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sweetsute

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: iluvmanar
oh ho...itne bsy writers ko lekar hum kya kare...inho ne to humara chain se jina mushkil kar di..itne acche acche updates dekar...

thanks

intezaar karne mein hi maza hai....yaar.

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sweetsute

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123
excellent shilpa... loved the way the hiddden feelings came out..... mindblowing.....

now i want to know what happens next...

btw who is / are the inspiration forf ur story

thanks dear.......

and have patience...

u really dont know who is the inspiration...hein!

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sweetsute

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: krock
awsome shilpa yaar loved love the 2nd meeting and love the way hw shaan irritates her it was dam cte for while it felt like yashran and love the way ther feelings came out and like the dialog when he say u wanne feel love and he kiise her awsome shilpu loved it

thanks anki

u loved dat dialogue

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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best
The chase & the train sequence reminded me of Saathiya ... !!! Lovely Lovely Lovely !!Loved the innovative idea of the SKETCH .. .Wonderful !!!!!!

Awwww..the first kiss ... This line made me melt 'U wanna feel love' .. awwwwwww

But now i m worried tooo ... A beautiful journey that resulted into Khanak & Shaan seperating !!!!!!

Nahieeee yaar .... Please dont let the bond break !!!!

One more thing ... Addd lotsa Romance in the Flashback !!!!!!!! (Dont forget u r Shai's Shishya!! )

Loved Loved Loved the narration ..... Great Work Update soon ...

And yeh Busy Busy Kya hain ..... SHANAK ke saamne everything comes second !!!!!

abt the train incident.........yup! it is inspired by d movie....

thanks for the loving the idea.....

dont wry...everything will be beautiful...

off course , u wil get lots of romance.....

btw... even i would love to bring everything 2nd, but kya karu shanak are not gonna make my future...u see

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Lovely update Shilpa👏....Love the playful Shaan and the whole train situation😃....It's interesting to read about their past and it makes us wonder what happened....Shaan has grown to love and respect her, I guess the fact that she she is afraid to love, may have caused a rift??....Can't wait for the next update😊.....

Edited by The_May_Rose - 14 years ago

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

hey it was really sweet & romantic pls continue soon

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destinylove

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Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Shilpa really very good please continue dear!!!

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.Rupali.

@.Rupali.

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

lovely update.....😊

I wonder what made them end their relationship?

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Hi Shilpa
Awesome update Loved it
please continue

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ZARA ALI

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Posted: 14 years ago

#110

out standing update shilpa .....amazing i can feel every emotion of ur ff ....
i loved the train part shaan is always like that .........gr8 yar ....

please try to continue soon i m eager to know what is going to happen next ...........

luv zara

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