FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 49

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Ladies!! So this part isn't too long but it's a lil more "racy" than usual...thats what I think, I may be wrong...well anyways as usual ignore any typo's and plz let me know what you thought! I hope u like it!

WARNING: This part WILL make u day dream, float, go to cloud 9, faint, increase your heart rate, talk incoherently and MORE. So I suggest you read this privately and NOT at work. I have a feeling you will ignore my advice but don't say I didn't warn you. 😆😉

Part 22

The he placed a kiss on her shoulder. Rani's hand lost its grip on the sword and it fell it the ground as Yudi turned Rani around to face him. She refused to look up at him but he placed a finger under her chin to lift her face up.

Her eyes fluttered shut and Yudi smiled in response, moving his fingers up from her chin to trace her jaw line, stopping to tuck a stray strand of hair behind her ear and moving them down her neck. Rani titled her head slightly exposing her neck to him and his fingers came to a stop, gently cupping the back of her neck, his thumb caressing her pulse point, feeling her heart beat a little faster at his soft touch. He leaned down and placed a gentle kiss there before stepping away from her. Rani feeling the loss of his warmth, opened her eyes slowly gazing into his that held so much love in them that she couldn't stop herself from stepping forward. She placed a hand on his cheek and reaching up on her tip toes she placed a gentle kiss on his lips, her lips lingering against his for a few moments before she moved away, her thumb caressing his cheek lightly. Yudi placed and hand on hers and turned his head to place a kiss on her palm before letting it go and moving away from her.

Rani watched confused as he walked away from her, her gaze tracing the smooth skin and angular lines of his back, admiring the way his muscles moved as he bent down to pick up the sword she had given him from where she had dropped it and then watched as his arms flexed as he swung it around a few times before placing it back in it's sheath. He turned and smirked at her, noticing the way her gaze moved from his face to his chest before returning to his face once again. Rani saw his smirk and just smiled right back at him making his smile grow wider. He placed the sword on to the couch and walked up to Rani quickly surprising her slightly when he picked her up and started to walk towards their bedroom. Rani's hand rested on his bare chest, her fingers slightly caressing the smooth skin sending shivers down his spine and his pace quickened sligthtly.

Rani absently continued her caresses, not know the effect they had on him as she admired the smoothness of his skin which was warm against her fingertips. She placed her palm flat against his chest, feeling his heart beat strong and quick. Unable to help herself, she turned her head and pressed a gentle kiss where his heart was, as if marking what was hers unconditionally.

Yudi surprised look down at her and she stared up at him, the desire on both their gazes making their hearts race as their surroundings faded away. Yudi's feet still led him forward and his didn't notice the bed in front of him until his knees hit the edge, making him fall onto it and trapping Rani under him.

Yudi moved his hand and placed it on her knee for a moment before moving it slowly up the side of her leg as he gazed unwaveringly into her eyes. His hand come to a stop at her waist and stayed there, caressing the skin left bare above her sari for a moment before grasping her sari in his hand a tugging it loose, his eyes moving away from her eyes admiring the gentle flush of her cheeks. He heard her breath hitch and pulled away from her slightly to pull her pallu away from her.

Rani unable to stand the heat in his gaze turned away shyly and Yudi's gaze immediately moved to her exposed back, his eyes tracing the pattern made by the thin dor that crisscrossed her back leaving most of it bare until they reached the tie that held them together. He placed his palm at the base of her back and moved it up slowly and tugged at the tie before moving his hand up futhur pulling at the dor to loosen it.

Rani turned, trapping his hand under her, forcing him to move closer and he leaned down as a wind blew through the open window making the curtains surrounding the bed dance with it throughout the night.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow!! Thud!! flying on cloud nine......Thanks for the warning!! but I ignored your warning and read it at work anyway. After that I could not work.....had a smile on my face which made my coworker wonder.
It was amazing and I thoroughly enjoyed this part. Thank you!!! will wait for next posting.
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Posted: 16 years ago
girl, you write warning about fainting down??? I am dead for sure..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
Simra...🤗Beautifully written dear!!!! Is there anything beyond cloud 9??? well i'm there...dont bother calling me back until you update the next part!!!!
I'm literally floating!!!!! I'll tell you what whenever i see anything on tv...i think why cant they picturise Simra's FF...OMG!!!! Its so romantic!!!!! And i forget what i'm watching and start thinking abt your FF!!!!! your FF has that effect on me!!!!!
hats off to you.....Outstanding part!!!!!.....Yudi's bare chest!!!( kitne din ho gaye dekhne ko mila hi nahi...meri aankhe taras rahi hain!!!!!!😉)
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Posted: 16 years ago
what r u trying to do to me? kill me?

Wow.. you are soooooooooooooooooooooooo good. i could picture the whole scene in front of me.😳

why can't they show some of this on the show? how romantic! Rani kissing Yudi and that too on the lips?😲
i yet have to see Rani kissing Yudi in show😉

well can't think of anything else to write right now since i am on cloud 9 or any other clouds there may be😊
will edit my post later

Thanks🤗
😍😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwww
simra i loved it!!!! im loving the new and slightly bolder rani in ur ff...
this is one hell of a romantic honeymoon for them...SO unlike the one they had in the serial :@
it was written beautifully....thanks!! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was amazing di loved it i'm beyond all your warnings god knows were i am
TSharan thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago

WOW!!! Simra, I have run out of words, so lets just work with icons..

🤗 😍
Your "racy" update had my heart racing for sure.....when's next update hun????
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Posted: 16 years ago
Very very nice Simra, very nice indeed. 😛

I heeded the warning. And I'm glad I did. This is definitely one to read once at home!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Wow!! Thanks! 😳 Thud!! flying on cloud nine......Thanks for the warning!! but I ignored your warning and read it at work anyway. ur welcome...😉 not that u followed it!! 😆😆 After that I could not work.....had a smile on my face which made my coworker wonder. LMAO!! I am sure if I was ur coworker, I would have wondered too!!

It was amazing and I thoroughly enjoyed this part. Thanks Hun!! 🤗 Thank you!!! will wait for next posting. ur welcome!!! and I'll try not to make u wait too long!

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