hey all.,
after the hopeless episode on friday I thought i also should contribute to the thread what we want to see.
It is very lenghty.,but I used my brains and got these ideas.Please bear with me.
I hope some of u would like it.
I thought of scenes with less inteacting family members like Dadi-Mr.sunil.,Mr.sunil-khanak and ofcourse others before that immeidate changes I want are
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please stop showing khanak as an idiot.,ignorant of important simple things.She should be shown as a person who keeps on improving by constant learning.,
ofcourse without natasha'shelp.Ofcourse she can learn from dadi.,Mr.K.,or why even the servants.
But shaan.,khushboo.,madhvi are hopeless teachers.Akshay I do not know if he would teach because khushboo would object.
B.
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no natz-shaan romance.(even if natasha is helping shaan let her/him not touch each other).
.Shaan should be made to understand that he chose his own life over natasha's loveHe should immediately stop shouting at khanak.He should give minimum respect to the institution of marriage.
Now the other scenes in detail.
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SCENE 1
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.Daadi should have a hearty talk with son mr.Sunil.K.
She should insist him that he take charge of his disgusting family.,and not concentrate on business alone
.and that He should start acting tough with unruly members.,instead of being a mute spectator.
She should also tell him that she had knowingly taken the insults for the sake of his son's/his family's wellbeing and she is very disappointed with his cold shoulders towards her being
not respected.
Khanak was the only family member who has true love and respect for her,(remember tashu is not yet their own family).
If khanak is not there then she would have left for old age homelong back.,there by bringing shame to Mr.Sunil'sname.(That he could not even take care of his own mother despite being a successful businessman).Sunil starts thinking seriously on this
MEANWHILE
SCENE 2.
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Now Mr.sunil.K.becomes more affectionate to khanak.And khanak also begins to treat him in the same way(she is already doing it)like suraj'sdad asking him for things which she doesnot know.,nomatter how silly they are.Father-in-law daughter-in-law bond very easily.
SCENE3.
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Dadi should recollect old days to sunil when the father was alive.How she and papa had encouraged him when he started his new business and helped him in financial crisis by selling her jewels and his father by giving his entire savings.How father was happy when he propspered and how suddenly he died leaving her.,to his custody.
Now her only wish was to see sunil's family in order.
SCENE4
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Mr.Sunil should start bevaving in a tough way.First he should tell them that dadi hi ghar ka sub kuch hai.,and any disrespect towards her would not be tolerated at any cost.
When he sees madhavi'khushboo making fun of khanak or shaan yelling at her he should immediately ask them to stop.,and if they argue
he should tell them that if they are not behaving within limits then better they leave home.
(He cannot say this directly to khusboo but through akshay)
.And if akshay misbehaves then he should be reminded that all the property his mr.Sunil's self hard earned and even though akshay has worked for making it prosper Mr.sunil has got everyright to do whatver he wants with the property.
SCENE 5.
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dadi should tell khushboo to ask her sister leave Mr.K'shome.
She should tell her whether shaan likes khanak or not is different issue but He is a married man
and if natasha behaves likes this with shaan then people who see this would give their family a bad name.
IF khushboo argues if it is for six months then dadi should say let six months be over .,khanak leave.,shaan marry natasha then she is welcome to Mr.K's residence and now she should leave
Natasha leaves.,shaan is helpless to act.Khanak feels sorry.Others are stunned.
Dadi also puts condition that natasha should not speak to shantanu for six months in person
if she were to maay him
SCENE 6
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shaan concentrates more and more on official work.First he eagerly waits natasha's calls and vice versa.But slowly he becomes more and more involved in work.(Now since there is no madame chipku at home),he has lot of time to attend to his official duties.
He ignores even calls of natasha.,in his busy dutiesMeanwhile
He also commits mistakes in small matters in official work
in office and slowly he realises that everyone is not a born genius.,and people learn things through experience
.He truly feels sorry for the way he behaved with khanak
In his free time at home he sees that his father.,granny and khanak share a unique.,comfortable.,healthy bond where the love is unconditional/not pretending.
.He has never seen his father so happy with anyone like that,His father/grandma calling for khanak on each and everything.
He also starts longing for companionship and true love.
He starts talking to khanak in a very soft manner and soon realises that she is a very nice human being.He starts loving her more than natasha.Now he begins to feel the wife-husband 's emotional bonding.
Khanak slowly gets over suraj'smemories(may be upon dadi convincing her to forget that)
Khanak also starts to like/love shaan but always remembers the fact that she has to leave the house after six months and natasha/shaan love each other.
She feels that her love may become a hurdle in the happiness of shaan/natasha and so hides.,the love.
But nevertheless being in the same house shaan/khanak start bonding.,but none says explicitly.
Shaan starts thinking of taking back the divorce papers.But what would he tell natasha
Would she not feel bad.Was he not responsible for the false hope that he would marry her after khanak's divorce.He is highly confused
SCENE 7
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Mr.Agarwals'returns learns everything from khushboo.On hearing about natasha being asked to go backthe vows he would make natasha shaan's wife at any cost.He could not bear that.All because of khanak that is what khushboo says.
He starts moving things in the direction.,first getting khanak out of Mr.k's home
With that suspense element I take leave of you.
I hope u liked the scenes.If not please pardon me.,for taking your valuable time
Reg.,outfits I think In television serials after marriage they show women only in sarees.,or at the most salwar kameez.
Also I think wearing modern dresses alone does not make anyone change.And why should she be noticed by shaan merely because she wears a western dress.After that yells of shaan to her better he does not notice her for a while.
Thanks for your patience.
with love
shriya.
