*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :)

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#201

pls vatty promise kar by atleast 3 days u wil update...dont stop this re its sooo damn good plsss

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Bona

@bones88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

haayeee twinooo😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

brilliant and beautiful... just loveee ur writing style❤️

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purvi08

@purvi08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#203

vatsalya loved it👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#204

What do I say...
though I am speechless...but won't run away like you people do.😛...okay sometimes you do😉!!

let's start with --- Thanks !!!

Finally you update sweety !!

I have told you before that your writing style is Killer.👏👏...really !!!
you won't believe it but after every few lines I stop and think *Is she really 18 years old??*...

Beautifully penned👍🏼...
your writing style has a flow, a peace, a beauty, a stability ⭐️!!!!
I am in love with it and was wondering whether I will be able to read it again !!

Coming to update -- Highlights --

"Shaan carrying pillow to window side seating and remembering his mon" -- what a touch...it touched me🤗 !
him talking to tanmay -- *standard badha apna*.🤣...loll !!!
the breakfast table talk about Tamanna...very very mature👍🏼👍🏼...I appreciate that in an FF where real life situations are touched and tackled in a routine way !!!

Khanak's childlike behaviour...Shaan's efforts to woo her back !!

Finally -- his melodious *Khanak*.😍😍😍...*Sigh* !!

*Sigh*...*Sigh*...next part is expected when??

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#205

OMG!!!really???*rubs my eyes in shock*

vattie... Shit u really updated???? How? When?kaise? Kaisa?

Ok ok let me read..

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

ccc vatty ccc!!!!!!11 how much ppl love it n u bhao khao...lol
keep it going sweety:)

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Finally an update... i've read the ff three times n waited for the update

Thank God u updated and thx to u for updating it😊

Its beautiful... em speechless

Her childish behavior and that melodious khanak... really cute.

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Spellbinding, haunting, but perfectly ShaNak and love the overall direction of your story Vatty👏⭐️...

Stop hiding this talent...Update regularly please😃...

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

hei vatty,

that was awesome..

y is khanak troubling herself?

loved the talk between shaan n tanmay..that too reg shaan's secretary(std badha apna..)LOL!!!!

khanak didnt expect shaan to meet aunty hai kya?silly girl..if she is upset it doesnt mean that he would not come to meet aunty..

shayeri n aunty play cool between shanak..

really i too think that tannay n shayeri will get along..😍😍😍😍(wishful thinking)

intentionally sending shaan to inform khanak..

how could u stop it like this..his melodic 'khanak' is ringing in my ears..need to see her reaction for wat she said hearing the knock on her door n seeing that person in front of her now..

continue soon vatty..dont make us pester u again for updates..

Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago