FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

it was great rosh.plzzzzzzzzz continue.looking forward 4 ur next part

Thank You Faiza! Iam glad that you liked!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Roshini......I love it.....Your own FF. Please do continue.

Thank You Bobbie dear for your encouragement and suppot! Iam very glad that you liked it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great work roshni and a suspense. looking forward to it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramas

great work roshni and a suspense. looking forward to it.

Thank You so much di.❤️...All the FF writers in this forum are my inspiration..🤗.
The next part will be coming up in few minutes!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 2

Rani replied "Nahi Chachi ab tak toh nahi aur batungi bhi nahi. Mujhme itni himaat nahi hai. Agar mein inhe bata doongi toh zaroor mana kar denge"

Chachi thinks for a while and says "Achcha tu fikhar mat kar, mei sab sambhloongi, tu bas apna khayal rakhna"

Sumitra comes in the meanwhile and asks " Kya baat ho rahi thi yahan?"

Chachi: Kuch nahi didi bas kuch advice de rahe the"

Everyone leaves and Chachi blesses Rani.

Rani goes to bed but doesn't get a wink of sleep. She keeps thinking and at dawn she falls asleep coming to conclusion of what she is going to after she wakes and hopes for the plan to work out.

Its six in the morning, Amma comes and wakes Rani up. She was startled as the time as come for her to execute the plan and depart. She goes to temple along with Munna and prays to god to give her strength. She advices Munna to take care of Dadi and Amma. Munna replies " Didi aap itni kyun Ghabra rahi hai? Aap toh sirf padayi karne sheher ja rahi hain aur chutti mein toh wapas aa hi jaayengi naa?" Rani was thinking deeply though the question looked simple to outsiders it had entirely different meaning for her, she starts walking fastly and just tells Munna "Munna tum bas Amma aur Dadi ka Khayal rakhna Nahi toh hum wapas nahi lautenge!" Munna gets very scared and accepts to do it was expected by her of him!

As soon as Rani reached home she was informed by Amma that personal servant of CR had already arrived and was expecting Rani to get ready in few minutes!

Rani got ready and was waiting with her luggage for the car, looking at family lovingly, It would be after a long gap she would be meeting them! In the Meanwhile the car arrives. The car slowly starts moving away leaving her village behind!

Everyone is trying hard to control their tears which were threatening to fall any time! The car disappears and Munna breaks down first as he has never stayed without his sister and Amma starts consoling!

Rani's eyes get moist thinking about her family and thinking that she had betrayed their trust but immediately she pulls her back from that thought because it was for their well being. She thinks how it all happened and why she had to go to the city!

FLASHBACK

It was the result day ,she had topped her school and was returning home to give everyone the happy news. She comes near the door and is about to knock when she overhears Amma and Dadi speaking.

Amma: Amma aaj Rani apni padayi poori kar rahi hai, aage kya karenge?

Dadi : Arre aage kya.. Hume toh usse zarror padaana hai taaki woh apni pita aur iss gaon ka naam roshan karen.

Amma: Haan hum toh jaanthe hain lekin uske padaayi ke paison ka intezaam kaise karenge?

Dadi : Jo baat humne pehli ki thi wohi hoga!

Amma: Aap woh khet bechne ki baat kar rahi hain naa. Hum bhi ussi ke bhare mein soch rahe the!

Dadi: Haan hum ussi ki baat kar rahe the. Sumithra tum itna sochti kyun ho? Hume sirf kuchi dino ke liye yeh sab mushkilon ka saamn karna padega. Jab Rani apni padaayi poora karegi toh phir baadme iss parivaar ko sambhalegi. Aur tab tak hume Munna ki padayi ko bhi rokhna hoga!

Rani was stunned hearing this as that was the only field which was their source of income and if the field was gone then how would they survive?

Amma: Amma aap fikhar mat kijiye hum aisa hi karenge. Hum abhi devarji se baat karenge aur khet bhejne ki taiyyari kar denge. Aur ek aur baat Amma, kisi bhi keemat par Rani ko yeh baat pata nahi chalna chahiye nahi toh woh mana kar degi!

Rani could not believe it and was overwhelmed by the trust and affection pouring on her! They were stopping her brother's studies just for her sake! She certainly could not let this happen and was soon going to find a solution!

Chacha and Chachi arrive as per Sumitra's request. They had also asked Munshiji to come but he was not present. They wait for him for a long time. Meanwhile Amma sends Munna and Rani out giving them some work. Rani asks Munna to go and play while she stands near the window to see what was happening!

Munshiji arrives and when asked why he was late he says " Deri ke liye kshama chahta hoon who Rajmehal mein achanak ek zaroori kam aagaya. CR ko jaldi hi ek naukrani ki zaroorat hain jo BR ki dekhbal kar sakti hain! Aur ascharya ki baat yeh hain ki unhe ek padi likhi gaanv ki ladki chahiye. Hum bas ussi kaam mein phas gaye the"
Rani looks up as though the solution has come to her. She thinks that she has to take up that work somehow as they would out of the financial crises being faced!

She feels the necessity to speak to her Chachi first. Her Chachi was a nice and was down to earth. She loved Rani very much and cared for her.

She seizes the opportunity the next day and speaks to her.

Rani: Chachi hum aapse kuch kehna...kuch maangna chahte hain.

Chachi :Haan Bolo beta kya baat hain?

Rani: Chachi, jis kaam ke baare mein Munshi ji baat kar rahe the?Woh CR ko ek padi likhi naukrani ki zaroorat hai...hume uss naukri dilwa dijiye. Aap Munshiji ko baata kar hume uss kaam ke liye bhej dijeye!!

Chachi took a little time for Rani's words to sink in her ears, She was just staring at her!

PS: Thanks for your support and encouragement.😃 I hope you like this part! 😳Please do comment.😳

Please do ignore the typos! 😳
Edited by Roshni. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Like it very much...You are doing great. Please continue.. 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great chachi aur sidhi chalo achacha hai phir rani ton rani hi hai. she will do anything for her family. great part.
Edited by ramas - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow Roshni, why you were afraid of writting dear??? I am surely hooked up.... but with a promise no cliff hanger plz........... I am waiting for next part......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Rosh, finally got a chance to have a read and I really like. I especially like that this time, Rani's chachi is a nice person!

Looking forward to next part.

Edited by Nisha_07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
wow roshni great to see that you have started a FF too you have very great ideas. i really liked the two parts. so far going good do keep it up 😃👍🏼👏

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