~VMs from Manita~ :Tum Ho Mera Pyaar pg 15 -30/8 - Page 4

manitaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
superb superb superb.....................awesome loved it like anything



tooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooodddddddddddd
doesnt even feel like yyr frst vm sweetie

im in love wid it beautiful n shanak rock in it completely

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Originally posted by: sharmida

Wow for your first VM it is real good Manita.I really need to learn how to make VM's.Please teach me sometime if you are free from your hospital duties.😳.Good job honey.!!!

Thanks Sehju.......My friends won't believe it that I made a VM as I usually excuse myself of silly gatherings and unwanted acquaintances on the pretext of being busy; even my relatives and distant friends will possibly vote for a court martial for me on the grounds that I don't give them much time, but here I am devoting my attention to Shanak and IF and making VMs to top that😆😆........actually hard to believe for me too??........
and I have a very basic knowledge of making VMs, that I gathered over past 1 week from google and IF...( had no clue before it;)...yet to learn a lot...chalo we'll learn together😳......!

lovely vm manita 👏

Hey Manita,

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Hey Manita,

I have this bad habit of pouring my analysis in detail, so bear with me....but once I start speaking, u wuld just need a silencer to stop me!! 🤣...anyways, since there isnt a silencer, here I start....

I just loved the intro.....The anticipation in shaan and khanak's eyes was what the soothing start required and it set the pace for me to watch further...it just glued me in my place!! There couldnt have been better than having a awwwwwwwww worth eye lock for that music!!

Then the 2nd time, "Aankhen bhi, hoti hai dil ki zubaan", that eye lock when Shaan holds her was just apt....and then it continues, "haalat pal mein baayaan"...OMG!!!...Shaan's state was just stunning....his "haalat" was definitely getting all bayaan...as if Khanak's eyes had arrested him...

That sentence on Khaamoshi....spot on again Manita...which scene was this that these two garrulous ppl, actually kept khamosh???? huh?? I mean, what a choice!! 👏👏

Neend aaye na...badne lage bekaraari...I loved ur idea of flashbacks because that is what ppl do when they cant sleep....

"mehsoos ho chingaari"....If not chingaari, shaan was defn feeling smethng...His eyes closed and Khanak staring at him....the mehsoos was written all over their face!! 😳😳

Oh my!! I loved he "aankhen bhi hoti" at 4:03....when Khanak puts a cushion between Shaan and herself and its just their eyes reflected...what a choice.....wow!!..this has to be the best scene!

One more thing that I loved about ur VM was how u didnt rish thru scenes, how u didnt zap them every micro second....I personally get a headache with that and hence, the stay that each scene of urs had, was very very cherishable...I lived every moment and felt it with Shaan and Khanak!!!

BTW, I have to give it to you, ur first VM, and u havent made the mistake (IMO and I am a layman completely) that every fresher makes and even pros!!!...U havent captured any scene where shaan or khanak are talking...and thats what I feel spoils a VM...It brings down the energy immediately...U have chosen non-spoken scenes, instances.....thats makes a lot of difference!!...as u say in the end - who needs words....so true....dude...thats apt for every VM but not many take care of tht!! 👏👏👏

Manita, if this is ur first VM, then,

*bows thrice in front of Manita*

How come u all are so talented???...

*runs to put on a veil*

I am invisible pls!! 🤣🤣🤣

hey Nikita...........................can't express my thank u in words..............i got praises from sooo many but this detailed analysis is OMG...........never expected.............the way you described my VM.........i felt as if i'm on cloud nine...................!!

but my second VM that i made yesterday is going to let you down.........because it has 2 negatives that you described were lacking in the previous one
-- it has pics flashing quickly........wanted to include a lot of Shaan
-- it has scenes with words......not many shaan scenes are without words.........
and the editing is also not that gr8

do tell me what you felt...........will try to improve in next one...

@Manita:

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

@Manita:

Dnt sweat!!!...I am a layman and I dnt have much of an idea...I was just speaking from what I have seen in other VMs....I might be totally off here.....sorry, just ignore my comments, as long as u love ur creativity, that counts!! 🤗

@ Nikita..........come-on now................your opinion matters and I mean it........i loved your analysis of my first VM........made it very special actually...........!!

it's just that when i read it, i felt a connect as there were 2 points which even i feel should be taken care of..........but couldn't avoid in the next one.............due to............let's say...............script ki demand....😉...😆😆😆😆...!!

PS- do see my Saawariya shaan VM......and keep commenting.....we simply love your take on everything...!!!

where is the vm manita dying to c it pls pls jaldi bolo