FF-Changing Colour of Life Part 4-A up pg 10 28/8

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deepali

@-Deepali-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Excellent Written Krishna..Finaly I read the All Parts and All of them were Suppenb
and Beautiful.. Speechless now⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I am going to nostalgia after read it
the Way you wrote all parts and Storyline was amazing..Loves the Shaan and Khanak
feeling with each other
Soo Finaly Divorce was Happened..Eagrly wait for Next Track
Plezzz Update Soon🤗

PS: Pl give me PM Next Time If it will be Possible😳😳

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best
Aww ... Our ShanaK ...

Krishnaa Dee .. Beautifully penned down ...
I had hoped to seee something like this on the show too ...

But sadly Shantanu never found out the truth about Madhavi switching lettters and all that !!!!

Hope he finds out who has done the forgery !!!!!!

Lovely Krishnaa Dee ... Please continuee ... I know you will do full justice to it !
Muaaah .. love youuu !!!!!

Hello Shalu, hope you are well🤗...

Btw Shaan's signature wasn't forged...Madhavi caught him while he was in a rush, to leave for the airport...Burthal didn't check what he was signing...

See you later😃...

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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

kishan awesome update loved the letter of khanak vey much😊

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-Simple-

@-Simple-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Krishnaaa ! I LOVED it ! I swear I LOVE your writing ! You penned down everything beautifully ! I absolutely love how you express the emotions with such simplicity. I mean really ! You know throughout all of it whilst reading I was like 'Please dont finish, please dont finish, please dont finish' LOL ! Loved Dadi's part. Her knowing how Khanak loves Shaantanu and also how the feeling is mutual since she seems to study them both haha :D. I seriously loved the letters. You clearly portrayed the difference in the letters as to how it would look if Khanak wrote it as Shaans letter was too heartless for her :/. How did Madhavi know about the 'night ?'. Cant wait to read forward !

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-mesmerised-

@-mesmerised-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Wow Krishna i love this FF! ❤️

Could imagine every update i read as if it was playing out before my eyes...

Shanak being so far from each other yet feeling as if something was going terribly wrong... Shaan signing the divorce papers... Khanak's doubts about their night together... the misunderstanding... all of it was perfect! 👏

How will he find her now? Looking forward to the next part! 😊

P.S. I've been thinking about starting an FF for ages now and have some scenarios in mind which i've yet to put down on paper which you have also used! 😲 Well kind of. You know what they say about great minds and all... 😆 Just kidding... my minds not great but yours defo is for coming up with this! 😳

Edit: Ooops i forgot to mention... love the title of this FF and the fact that each chapter/update is named after a colour! 😊

Edited by -mesmerised- - 13 years ago

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Hey Krishna

Awesome…..A beautiful piece of writing.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Hey first of all thank u So much for replying to my past msg 😊& Yes Thanks a lot for Long Upate (as per u) 😉…Well mujhe to ye bhi chota laga, actually your writing is so beautiful that my reaction after reading your update was " Ekkksss….ye to khatam ho gaya,,,,Shit" Hmmm…… I wanted to know more….to read more.😊 Sorry As I am beshram Mujhe har update chota hi lagta hain.😳 & I am so gonna pester u for more & more updates…. so be ready for Torture 😈……* Sheepishly looks around ... and runs to hide somewhere...*

Wow loved the update.⭐️ & your writing is beautiful.👏 It takes me to another World where I can Witness their Presence.😍 It Just bcoz of ur detailing. U don't forget to mention Smallest of the Thing.👏Your writing makes it alive….Dadis thought after reading letter.😒 Frustrated Shaan reading letter again & again,👏 not understanding the reason,,,,,Finally he saw divorce papers.😲 Wow….fantastic I fell like I saw the update Frame by Frame playing infrount of me.👏 👍🏼

Loved the Start.👏 Dadi is all confused abut Khanak leaving the house.😕 She is not able to figure out the reason behind Khanak leaving house Suddenly.😲 She has seen love in their eyes for each other.😊 She wanted to talk to Shaan but he is asleep.😒 Dadi is confused as she has Witness their love….Their nok- Jhok & most importaintly Dheere Dheere badhati Nazadikiyaan between the two.😃 & now she is shocked abt Why shaan signed Divorce papers? 😲 😕Dadi is so sweet as she is the only one who gave the credit of change in Shaan to khanak.😳 Loved her thoughts when she truly declair Khanak responcible to transform Rackless shaan into Responcible Shaan,👏 Loved the letter written by Khanak. It was extremely touchy. U are awesome with the detailing …..Wow.👍🏼

Shaans expressions were Heart wrenching when he yell Khanaks name.😒 his confusion the pain in his eyes was so visible. Poor guy Is confused why he is facing this. what went wrong?😕 His dream his expressions ,,,,,,Awesome & wonderfully described. 👏 I had a lump in my throat when I read Shaans reaction on reading the letter.😭 U makes it all alive, 👏 Khanak said sorry for their togetherness.😒 & gave good wishes & blessing through her letter for Natasha & Shaans future.😔 Than Shaan finally read the Divorce papers, ufff I can so imagine his anger & pain. 😭 Shaan calls out every one at 3.00 am...& u stopped it. 😡 next update is gonna be khatarnaak. 😳

Waise Quick question,,,,,When is the next part coming????? 😳 please please please please please don't stop writing.😊 & yes thank u as expacted u are showing us the things which we wished a lot to happened in the Show,👍🏼 Khanak has learned nice English, She Wrote letter in English.(yiiipeee) Loved it When she gave credit to dadi for it. I immediately Remember the sence where Dadi gave her the nursory book & insisted to learn the English.😍 Frankly ur writing takes us to the most beautiful days of RBO. (I know I am saying this in every update but cant help ….Sorry😳) & extremely soory for the extra long reply I realized after writing it 😕 aur phir samaj nahi aaya kya edit karu so jeil lena..😳

Update was sacchi Beautifully written...Kudos !!!

Waiting for the next part……..Jaldi Jaldi Dena.🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Love

Pranjal.

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Update Kaha hain,,,,,,,,😳

Kahi ap monthly Installments ke bare mein to nahi soch rahe,,,,,,,,,😛 😉

Nahi Chalega ...Nahi Chalega...

Update Do...Update Do...

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Update kub mila ga Krishna Jiii?😃😃

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Krishna.. whenz the next update?? vanished once again??

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Hello darlings,This is just to say will be updating in a day or two as this week was really busy with family and stuff so hardly got time to sit and write...thus will update in a day or two...Thank you all for your patience...And no havn't disappeared...LOLLoveKrishna

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