Ode to RBO~~ Yashu's response Pg5!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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After all the loco posts of the past few days..thought I'll put this up for what its worth..😆😳 for I don't claim to be much of a poet!!

Its dedicated to the entire RBO team for the wonderful entertainment they have dished out these past few ,months...in particular for their sincerity and dedication..with the Hope that it will continue for a long time to come!!..😃
Ode to the Khandelwals~~~ RBO
If you are down
Or feeling out of sorts
If you are blue
Or tied up in knots
Just listen to me
Put your troubles aside
And tune your telly
To the Khandelwals tonight
It's a well scripted tale
A fascinating saga
A soul stirring story
Set to the Khandelwal Raga
You will see there
An amazing variety
Of superior talent
In the Khandelwal society
You will behold
Three beautiful wives
Wielding complete control
Over the Khandelwal lives
An array of players here
It's almost a 'Zila'
But things make sense ( so far😉)
In the Khandelwal 'Qila'
Award winning music
Will leave you screaming for more
Tapping yr feet to the rhythm
Of the RBO score
There's plenty of humor here
Many a comical bungle
For those who crave a good laugh
In the Khandelwal Jungle!
The main pulse of the story
A couple soo sweet!
Innocence meets sensuality
An awesome RBO treat!!😃
So come one, come all
You'll be a welcome Mehmaan
And then become a permanent fixture
Of the Khandelwal/RBO khandaan!!😃
P.s its not much of a poem, but its sincere..hope you like it!!..😃
Please comment..thanx!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Simi you are one damn talented gal👏👏👏👏 The poetry is awesome...just what all of us feel...put nicely...
yes whenever I am down I do go to YT to chk out RBO...it ups my mood.
You are very creative.....I am yet to catch up on ur couch/kitchen posts...as was busy last week and cudnt come to IF
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wah Wah !!!
Wah meri Javed Akhtar...!
Dil Khush kar ditta !! Hehehe!!
Very Nicely put !!

Loved the Last Para especially and also the 3 Women weilding control...How true,....!

And loved how you ryhmed Zila and Quila !!

Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Mahi and Vandu!!
@ Vandu..Wasn't sure how to spell Qila ya Quila!! 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing poem!You shd send the poem to the director and the producer on fb.I am sure they will love it.
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hey there, you done it well...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Anita, Rose!! Very sweet of you to say so!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh Simi,RBO forum is so lucky to have you .The moment you joined the forum,it has been so much fun with all your whacky poems,medieval stories and on the couch rendezvous.You are brillinat honey but i guess you already know that.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ahh its a nice poem sim... loved it... keep it up babes 😊..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: simiv

After all the loco posts of the past few days..thought I'll put this up for what its worth..😆😳 for I don't claim to be much of a poet!!

Its dedicated to the entire RBO team for the wonderful entertainment they have dished out these past few ,months...in particular for their sincerity and dedication..with the Hope that it will continue for a long time to come!!..😃
Ode to the Khandelwals~~~ RBO
If you are down
Or feeling out of sorts
If you are blue
Or tied up in knots
Just listen to me
Put your troubles aside
And tune your telly
To the Khandelwals tonight
....Of the RBO score
There's plenty of humor here
!
The main pulse of the story
A couple soo sweet!
Innocence meets sensuality
An awesome RBO treat!!😃
So come one, come all
You'll be a welcome Mehmaan
And then become a permanent fixture
Of the Khandelwal/RBO khandaan!!😃
Dear simi u said it all .Very nice poem...covered all main points.. so true watching RBO definitely makes us cheerful and most importantly ShaNak make our day....the most joyous....

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