*sigh* are you ready for my comment? 😆 This one goes all the way back to page 124.
Chapter26 part un: As much as I hate Aditya for saying all of that to Khanak, I've realized that he speaks the truth. Poor guy, he's really not to be blamed for all this. Khanak subconsciously loves Shaan and so she ends up confiding in him all of the time. No one's at fault in this situation, which is bad because I need someone to blame!😆
I LOVEEEEEEEEEEE Tashu! She is the reason Aditya and Khanak split and I am so thankful to her for this!😆 Her secret spilling is what set of Aditya and his "you don't tell me anything" tirade..so Tashu, ILY!😆 If Rohan doesn't want her, I'll take her! ;) jk.
Poor Khanak, crying herself to sleep. ):
But I love how both Khanak and Shaan talk to Coco all the time! Boy, if coco gets like supernatural abilities to speak..both Khanak and Shaan would be toast. If only...
Khanak: "Where are you?"
Shaan: "How are you?"
haha! Why does that sound so totally normal? He just ignored her question completely and answered it with his own question! Only Shaan has the ability to do that. Haha!
Since I know what happens after this chapter, I won't kill you for leaving it at a cliff-hanger. (; See, me commenting late has it's own advantages..now I won't have to threaten you to update sooner!
Chapter26 part deux: I LOVE KIARA! Both Tashu and Kiara are my two fav characters now. <3
I feel terrible for her though..I hope she gets what she deserves. Now that you've changed Aditya, I don't know if I want him with Kiara anymore.😆 yes. I know; I'm a lost case!
Pooja, I love the way you've shaped her character! She seems strong but she has a vulnerable side to her; one that is telling that to just keep Shaan to herself..that maybe he will stay happy with her. I'm glad that you made her this way..makes her seem more real. The slight selfishness, but the morality to do the right thing. (:
Shaan is just an idiot for trying to come up with "reasons". 😆 He even knows he loves her! Budthal.
AWWWWW! the last part with Shaan and Kiara was adorably cute! It felt like I was watching the Shaan Tashu scene from the show but yours is much better. <3
Haha, when it sadness..turn to Vodka! The philosophy of life. 😆
Their conversation was..umm, weird? But it was funny and so very cute! I was singing "mein talli" even before I read that Khanak was thinking about it.😆
The whole interaction seemed so natural for them. Sit, drink, and spill..everything that's bothering them.
I really hope Shaan doesn't forget everything the next morning! Khanak too, for that matter. It'll be back to square one if they do. ):
Chapter27:AHHHHH! I love this chapter! Best chapter ever! I like the whole show of emotions and sentiments. I'm always a sucker for this kinda intense stuff.
And I cannot even mention how very sweet it is that Khanak asked Shaan to read her letter. <3 Really shows that she can go through anything if he's by her side, supporting her through it all.
I can't even tell you how good the letter is. No words for it. One of the most beautiful letters I've ever read.
I don't think I've ever been more eager to read the next chapter! Pooja, you have got to update soon..I'm dying to see how both Khanak and Shaan react to the contents of the letter!!
I can't even describe how much I love this FF! Dostana = AMAZING!
PHEWWWWWWWW! see, I commented. Forget the fact that I'm like 24 hours late.😆 and I can't remember what page I had reserved my last spot on so I just commented again.
-Nitya
p.s. If your going to wait till this thread ends for the next update..I can help speed this place up.😆 I am a pro at the art of spamming. ;)
p.p.s I keep forgetting to ask you this, but umm..what do you have planned on the Rohan-Tashu front? Do they have a happy ending..or something else? 😆
Edited by -Nitya- - 14 years ago
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