Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 36
KRISH AT THREAT 22.12
The Post leap episodes have been very disappointing
Ranveer Singh surpasses Ranbir Kapoor
Awards Navri actually deserves
Mihir tulsi reunion bts??
New promo: Noyna sees Tulsi
Out now TMMTMTTM song - Saat Samundar Paar
MG-Ankhiyan Gulaab-(New Fiction)-21/12/25.
BRAINLESS KRISH 23.12
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New fiction coming soon
The Star With Sparkling Smile:: Aditya Srivastava AT # 26
Originally posted by: MusicalAiswarya
A small message to Vibhishna: I'm sorry I couldn't consult you first about posting this, but the deadline was just coming too quickly 😳 One more thing, all the credit goes to Vibhishna for this one! 👏This poem is also from Vibhishan's point of viewHere is Team Kumbhakarn's Entry:Brother . . .I remember the times we spent together when we walked the earth hand in hand,
The same arms that had held my hand fell before my eyes to the sand.
I remember the times when you looked after me with your lips curved in a smile,
The same eyes that saw you smile hath now seen you die.
I remember, brother, your brave laughter whenever you faced a foe,
I remember the strength and might when you dealt your enemies with a blow.
I remember, brother, your humility in spite of your gigantic frame,
I remember your thoughts of justice to be ever fair in game.
I remember, brother, your happy face when you brought home your blushing bride,
I remember the ecstatic smile when your sons were born - a father's pride.
I remember, brother, your hearty wishes when my marriage was done,
I remember your gay laughter when my daughter played with your son.
With deep sigh I turn away from the spot your carcass lay,
With my head towards heaven I sincerely pray,
"If only time could give us another chance to be together
I wish to be born again as your younger brother."
Originally posted by: Mallika113
Judges, this is our edited entry with a minor adjustment! Not a big change, the original one is fine too!
Originally posted by: -Mystery-
Hey guys,
You all are just fantastic! I am really happy with the kind of effort you put in all of these tasks, it shows!
Great job and keep it up! Your entries make me a lot more knowledgeable of Ramayan! So thank you so much for that!
Now time for the scores. The poems are judged to the best of my ability.
Team Indrajit - 8.5
Comments - I was reading the description of the Task and it wanted a very sentimental poem. Something that you make you cry. Although the poem is well written, I thought some lines brought in a bit of a humorous tangent. But most lines were emotional and really touched your heart. The poem was well written!
Team Kumbhakarn - 10
Comments - Superb!! This was a brilliant entry! I could really feel the pain of losing him. This was a brilliant attempt!
-Mahi
Originally posted by: -Mystery-
Hey guys,
You all are just fantastic! I am really happy with the kind of effort you put in all of these tasks, it shows!
Great job and keep it up! Your entries make me a lot more knowledgeable of Ramayan! So thank you so much for that!
Now time for the scores. The poems are judged to the best of my ability.
Team Indrajit - 8.5
Comments - I was reading the description of the Task and it wanted a very sentimental poem. Something that you make you cry. Although the poem is well written, I thought some lines brought in a bit of a humorous tangent. But most lines were emotional and really touched your heart. The poem was well written!
Team Kumbhakarn - 10
Comments - Superb!! This was a brilliant entry! I could really feel the pain of losing him. This was a brilliant attempt!
-Mahi
Originally posted by: JiyaPiya
My opinion/points
Team indrajit
I LOVED your entry.. it brought smile on my face.. beautifully rhymed
but like mahi said.. it was suppose to be a sentimental poem..
i loved the last stanza.. specially the rhyming words "yagna - yudhya"
i would like to give you 9/10
Team kumbhkarna
WOW, i m speechless.. Very touchy poem.. I thought this would be one of the best
way to describe the relationship between the two brothers.. every line
describes the feeling b/t those two. Its like the their journey of life.
it deserves 10/10
- w/ love
Jiya
Originally posted by: desichica
OH dear Lord...Chatter di...ur right, we have to do something bout pitashri Ravan know...cuz he is showing many evil roops now *frightened by Rajnishes pics for Ravan*...so we better be alert.....I'm wondering if Pitashri or Betashri will have Maha Yudh too now🤣🤣 🤣* Challenge to Rajnish* ...i'm on team IJ in this club..lolz!!!!!!
Anupamaa
