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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

waiting for the couples to meet..

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Hey !!

Lovely fic !!

No prizes for guessing that the phone call was from Rudra..hehe !!

Cant wait for Wednesday to read more...

Luv,

Vandu

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Ashiana

@maneet.n.shanak

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

hmmm... Nice p1 😊
I wonder who the person was that called him and who is it that he cant help but look at how attractive she is☺️

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Superb update.....excellent so far. .👏...suspense .....
please cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm.😆

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TitanFan

@TitansFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

thx for lovely feedback ....... love u allll

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Ranjini

@MFRanjini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Jaya, it is not only perfect but it is tooooooooooooooooo good👏
Loved the way you portrayed Shaan, he seems to be a happy go lucky boy😳 How he enjoys the traffic jam, how he made that kid happy😳 I can totally imagine Shaan's cute innocent smile 😳

Loved Sunil, I hope Madhvi is not evil here😆

Shaan is going to meet Rudra, right?

WoW!!!! too good yaar🤗

Love
Ranju

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TitanFan

@TitansFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

thx ranju .....

Nope , none of them r evil , not in my FF for sure ...........

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sabihaa.

@sabihaa.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Jaya Di.
You are AWESOME.
You do realise that right?

Alright, I need to take a minute to process that I, Sabiha, am your inspiration to write this. Huh?
Shocked & immensly honoured.
Seriously. It means the world to me that you think my writing is worth it to become a catalyst for you to start writing.

Moving on, I really like your beginning.
& the character sketches are interesting to say the least.
It's set in an alternate universe (with my favourite couple. *sigh*), which makes it oh so cool.. it means you can have so much fun with this. :D

Part One ~ hahahahahahahahhahahahaha.
Madhavi is so awesome!! She's soooo overprotective of Shaan.
It's cute - & I wish she was like that with him in the show, instead of being a conniving, scheming SD.
Sunil seems the same ~ the cool dad, but he stands up to Madhavi more. Yay. =)
Shaan, Shaan, Shaan... he sounds like a seedha-saadha type. Which is adorable. He's adorable. He's hawt actually. Hai, what is with guys named Karan being soo hot? (Alright, going off-track here... *sigh* KSG, Karan Tacker.. damn, damn, damn...)

Anyway Jaya Di, make sure you continue. Seriously.
& even if the world doesn't like it, I definitely <3 it.
You have immense talent... go crazy!!

Lotsa <3, jhappis & pappis!!

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TitanFan

@TitansFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Jaya Faints

Inee pyaare pyaare words 😆

yes sabi , ur the reason sweets , esp ur FF on ur fav three pairs .......

would update soon ........

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shanakforever

@shanakforever

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

hey i love this buddy part its so much fun n good. v can patiently wait fr both the couples 2 meet dear cause i know u shall write fantastic scenes between them take yr tijme.loved this part n kt n iqbal would look awesome as frnds on screen too

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