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Hinna

@.-BalleBalle-.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#561

Heyyy baiko just thought I'd let you know I just read the OS and...I thought you said there was little romance? Dude you made me read fahashut stuff in Ramadan! :O LOL khair I loved it nonetheless (not the fahashut part but the rest of it lol) and I shall be back later with proper comments :) for now I should get some sleep before sehri lol

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#562

hey... one more part of A,B and refusals?

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 14 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: xoxRBOxox
hey...thanks a ton!!!

What a scintillating OS... could very easily visualise the whole enact, hear their dialogue with their voice modulation...I don't have words to describe...MAGNIFICIENT...the very touching and emotional mother and son moment...then Shaan and Khanak's extra special moment...the ambience of their room...then the sensual moment...their very cute nok jhok...Ada and bai...poor kids LOL... him asking her to call the doc...LMAO...shaan back on sofa...and he conceding defeat too by saying when will these 8 months be over...its super hilarious...what a brilliant piece of work...it is simply mind blowing!!!!!

Do carry on and please don't tarpao poor shaan like that, he can't give in that easily...its perfectly ok to perform during pregnancy...unless there are complications...lol!!

...meanwhile let me catch up with all your other OS...you are an extremely talented and creative writer...I'm constantly amazed at the amount of talented people this forum has...hats off to you ALL!!!!

I was a guest reader earlier...your WU always had ROFL effect on me...esp all the red lines...oh crap...i miss ur updates like hell!!!...Oh God I can't believe I'm actually crying now...miss RBO like crazy!!!

Thanks a ton dear!!!

...Ann,xox

Hi Ann 😊 Thank you sooo much for your beautiful comments 🤗 If I'm not wrong this is your first comment here and it's SUCH a nice one! 😃 serioulsy it means so much when you come up to me and say you could actually visualise it and stuff 😳 thannk youuu <3 haha@ Shaan conceding defeat! Now I'm thinking i shouldn't have let him give up so easily lol but ahh well we can always have him foght for his rights after Khanak comes out of that bathroom 😆 I don't know if i will be carrying on with this one though :/ i might if i think of something. Yes do read the others :) All of them are in this thread and ermm the index is on the first page too though I'm not sure if it is updated lol

OMGG thank you sooo much for the comment on the written updates! I regret not asking Veena to let me do them earlier since I've always been a part of this forum but I used to always think what a majorly hectic job it is but when i started i used to quite enjoy doing it it was like something to look forward to 😊 Oh well! I miss Odhani too :( will never love a show as much as this :(

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 14 years ago

#564

@Ammu: haha thank you <3 awww i'm glad it made you smile :) Don't worry i shall continue writing since I myself am majorly obsessed with Shanak lol

@Shalini: Thank you honey! <3 Ermm I dunno if i can write another part for this OS specifically I'll have to think of soemthing but if not toh I'll definitely write other OSs :)

@Vasha: Thank youuu <3 glad you loved it!

@Vandu: Haha thanks! Yea i know you love what I write 😳 isee liyay i was wonderin where you were even after 2 days of me posting this! :O Khair yeaa this was meant to be like the 25th of july written update yaar lol!

@Deepali: Thank youuu <3 haha totally Shanak is how I roll! :D

@Naveen: Thanksss <3

@Hinna: I can't believe you ignored like the ENTIRE OS which had so much of toher stuff too and only cared to mention the romance part!! 😲 woh bhee in a not so nice way :( I told you there were only 2 lines of romance you could have skipped them when you saw them coming but nooo you read them toh not MY fault! 😆 waisay bhee you're acting as though it was seriously xrated stuff or something! It was nothing! Hmphh. Khair sighh you loved it na that's what matters lol thank youuu <3

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Anu179

@Anu179

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Posted: 14 years ago

#565

Yes Beeni this was my first comment on your thread...devoured all your OS...enjoyed them to bits... as I said I was a guest reader earlier...enjoyed immensely going thru this RBO forum (haven't checked any other, nor do have any inclination either, ek deewangi kaafi hai)...felt I owed my thanks to you all talented people who gave me such pleasurable moments...seeing RBO thru your eyes made it all the more special ..so I joined basically to say Thank you and got entangled even more ...now its an addiction...so here I am...please keep writing, whenever possible...everyone has a different style of writing...I love the spunkiness,the naughty charm in all your writing...so girlie keep up the good work!!!

Ann..🤗

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#566

LMAOOO !!!!!

I am ROFLing ... Stilll ...

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#567

Ma'm Beenii...I just wanted to request you to move your fingers on the less used keyboard to write another OS for us !!!!!

Pleeadgeee...yeh dil maange more !!!!!

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: -Manita-
Ma'm Beenii...I just wanted to request you to move your fingers on the less used keyboard to write another OS for us !!!!!

Pleeadgeee...yeh dil maange more !!!!!

i second mani in this..

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#569

Beaanniee !!!!

OS likhooo !!!!!

PLEASEE .. HOT and SUPERHOT walaaa !!!!

Its beeen Ages !

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 14 years ago

#570

@Shalu: JAAAN logee kya meri!! I'm already writing the FF for you and ub OS bhee! OS kay liyay wait! Read all the other ones again if you're missing the OSs so much! there are around 15 in this thread alone! LOL

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