an ff on mayur,sajan n shanak note on pg 2

Aisha

@mayur_shanak

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Posted: 14 years ago

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PLEASE READ THE WHOLE THING😊

hey all i m thinking to make an ff on these 3 couples plz tell me that should i write it or not i mean who ever like this plz just tell me n ya 1 more thing my inbox is full so i cant receive the pms so if anyone want to pm me plz dont i mean just post a scrap whenever my inbox will empty i will tell u ok friends n 1 last thing agar aap mein se kisi ko bhi chahiye k mein unhe pm karoon i mean aap bas mujhe apni buddy list mein add kar lijiye ga taake mein aapko pm karsaku bcoz mein apni sab hi buddy list waalon ko pm karungi ok friends.

FF is about mayur sajan n shanak (i will also post the pic) ( i will post this ff on ff forum but plz read this ok)

sharmas are:

khanak (khanak is the elder sister of mayank n samrat they call her di)

mayank ( mayank is second born samrat call him bhai)

samrat ( he is last born mayank calls him chotte)

bhushans are:

shantanu (he is the elder brother of gunur they called him bhaiya n he call nupur nups n to gunjan chutki nick name)

nupur ( gunjan calls her di)

gunjan ( n pyar se nupur gunjan ko gunji bulati hai )

now the short introduction :

first of bhushans

gunjan is same as she is in serial i mean shy n sweet

nupur is bubbly n same as in mjht

shantanu is same as in odhani n lnmdj i mean he is cool smart n not the angry man i mean his behaviour is also sweet with her sisters i mean he is like the parents of the gunur

hey i m getting late plz tell me should i continue it or not bcoz i m busy right now n going so plz tell me is this is good ff so i will continue it

Edited by mayur_sidhma - 14 years ago

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Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

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oh sweety i think its sweet u should continou this......................loved the intro but one thing khanak dosent suit as elder sis u should made her little sis of mayank and samrat wo jada accha lagega it will be perfect.......................................plz continou soon and pm me ok its ankita by the way🤗

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priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey nice one... but khanak doesn look old enough to be mayank s and samrat s elder sister.... and shantanu s young to be nupur s elder brother....

my pov.... cos i watched mjht too.....

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Yasharanrocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

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nice ff but agree wid priya shanak looks younger.........

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destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Nice idea but make khanak younger sister to mayank and samrat..because in real life also she is younger to them.

. great idea please write u have your support.

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#6

like the family dynamics please do continue😃

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deepali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#7

Nice idea dear pl continue your ff🤗

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Amritha

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: sshriyaa84
Nice idea but make khanak younger sister to mayank and samrat..because in real life also she is younger to them.

. great idea please write u have your support.

same opinion here......make khanak younger to mayank and samrat.....

and do continue......

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

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Posted: 14 years ago

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pls khanakko younger sis banao...it is looking odd that mayank & Sam calling her Di...and pls continue ur FF...

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Aisha

@mayur_shanak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#10

note: plz read it

hello everybody how r u all n thank you so much for your comments so after reading all your comments plz

suggest me again that shantanu to nupur or gunjan ka big brother ban sakta haina but ya actually meine is ff mein khanak ko mayank or samrat se isliye bara kiya tha kyun k meine ff hi esa socha tha jismein wo unki bari sister hogi or shanak ki shaadi hojayegi or ussi ki tayyariyan hongi or phir baad mein kuch esa hoga jisse dono family's ko shanak ye batayeingein k wo dono sanjeevani hospital mein mile the n all the story n they were intern n now a senior doctors (plz suggest me that should i keep them interns or what)

but still if u all want so its ok to mein is ff mein esa likh dungi that mayank or samrat se pehle khanak ki shaadi hoti hai n all actually meine is ff mein shantanu ko big brother is liye rakha hai bcoz as soon i will start my ff i m sure that will b interesting as u all have also given me the support or plz kya mein sirf khanak ko little sister but shan ko big brother rakh sakti hoon bcoz is ff mein mayur or sajan ki bhi lovestory hogi jismein unko shanak hi milaayeingein or khanak ko nupur or gunjan bhabhi keh kar bulaayeingi or plz tell me do u all agree plz feel free to comment n once again thank u all for your sweet comments

1 more thing i m sorry for that

that my inbox is still 100% full so u cant pm me im really sorry all of u but if u want to discuss with me anything about this ff so u can send it on my scrapbook n ya all of plz reply on this note thanku

hey listen one more thing plz suggest me a name for this ff should i keep the name love ne mila di jodi i think this will suit more or when i will give the concept n character sketch then u will suggest me plz try to suggest now plz thank u

Edited by mayur_sidhma - 14 years ago

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an ff on mayur,sajan n shanak note on pg 2

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