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Once upon a time, in a far away land lived a young,handsome , dashing prince,,interested in racing and gaming and merry making ...fed up by the irresponsible Attitude of the young Prince, The King sent him to the furthest reaches of his Kingdom to oversee the Commoner's work ...This was the land where the King's power's were weakest and the tribe did not care 2 hoots about the King..This were simple tribal ppl ruled by an chieftain...

The young debonair prince arrived to this God forsaken land and continued on his merry jaunts and irresponsible attitude ...one day while overseeing the work of the commoner the prince succumbed to carelessness and due to his negligence one of the simple minded commoner died ...The Tribe closed Ranks..the Prince was imprisoned and was given two choices...get married to the young widow of the commoner or be prepared to give up ur life..faced with this extenuating choices..The prince chose Life over death and married the young widow ...It was a marriage of necessity !!

The prince found himself locked in a loveless marriage ..he tried various means of getting rid of her ...but was unsuccessful ..meanwhile there was a growing conviction in the mind of the king and his eldest son that the Young widow's presence in the palace increased the gold inflow into the king's coffers....Things went on quietly if not smoothly , one day due to an unfortunate incident, The young widow was forced to leave the house .....The King and the crown prince were shocked and angered at the callousness of our prince..they forced him to seek out the Young widow and bring her back with due honor ...The Prince reluctantly set forth on his gold studded chariot
arraigned in the finest royal attire....

Meanwhile our nubile,beautiful charming Young widow was lost and wandering aimlessly searching for the way to her home ...Just like the way bees are attracted to flowers, A pack of wolves too found this young flesh attractive, they assumed the mask of benign Puppies and came forward claiming to assist her in her search for her home....The young nubile Girl, still not yet out of the first bloom of youth, radiating a trust seen to be believable took them at their words and followed them weaving a tapestry of joyful re-union with her parents.....

Meanwhile ,Our prince has set forth on his endeavor complaining bitterly against his royal consort and railing against the fate which forced him to embark on this perilous journey ...As is his wont..The prince ends up in the den of vice where he meets up a few promiscuous ladies ..The Promiscuous ladies look at him like starving kittens who have been offered a rich creamy milk..eager to savor this cream or at least have a lap..the Kitten's surround him...The Prince gets alarmed and petrified , he immediately decides that retreat is the best form of valor and decides to run ...He runs straight into the arms of of the young,radiant , nubile,charming Widow......................His Consort,His Soul-Mate 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow!!!!! It is soooooo good, Shaan as prince charming😊
Loved it sooooo much.
You write sooooooooo well.👏

Do continue this one. You wrote one on Khanak as well na? do continue that one as well😍


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Posted: 15 years ago
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I L.O.V.E this! Please for , Holy God's sake, continue! Sathyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
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👏👏👏👏👏 Wonderful beautiful and completely unique way of saying the story so far. Loved it! And very eager to see the remaining part. I am completely surprised with this different take on the story so far.
Superb gal!
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That was beautiful Sathya, as you posts always are....Reminds me of the opening of Beauty and the Beast....I once jokinglg refered to ShaNak as Burthal and the Fool.or something like that....You make their story sound like a pure fairy tale....Loved reading it....Thank you😊......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Omg this is beautiful
Thank You for writing it
it was a treat
i loved how portrayed shaan as a prince..he truly is...he is khanak's knight in shining armour but in his own way 😳
and you written khanak's haracter beautifully she is innocent..a dreamer and you have shown it wonderfully!
continue soon !
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Oh sathy(i guess it is ur real name)OMG A fairy tale indeed.It is very nice.do dontinue.
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oh wow, u turned their story into a fairytale, nd i luv fairytale's. plz do continue! its wonderfully written!

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OMG!! Did i just read that??😲 ,Simply superlative.!!👏👏👏.Do you know i just love Disney movies and i felt i was reading or rather watching Shan and Khanaks love story playing out infront of me in animation .Too Too good.!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanthya



Once upon a time, in a far away land lived a young,handsome , dashing prince,,interested in racing and gaming and merry making ...


...It was a marriage of necessity !!

...The Prince reluctantly set forth on his gold studded chariot
arraigned in the finest royal attire....

😆😆😆Sathya...the line arranged in his finest royal attire had me ROFL....as his "Adhe Kapre" were such a hit.....nah...and oh so royal....😆😆😆



...Just like the way bees are attracted to flowers, A pack of wolves too found this young flesh attractive, they assumed the mask of benign Puppies and came forward claiming to assist her in her search for her home....The young nubile Girl, still not yet out of the first bloom of youth, radiating a trust seen to be believable took them at their words and followed them weaving a tapestry of joyful re-union with her parents.....

...As is his wont..The prince ends up in the den of vice where he meets up a few promiscuous ladies ..The Promiscuous ladies look at him like starving kittens who have been offered a rich creamy milk..eager to savor this cream or at least have a lap..the Kitten's surround him...The Prince gets alarmed and petrified , he immediately decides that retreat is the best form of valor and decides to run ...
He runs straight into the arms of of the young,radiant , nubile,charming Widow......................His Consort,His Soul-Mate 😊

So true...his Soul Mate indeed....😃



Sathya darling...God it seems like I am always late...but dear...what brilliant writing indeed as always and what a way you truly have of taking us all in a dreamland...juts too good dear...and I really really can't wait for you to continue....you explained and described both of them so brillinatly and exactly ...to the Point...bravo girl...you truly rock....👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏
Oh above are the lines that really really stood put to me...thought the whole story was beautiful..and yes Shanak are truly cute fairly tale characters indeed...😆😆😆
Oh...so you like Krishna of Pratigya fame..or the drama in general????😃😆

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