Something will never change. (Krishna Balram os)

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Aarti

@TheSilverDoe

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Wow! This is brilliant! Loved it to the core!

Thank u so much😳

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A-A-S

@A-A-S

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Very nice story, AartI! Well written, and very easy to picture this happening as I read it! Good work! 👏⭐️😊

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Aarti

@TheSilverDoe

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: A-A-S
Very nice story, AartI! Well written, and very easy to picture this happening as I read it! Good work! 👏⭐️😊

Thank u😳

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

THE DUO! <3

Reserved for now. (Will Unres by tonight, mostly.)

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Aarti

@TheSilverDoe

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Aapke unres ki pratiksha rahegi KrishnaPriyaa ji 😃

Edited by Aarti_ - 6 years ago

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Mahi-Ve-108

@Mahi-Ve-108

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Posted: 6 years ago

#16

A bit late (as usual) but better late than never. I read this the day you first posted but was busy with school so didn't have time to login and comment.

Just wanted to say it is a beautiful story. I could see it happening. The details and the bond were so sweet. I don't know if I can hope for the writers to do it like this but wish it will reach something just a good. If it isn't there is always this story. I do hope to read more from you keep writing. 😆

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Damnnn!!!!!!! My waterballs 😭 😭 !

This was freaking awesome to be honest ❤️ !

I can write praises and praises for this OS ☺️🤪!

This was so beautifully written that it made me emotional, Iam a huge fan of Ram-Lakshman and Dau-Kanha and this is something I can read it many times [actually bookmarked😆😉]❤️ ⭐️.

Kanha doesn't make up stories, gopis must be secretly admiring him as well as he is mighty as well as handsome, you know 😎 😆.

Imagine the reaction of Yashoda after knowing the truth, I can't imagine her pain 😭 and you highlighted the concern sooo well ❤️.

Last scene was the best ❤️ 😭, I love KaRam😭 ❤️, I can actually visualise your story 👏 ⭐️ It actually also reminded me of JSK's first KaRam scene ❤️. Very goood ❤️.

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Aarti

@TheSilverDoe

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: RadhaKrishna_19
Damnnn!!!!!!! My waterballs 😭 😭 !
This was freaking awesome to be honest ❤️ !

I can write praises and praises for this OS ☺️🤪!

This was so beautifully written that it made me emotional, Iam a huge fan of Ram-Lakshman and Dau-Kanha and this is something I can read it many times [actually bookmarked😆😉]❤️ ⭐️.

Kanha doesn't make up stories, gopis must be secretly admiring him as well as he is mighty as well as handsome, you know 😎 😆.

Imagine the reaction of Yashoda after knowing the truth, I can't imagine her pain 😭 and you highlighted the concern sooo well ❤️.

Last scene was the best ❤️ 😭, I love KaRam😭 ❤️, I can actually visualise your story 👏 ⭐️ It actually also reminded me of JSK's first KaRam scene ❤️. Very goood ❤️.

Underlined - OMG thank you.

Bold - Kanha isn't making up stories, Dau is just denying it😛

Have any of you got the reference of name Damini? 😆

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
THE DUO! <3
Reserved for now. (Will Unres by tonight, mostly.)

This is not tonight. Sorry about that *sheepish*

I LOVED THIS OS! The bond between Krishna and Dau has been shown so beautifully ❤️ My favourite line was, "You have taken vow to always worry about me."

That is so so true! Dau always worries about Kanha, Kanha always worries about Dau- both protect and love each other, a bond of Eternity!

Do write more and more!

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Aarti

@TheSilverDoe

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

This is not tonight. Sorry about that *sheepish*
I LOVED THIS OS! The bond between Krishna and Dau has been shown so beautifully ❤️ My favourite line was, "You have taken vow to always worry about me."
That is so so true! Dau always worries about Kanha, Kanha always worries about Dau- both protect and love each other, a bond of Eternity!

Do write more and more!

Thank you so much dear🤗

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