Ajab si prem kahaani- jazzveer - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@nicita aww thnx alot! I hope that they all like it! Glad u liked it!
No i dnt watch it anymore ... But ofc I will visit ur AT ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@cute sukirti ...thnk u sooo much! I'm sooo glad u loved it! Yea I think it should b slow and steady so it seems real... Yea agree. In the show jazz is falling for him fully ... But ranveer . He has a goal ... But I'm actually glad that they showed him greedy at first so when he really falls for jazz it gonna b awesome... I mean that moment of realization..

@taahir thank u ... Thank u soo much! Happy u liked it! Yea sure I will just buddy me .. I have skool todaii and tomorrow so I will probably post it tomorrow nite...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys! I'm sooo sorry for not updating from such a long time... But it's a new grade soo it's alot of work... But I have a holiday for 4 days so I'll try and post alot!
Please comment!



Chapter 6 - DAY 1 of Ranveer's Mission

The next morning when jazz woke up she was about to get up from the bed when her foot ached... She then recalled the events from yesterdaii... She was trying to get up and freshen up ... When there was a knock on her door... And she got up slowly and made her way to the door and opened it and saw Ranveer standing there ... He asked her if she was better... And she gave him a weak nod... He was about to leave and she was about to close the door when she turned and slipped on one of her skirts on the floor.. She screamed "AHHH!!" Ranveer immediately turned and caught her by her waist... She slowly opened her eyes and saw that she wasn't on the ground but in midair .. In his arms... She looked at him and he looked at her... She tried holding his hand and getting up... Only to slip again ... Into his arms.. Again... Then ranveer said "tu kitni sayani hai.." ( sarcastically) "Ek minute ruk.." and he lifted her and carriedher into the room...he slowly put her on the bed and asked her " tujhe aur kuch chahiye? ... Main madat karu Teri? "
" voh... Actually main bathroom jaa rahi thi..." she said. There was an awkward silence considering how he had asked her if she needed any help... He broke the silence saying " ruk main abhi aata hoon." She was kindnof shocked as to how he would help her ... then she saw him come back with a walker ... She couldn't help but smile a little inside ... He gave it to her and she stood up slowly and made her way to the bathroom. He was waiting in the balcony until she came out ... Then she came out in a small blue dress with black leggings ... He heard her and went back Into the room ... She went to her dresser to put on her makeup and accessories and then suddenly a cool gust of wind passed and she realized that her zipper on her back wasnt zipped up...(as we all know jazz isn't the shy type of girl so even THIS wasn't a big deal to her) then she tried to zip it but her hand wasn't reaching all the way and ranveer saw her struggling with it .. But he didn't know wat to do .. Should he help her ..? Or would that b...? His thoughts were interrupted when she shouted at him.. " meri ankle mein Itna dard hai ... Aur main yahan struggle kar rahi hoon iske saath aur tum meri madat nahi kar sakte!!??"Ranveer was kinda shocked but after like 5 seconds he realized that it was JAZZ ... She isn't shy... Cuz she's JAZZ ... So He went anyways to her and helped her when his finger mistakenly touched her bare back ... Her eyes shot up to him in the mirror ... And his too... EYELOCK... then after like 10 seconds ranveer felt the zip on his finger and remembered whT he was doing so he pulled it up fully and left saying " main neeche hi hoon kuch chahiye toh mujhe iss # par phone karna.. 245-7890 " and he left... Jazz laughed at his behaviour shouting " THANKS FOR THE ZIPPER ! " to him as he left... She thought " the day when someone can make JAZZ shy... Us din main us insaan ko maanjaungi... Lekin iss duniya main aisa koi paida nahi huwa hai.." and she went into her bed and started texting her friends...

Precap: jazz falls on top of ranveer .. ( eyelock)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great Story. Its Very Good. Love Jazzveer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my god.
Its really awesome.
Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow I read chapter 1 and 2 most beautiful awaiting your next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ThaNks everyone For ur comments and support... Can u all do me a favor Please? If possible can u please let others know about my ff... I would really like it if other jazzveer fans who r crazy about them just as I am will get the chance to entertain themselves... Please If possible ... Thanks :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow,anjali great effort...even i am huge fan of jazzbeer...they are just awesome togather.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjaliSharma

ThaNks everyone For ur comments and support... Can u all do me a favor Please? If possible can u please let others know about my ff... I would really like it if other jazzveer fans who r crazy about them just as I am will get the chance to entertain themselves... Please If possible ... Thanks :)


surely i will do it but you pls continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ANJALI...its mindblowing,i hope this track will start soon & ranbeer will realize jazzs love...

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