SS: Forging UPDATED Part IV-Page 9 - Page 8

Very Heart wrenching and very real !!

yumna im honestly speechless, they way to depict the emotions, the dialogues everything was spot on, first the two of them struggling internally as they both feel they need to come to terms with their own grief before they can support the other, the way shaans outburst breaks through khanaks walls and makes her feel again and their hear to heart and mini banter at the end was the perfect ending and very endearing,
seriously i dont know anyone to have gone through such a traumatic event but the way you have dealt with its seems sooo plausible and real. there was no cushioning some raw pain which is justifiable,

honestly this whole ff was brilliant, gripping and engaging and the writing was amazing- you really have a way with words

so now im bummed that there is no more parts but when your free will look forward to your latest creative adventure xxxxxxxxx

Yumna loved the update keep it up! I mean I hope you write more stories to share with us, this one was great!😃

Yumna ....this is all that I can say..or show...👏👏👏👏 words aren't enough really...this whole part brought me to tears...😭..beautiful...👏👏👏👏

OMG!

OMG woman ur a classy, classy writer...where have you been hiding all this time?

awesoem ending!!..

This was very touching & heart-wrenching Yumnaa ...

We can only make an attempt to try and relate to a real-world situation like a miscarriage through such reads !!! But in reality, how difficult it must be to cope up with it is something we can only imagine ....

Thanks once again for incorporating this fact of life in Shanak !!!!!
Very emotional , sad yet truthful !

hey Yumna

My god......