer yourself and every word from you means a lot !!

@ Sonali - thanks a ton dear !! thanks a lot for reading and commenting !!

@ Neha - you are another sweetie pie who writes awesome words and says that I can't write !! Thanks for all those lovely comments and encouragement !! love you !!
and you envy Khanak??...Lmaooo...it is the sweetest compliment, Shanak had !!

@ Purvi - thanks a lot dear ...I will continue to write as long as it looks sensible and the essence stays intact !! I don't believe in stretching beyond a limit... long after magic is lost somewhere !!!

@ Shals -- Awww, so cute of you !! your comments cracked me up !! getting MD hooked up with Zarine is an idea that beats all ideas put forth by Vandu😛😉...apologies to Vandu..😆...
I simply love, adore, treasure your comments...they are so encouraging and motivating !!!
love you for that and disturbing Shanak time and again is important to get another awesome moment next time !!😉😆...and as I said before -- No more Sad updates as long as i can !!

@ Rupa - Thanks a lot dear, for taking the risk of reading in office and commenting from there!!🤗

@ Naveen - Thanks a lot dear !!

@ Ujjwala - Thank you so much sweetie !!

@ Ammu - Thanks a lot for commenting and wishing too !!

@ Ramani - increasing length of your comments tells me that I am on the right track, uptil now!.😉...I loved your looonggg comment absolutely...the way you read between the lines and understand the situation that I had in mind grips me...love you !!

@ Angel - *hugs*...you are another reader who writes in detail what she liked and what she appreciated...quoting almost every scene...loved it totally !!!

@ Jess - you have commented thrice on this part.🤗...thanks is a really small word when I read your comments sweets !! Awww...you quoted almost all of the text and I am so proud of the fact that my regular readers understand Shanak as well...as I do !! I am quoting something written by you ...that is too beautiful --

As I sigh and wait.. and hope that love happens to all the wonderful people around.. I remeniscene ShaNak together and dream again... of the beauty of life.. as love makes it even more beautiful... a wonderful belonging place to be in...

As I dread the little hurdles that life will also spin and hurtle at them along the way, I have faith in the strength of their love... Yes I know love is strong and it wins no matter what the hiccup is!!

I love everything you write and it is an FF in itself...and extension to my FF !!! love every word of it !!

@ saaaz - take your time dear !! I know that you are too busy and to keep up with all the awesome FFs in our forum is absolutely a task !!...I find it difficult too !! Comment whenevr you are able to read and are free...

@ Krithika - no need to say sorry sweetie !! it is hard to read and comment as soon as we update !! but I am happy that you could finally read it and commented !! glad that you loved it and quoted my fav. lines

@ All - Thanks for appreciating the VM !!!


Thanks a lot for part 26...will thank in detail tomorrow, I am tired now😛😉😆...*phew*...

Just wanted to write something for all of you unmarried girls --

Almost everyone has written that they are in love with Shaan of my FF and would want a hubby like him and how, it is impossible to find a guy like him...and such men don't exist... and how can someone love someone so much ...

Darlings, just to enliven your dreams -- Fiction is nothing but realism with a touch of romance and exaggeration !!
Shaan of my FF is definitely too good to be true but such men do exist.
You will not find all qualities in one man, he might not be a stunner to look at but may have a heart of gold...he might not be witty and smart at answering but may be strong and hard working...he might not be romantic at words but may love you like crazy...
but believe me if a man really loves you, he loves you like this !!

And I have seen men like Shaan...so let hopes prevail !!!


I believe in love and believe that it finds you if you believe in it !!!
So all you girls wanting a hubby like Shaan can go ahead and dream full-on as I have seen shades of Shaan in many people around me...and he is very much a possibilty !!

love

Manita

Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Welcome...🤗
I ofcourse believe that there are ppl like shaan... I only think that my bf/hubby will have a tough time coz my expectations are too high...😆😆😆
now tell me when are you updating the next part???? Today na... Plz say yes... Plzzz... Plzzz... Plzzz... Plzzz...
Edited by Roshni_M - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Welcome Manita 🤗
Thanks for writing to us 😊
I hope all our dreams come true 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!!! Just wow!!...
You brought a beautiful twist in the story and have dealt with it so well so far...love and suspense!! What a grt mix!!!!..Love it!!!
Feel sorry for Shanak but I'm sure they'll pull through..!!!:)
Lots of love, Simi
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was so thoughtful of you mani to write something for the unmarried girls..but no one can help but simply love shanak of ur FF..girls married r unmarried really love this shaan n guys would really love khanak and dream about them..they r special..
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Posted: 14 years ago
What a lovely message ...

But at times dreams never come true and everything crashes around u ... The only thing practically possible is Dream and look at it as a dream, do not expect it to come true, just be happy about the lovely dream ... thats it!!!!

baap re bahut jyada serious ho gaya na... Chal ek Shaan aur Khanak ka acha scene tho de de ... to change the mood ... Btw, did I tell you that I absolutely love prawns and rice~!~!~!~ so enjoyed the last updates menu as well ... keep it up!!!!

Next update de do Manita ... nahi tho kal ka din nikalna mushkil hain ...

~Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
mani di thank you for the lovely message to the unmarried girls.but sometimes girls dream so much that atlast their dreams are shattered.everyone should watch dreams but never expect it to come true.

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