FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 41

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jyk88

What? How did I...? How could I...? What? LOL

This is exactly why I told you to notify me when you update. It's a long way from beyond cloud 9 and you lappie you know. Can't always keep checking to see if you've finally clicked on 'Post'...got all the birds and bees to twitter and buzz with.

Oops!!! SORRY!!! I'll msg u next time! Promise!!!!! BTW just a heads up this one will probably be updated tmr along with Rishtay. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
Honestly, I didn't bother checking if you've updated, knew you had exams etc. Now with you saying that the next update will be delayed due to exams...pfft! Ever heard of the story 'The boy who cried wolf'?

aww I did have exams but my first two were easy so I had time to type up parts in between but the one today is going to murder me...I know it...and the ones next week I think I may not even watch the episodes...I know, I know, I always say I wont update and do but what can I do...It's good stress relief!!! πŸ˜•πŸ˜³ and don't complain πŸ˜›πŸ˜› u know u love it when I update when I say I might not be able to!
However, going on holiday is a different matter. You ain't going nowhere without giving me an exclusive peek into the next part Missy. And if you do have to go then your lappie better be stuck to you like a Siamese Twin!

Uhhhhh...I dont know if I can take my lap top...I have no idea where they are taking us...but I'll update before I go...howz that?
Now I shall go back to twittering and buzzing (some call it discussing)...they understand my Simra FF euphoria.

LOL...you do that!
Oh, and all the best with your exams! πŸ˜ƒ

Thanks Hun!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sakuraa

I know, I know, I always say I wont update and do but what can I do...It's good stress relief!!! πŸ˜•πŸ˜³ and don't complain πŸ˜›πŸ˜› u know u love it when I update when I say I might not be able to!

You are so right Simra!!! We love your update surprises hun! πŸ˜ƒ Hope you got the hint! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ And Good luck for your exams!!!
Edited by sharan99 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Outstanding update once again Simra! sorry for late reply had a really busy week just about watched episodes and wrote my essays!

But your amazing what more can i say, dying for the next part! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sapna99

Outstanding update once again Simra! sorry for late reply had a really busy week just about watched episodes and wrote my essays! Thanks Sapna!!! No worries about the late reply!! I completely understand because my only watching episode and doing assignments week is coming up too!!! 😭😭😭

But your amazing what more can i say, dying for the next part! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Thanks!! I'll try to get it up for tmr! πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 16 years ago


πŸ˜ƒ Hopefully you wont have to wait much, only till tmr...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sharan99

You are so right Simra!!! We love your update surprises hun! πŸ˜ƒ Hope you got the hint! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ And Good luck for your exams!!!



Hint came through loud and clear and the next update will be tmr πŸ˜†πŸ˜† and thanks for the luck! I'll need it!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Ola Ladies!!! Here is the next part! It's not too long but it's all I had time for. You know I was going back and rereading parts for this FF and I swear I blushed and couldn't believe what I had written. Then as I was writing this part I was blushing even more!! I thought you all may get a little laugh at my silliness. Anways enjoy, let me know what you thought and ignore any typos as usual!!

WARNING: All regular symptoms such as day dreaming, a loss of coordination, visits to cloud 9 and more will occur.

Part 20

Rani closed her eyes when she felt his lips on her forehead and tried to control the butterflies in her stomach. She tried to remember that she still had to give Yudi the other parts of his surprise but his closeness and touch was causing all thoughts to fly away. She finally composed herself enough to pull away.

Yudi felt Rani pull away and tried to pull her back but she said, "Kuwarji, Chordiye na. Hum aapkay liye kuch lay kar aaye hain." Yudi didn't want to let her go but a part of him was curious. He let Rani go but stood close to her as she removed the cloth unveiling her first attempt at making moong ka halwa. Yudi seeing it was genuinely surprised. After having it for the first time when he was living in the village he had immediately loved it but had never told anyone.

Rani turned to look at him wringing her hands together wondering if he liked his surprise. His silence was worrying her so she started to ramble nervously.

"Kuwarji, woh humnay dekha tha gaon mein kay aapko moong ka halwa pasand hai. Is liye hum nay amma say banana sikh liya. Humnay pehli baar banaya hai aur pata nahin kaisa bana hoga. Shaiyad aapko pasand nahin aaye aur shaiyad humnay ghalat samaj liya ho aur aapko moong ka halwa pasand hi nahin hai. Aur…"

Yudi gently pressed his fingers to her lips stopping her rambling and placing his hands on her shoulders pulled her into a hug making her gasp in shock. His arms tightened around her as hers went around him. Hearing her talk about how she had noticed that he liked moong ka halwa and that she had taken the time to learn to make it, made his heart swell with love for her. He felt blessed to have a wife like her. He knew that no matter what the halwa tasted like, he would love it because she had made it for him. He held on to her for a little while longer before pulling away and pressing his lips to her forehead letting them linger. He leaned his forehead against hers and simply said, "Dhaniyawad Rani." He gazed at her with such love in his eyes that she blushed prettily and lowered her gaze slightly before looking up and saying, "Kis baat ka, Kuwarji? Hum toh bas aapko khush karna chahtay thay."

Yudi smiled at her and pressing his lips to her cheek whispered in her ear, "Dhaniyawad humara baray mein itna sooch nay kay liye." His lips brushed her ear and Rani felt her knees grow weak. She moved her hands to his shoulders, gripping them tightly. She whispered, "Kuwarji, halwa…"

Yudi could see the effect he had on her and whispered in a sulty voice in her ear, "Theek hai laikin hume baad mein aapka sai say shukriya karnay ko yaad zaroor dilaiyay ga," before pulling away from her.

Rani whose stomach seemed to be filled with butterflies and heart was beating faster than it ever had closed her eyes and took a moment to compose herself. She opened her eyes to see Yudi staring at her with a look that sent shivers down her back and she turned away unable to meet his gaze. She started to serve the halwa only to feel Yudi stand right behind her. He grasped her hand with the spoon in it in his moving it with hers only letting it go once she was done serving the halwa. She picked up the plate and turned to give it to him only to be trapped by his arms, which were holding onto the table, around her.

Yudi stepped a little closer to Rani making her back into the table and he moved his hands to her waist gently caressing her soft skin with his thumbs before lifting her up on to table and making her sit on the edge.

Rani held onto the plate in her hands letting out a little gasp when his hands touched her bare skin and then another when he lifted her up to sit on the table. She stared at the plate in her hands unable to look at him, afraid that if she did all coherent thoughts would leave her head and she would do something embarrassing.

Yudi looked down at Rani smirking mischeviously and then took the spoon from the plate in her hands and filled it up. Rani still refused to look at him and he gently placed the spoon at her lips making her glance up at him and shake her head. She took the spoon from him and brought it to his lips and he took a bite, letting the sweetness of the halwa melt on his tongue. He took the spoon from Rani and fed her a little before setting the plate and spoon aside. He moved closer to Rani until his legs were brushing her knees and leaning down whispered in her ear, "Rani, halwa bohot acha tha laikin hum aik cheez jaantay hain joh halway say bhi zyaada meethi hai." Rani pulled back and gave him a questioning look and he answered by brushing his fingers along her cheeks to her lips. Rani blushed and got off the table to get away from him but he grabbed her hand and pulled her to him making her fall onto his chest. Her hands grapsed his shirt as he lifted her chin and holding it up with his fingers leaned down slowly. Both of their breaths grew faster and mingled as their lips were millimeters apart. Rani's eyes fluttered shut in anticipation and her lips parted slightly mesmerizing Yudi whose eyes roamed her face before his lips met hers. He could taste the sweetness of the halwa on her lips and his arms went around her. One hand trailing up and down her almost bare back playing with the many ties that crisscrossed it and the other on the nape of her neck intertwining with her hair.

The moment Yudi's lips touched Rani's her heart seemed to have sped up even more and it seemed as though time was standing still. Her hand holding onto his shirt gripped it tighter and she could see sparks of light behind her closed eyelids.

Their lips moved against each others before Yudi pulled away. They stared at each other and Yudi quickly pressed his lips against hers quickly once and then twice before pulling her into a tight hug.

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Posted: 16 years ago
absolutely perfect simra!!!! wooo! yura romance overload!!!
oooo u said this:
'She tried to remember that she still had to give Yudi the other parts of his surprise '
does that mean that this halwa was only one part and there will be even more surprises(followed by yudis oh so passionate ways of sayin thanku???)?? :P
ps. u didnt warn us that this part was gonna be SOOOOOO sweet πŸ˜› methinks I've started developed diabetes just reading it!!!! hahahahaha!
bt seriously...THANKUUUUU hun!!!! πŸ€—and mwah! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
THUD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ye kya kar diya apne?

I am on cloud 9.

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The moment Yudi's lips touched Rani's her heart seemed to have sped up even more and it seemed as though time was standing still.☺️ Her hand holding onto his shirt gripped it tighter and she could see sparks of light behind her closed eyelids. 😍
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzybabes7

absolutely perfect simra!!!! wooo! yura romance overload!!! Thanks Hun!! but I am sure u dont mind the overload πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

oooo u said this:
'She tried to remember that she still had to give Yudi the other parts of his surprise '
does that mean that this halwa was only one part and there will be even more surprises(followed by yudis oh so passionate ways of sayin thanku???)?? :P I see you caught that!! Actually the answer is yes!!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
ps. u didnt warn us that this part was gonna be SOOOOOO sweet πŸ˜› methinks I've started developed diabetes just reading it!!!! hahahahaha! hahaha...oops...I didnt know...I'll add it on next time...πŸ˜‰
bt seriously...THANKUUUUU hun!!!! πŸ€—and mwah! xx ur very welcome!! πŸ€— ❀️

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