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Hi Guys,
Back to bother you with my new Poem on RBO ka Naya Track...looks promising so far, has all the ingredients of a Masaala Movie😆 Wrote it after I saw 4 epis back to back without commercial interruptions...😃
RBO's New Clothes...Naya Track, Naye Log!!😉😆
When Shaan felt like singing
The Moody Blues tune
'Donald' Duck and his cafe
Dispelled the spread of gloom
Its incredible that
Duck's managed to stay afloat
Despite sounding a fire alarm
Everytime his throat's exposed😆
Then came the dashing
Tomboy Samaira ( Sam)
Who held cake wars with Khanak
And added a hefty dose of glam
Last but get it not the least
Entered Rahul alias R.K
Whose karate kicks rendered
Shanak's SR to the backstage😕
Like romantic nutkhat Duck
And his cute banter with Shaan
His cafe seems to be the venue
To launch his pal's 'Udaan!'
Sam seems to have settled
Into Khanak's good books
Though initially her coming
had me desperately seeking a nook
Though Rahul's an inflamed pimple
In Shaan's mysterious past
His manhandling predictable Sam
Will make our interest last
The story seems to have taken
A new but promising turn
With a spew of meaty dialogues
This tale we shall never spurn ( we hope!)
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Ps: The magic's still there!😉😃 Constructive criticism is welcome!!Thanx!!😃
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