FF: A CINDERELLA STORY: (Chp.57; pg113) Dec 10th - Page 9

Tia, That is cold.....why did you have to stop at this point..........atleast give Yudi time to digest the information. Let him find out how Rani knows that she loves him. Has she seen him at all? But I enjoyed the suspense you have created now........

Originally posted by: sakuraa

OMG!! No and u all call me cruel for ending my FF a critical point....i've never called u cruel....😕Tia u cant do this to me...he just found out about her...come back and write now!! heheehe.....😆 m already doin it.... hope to post soon....😉

and btw what is it with u, raksha di and beena di and snakes... well m still reading beena di's FF, n hvn't cm across the snake, whereas Raksha di's, i've come across dat..... but cudn't help it as i already had this idea in mind... u see in a village, snakes are quite common....😉 they aren't a rare commodity.....😆 maybe I should introduce one in mine...hmmm depends on ur plot..... u can do if u wish, as it is te idea is not copyrighted or patented......😆

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Tia, That is cold.....why did you have to stop at this point..........HEHEHE.....😆atleast give Yudi time to digest the information. Let him find out how Rani knows that she loves him. Has she seen him at all? nopes, she hasn't, i think i've mentioned dat already?😉 But I enjoyed the suspense you have created now........ thank u very much.....😊

Very nice👏👏👏 Please post soon... m working on it.....😍m working on it.....

Tia, That is cold.....why did you have to stop at this point......... hehehe.....😆 .atleast give Yudi time to digest the information. Let him find out how Rani knows that she loves him. Has she seen him at all? no she hasn't, but i think i clearly stated dat? But I enjoyed the suspense you have created now........ thank u....😆

Tia i really enjoyed reading this part....and poor Yudi got bitten as soon as he realised the girl loves him uh....am sure Rani will take good care of him. Now I am looking forward to how she saves yudi!! Great story !!! keep it up and do update soon..........👏