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Sujata

@rahuldravidfan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: darshana23
suji, agree with Beena di.. why pause there??? Plz plz plz continue

hehehe ... don't worry i'll make the next update a detailed update... 😃.. will do it soon...

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Wow! Finally, something Kanjali!

Thanks Suj for this new treat! The concept is great! Since both of them are dead on rejecting the other, the story's progression would be fantastic! I guess they might talk openly and find some way around! Do continue soon!

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Sujata

@rahuldravidfan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: tes_v1
Wow! Finally, something Kanjali!

Thanks Suj for this new treat! The concept is great! Since both of them are dead on rejecting the other, the story's progression would be fantastic! I guess they might talk openly and find some way around! Do continue soon!

thanks tes... i'm glad you liked it... i'm trying to show the love equation little different from YuRa... working on the next update only will try updating it soon😃...

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Sujata

@rahuldravidfan

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

I have decided to continue this FF.... a big thankyou to Darshu di for asking me to do it.... this is all i could think about now.... i finished writing it just now.... this time only Kanjali thoughts😉.... will surely bring about Kanjali meeting next time😉.... as i'm trying to bring it more humoruously.... hope you all like it....😃

Part 2

Kapil's thoughts –

The first thing that came to my mind was she was very beautiful….. I controlled my emotions and closed my mouth as I realized my jaws had practically dropped seeing her…. I refuse to be attracted by her beauty… i have come across many pretty girls without a single drop of intelligence in them … and if they have then all they know is to use them wrongly… I have seen my friends exhausting thei r money over such girls when there were so many other better things to do like looking at her…spending time with her so I can get to know her better, …………………………… what????what's happening to me….!!!! I can't believe it…. I just can't believe it… hey handsome hold on… catch a hold onto yourself…. You have got many better things to do like…………….. man she refuses to let me concentrate… well what was i thinking…?? I realized that i wasn't really successful in bringing back my concentration to other better things….

Although my mind refused to admit it… but I could feel a part in me separating within…. Boy !!!! She really succeeded in taking my heart away….!!!!!!!!! I wanted to slam my head across the wall for even thinking that way…. My mind had never been a part of such nonsense and will never be… but for the first time I felt guilty about thinking that way…. for even refusing to see her photo…. It was practically a routine for me… but today for the first time I sensed my heart missing something…. I realized that somehow I had to put a stop to this nonsense before it gets overboard and think of how I could reject her outright… I need to watch through eagle eyes… so I can find out some proof before I give a good reasoning to my father…. I knew my father wouldn't let me just say a simple No….he would want to know 1000 reasons before he is convinced that this girl isn't worthy of me…. And this time he was thoroughly convinced that this girl Anjali was perfect for me…. I could suddenly feel my heart aching for her and all my parts of my body joining hands and calling out her name again and again….

I realized this was getting harder… here I had to put on an act to convince my dad and my mind refused to be in place…. I somehow managed to don the detective hat…. And got ready to look for loopholes so I can get back to her…. Thinking about it made me lower my eyes…. But not before I crammed my head into the wall…. God never listened to me.... and today he actually listened to me.... I forgot to mention I was eyeing her from a long distance that I did not see the way ahead…. Luckily only my mother saw this…. Well that is what I thought…. Ouch that hurt…!! but nothing worst than my heart which was craving for her… My mom smiled as I gave sheepish smile and raced into the house….

Anjali's thoughts –

Wow… is this the guy who had come to see me…. He looked every bit of a prince dressed up for leisure…. I just couldn't take my eyes off him…. I felt a feeling of completeness when he stared at me… his dreamy eyes managed to keep my heart as captive…. I felt goosebumps running within as he gave those starry looks…. For the first time in my life I was blushing…. I didn't realize that my cousin was observing the variations on my face…. She was trying to break my gaze by placing her hand in between but I was totally unaware of that…. But in my condition… I had just put her hand away and continued staring at him… she realized this and started laughing loudly at my condition… but nothing seemed to break me from my concentration….

I realized I had never felt such feelings before…. I had been friends with many guys…. And even knew that some had crushes on me…. But never was I drawn to them in such a way…. I always had an ambition of becoming a fashion designer…. And this love and marriage put a big fullstop to my upcoming career…. That's basically the reason why I refused to be a part of such nonsense…. But this time everything seemed to go out of hand… If I had been the same Anjali who was for a few minutes back… who was strongly against marriages…. Then she is sure to have laughed aloud at his expense when she saw his jaws dropping … but this changed Anjali was getting a feeling of strange satisfaction… happiness at his behavior…. I did not even hear my aunt calling me… or shall I say screaming to inform me that they have arrived…. But everything fell on deaf ears….

I was totally disappointed when I saw him lower his eyes…. I wished it had continued further…. Again this changed Anjali was getting concerned about him hitting his head on the wall…. Well Kapil was wrong…. There was someone else too who saw all this… as she told herself… thoughts kept wandering in her mind… hope it didn't hurt much… hope it didn't bleed much… hey what's wrong with me??????....... hey girl catch onto yourself…. You sound flaky…. You weren't that way…. I heard my inner voice speak within…. He may be really handsome but what if he scores a big zero when it came to his real character…. But I could hear my heart trying to convince me that he wasn't that way….

hey girl remember what was your motive… you are here to disapprove him… and here you are craving for him… control your emotions…. Put an end to your so called newly found feelings…. I could feel my heart cursing my mind…. But somehow my mind got the better off me…. As I soon stabled myself…. And got ready to behave like a watch dog so I could gather as many evidences to reject him…. I came into my room…. And sat waiting for my cue… I decided to utilize my time productively so I could plot the way to know him…… to look for an opportunity so i could get those dreamy eyes stare at me again…. Hey hey….!!!! What's happening….!!!! Now what was I thinking…!!!! Before I could come back to my senses… I saw my aunt entering the room…. She asked me again to behave well as she escorted me down… i wanted to tell her that i knew the way for the hall and would come by myself.... when i had to again face a face-off with my mind telling me this is a matter of mannerisms... and i have to put a convincing act.....

Meanwhile Kapil was getting bored down…. Here everyone seemed to have a set of questions…. Or shall I say the same recycled ones…. I had just told everything about myself to her dad… when her uncle came up with the same questions…. and then her aunt... her grandmother... in short all...!!! I was getting bugged up…. But I had to be on the best of my behavior so my dad doesn't suspect me…. when i saw her coming down…!!!!!!!!

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Purva

@andromeda_kia

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Amazing part, Sujata!!

I had missed the 1st part as well & what fun it seems!!!

Kanjali in an arranged marriage is so very interesting!!! Kapil's "jaw dropping" on seeing Anjali was

quite funny & 😳

Equally cute was Anjali's reaction..............

I am waiting for them to find the things that they love about each other, rather than the loopholes they are expecting!!

Edited by andromeda_kia - 15 years ago

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Sujata

@rahuldravidfan

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: andromeda_kia
Amazing part, Sujata!!

I had missed the 1st part as well & what fun it seems!!!

Kanjali in an arranged marriage is so very interesting!!! Kapil's "jaw dropping" on seeing Anjali was

quite funny & 😳

Equally cute was Anjali's reaction..............

I am waiting for them to find the things that they love about each other, rather than the loopholes they are expecting!!

hehehe thanks a lot Purva.... i'm trying to build their thoughts.... as it will take a long time for them to realise that they are in love and want to be together not for their parents but for them...!!

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Juna04

@Juna04

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Sujji beautiful concept and it is always more interesting when love between couple develops after wedding. You are doing a very good job and it is very entertaining reading... Waiting for the next part...

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Faiza_sam

@Faiza_sam

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Excellent Kanjali FF sujji , looking frwrd to read that how they will find excuses to get rid of their thoughts 😃. Continue soon .

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Sujata

@rahuldravidfan

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Juna04
Sujji beautiful concept and it is always more interesting when love between couple develops after wedding. You are doing a very good job and it is very entertaining reading... Waiting for the next part...

Thanks a lot Juna di for appreciating and liking it.... i'm trying to do to build their thoughts... i hope i'm successful in bringing those feelings....

Edited by sujji0609 - 15 years ago

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Sujata

@rahuldravidfan

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam
Excellent Kanjali FF sujji , looking frwrd to read that how they will find excuses to get rid of their thoughts 😃. Continue soon .

Faizu... thanks a lot dear for appreciating it.... yup they will keep doing that but simultaneously they will start admiring each other... 😉😆