||Jab Tak Hai Jaan|| An AsYa and AyRa FF *Ch 1 - PG 2* (PMs Later) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: AsadZoya1708

OMG!!!

A new story on AsYa & AyRa...
Loved it...
It's amazing...
Please continue soon..
Do pm when you update...

Yes it's amazing
Yay! Updated .
Thanks TM for PM.
Loved loved loved it!!!

The emotions have been portrayed so well.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: SnehaDoll

Yes it's amazing
Yay! Updated .
Thanks TM for PM.
Loved loved loved it!!!

The emotions have been portrayed so well.


Thank you so much for your appreciation🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Seems really interesting
please continue it
and do not forget to pm 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: CreativeByBirth

Seems really interesting

please continue it
and do not forget to pm 😃


Thank you sooo much🤗
Will surely PM you.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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-Siddiqui Bunglow-

The sun shone brightly as it rose to greet the world with its warmth. When everything seemed to spring to life at the touch of sunlight, a girl was fast asleep in her bedroom, dreaming of a far away world, where she lived happily ever after with her prince charming.

Splash! She woke up with a start as she felt the splash of water against her, waking her up from her beauty sleep. Fuming, she pushed aside her now wet blanket to take a look at the culprit who stood laughing with a bucket in her hand.

"Humeira?!" she yelled, as she got off her bed and lunged forward at her sister, who neatly dodged her, still laughing. "Humeira! Maine kitni baar kaha hai ki aise mat karo?! Pyaar se nahi utha sakti thi?" she asked her little sister Humeira, who couldn't stop laughing at the sick joke.

"Zoya Aapi! Agar main pyaar se uthne ke liye kehti, toh aap nahi maante. Isi liye aisa karna pada. Ab jaldi tayyar ho jau. Abbu intezar kar rahe hain." said Humeira, as she walked out of the room, leaving a fuming Zoya behind.

This was a daily routine at the Siddique Bunglow, and everybody were used to shouts and screams of Zoya as she woke up grumbling every day, with Humeira doing everything possible to fuel her anger. The typical sisters.

"Good morning Abbu! Good morning Ammi! yelled Zoya, as she ran down the stairs, kissing her father Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui, and her stepmother Raziya Siddiqui, before she sat down for breakfast. Humeira ran right after her to kiss her mother and father on the cheek before she took her place next to Zoya.

Raziya and Gaffur smiled at their children's antics. Zoya had lost her mother when she was a 4 year old, after which Gaffur and Raziya had taken her into their care. Nobody knew how Zoya found her way to the Siddiquis, but she became their life in no time. Humeira and Zoya also became inseparable in no time.

"Zoya, Humeira... hume aapse baat karni hai. said Gaffur, as he pulled his chair closer to theirs. Zoya and Humeira straightened themselves at the sound of his voice, which meant that a serious topic was coming up.

"Hamara ek khaas dost hai. Unka ek beta hai, jiska aaj engagement hone waala hai, aur hum sabko jaana hai. Kisi ko bhi mana nahi karni chahiye. said Gaffur, his voice extremely serious.

"Par Abbu! yelled both Zoya and Humeira together.

"Par war kuch nahi. Jaake tayyar ho jaayiye aap. Gaffur silenced their argument before they could even speak.

-*-

-Khan Mansion-

The Khan Mansion was bustling with energy that morning. A woman bustled around the house, barking orders to her servants. Her husband stood in the corner of the house, watching her with a smile on his face as she walked towards him.

"Rashid! Aap idhar khade ho! Kitna saara kaam baaki hai? Aapke best friend aapke liye intezaar kar rahe honge! Aur aap idhar khade hokar hans rahe ho! Not fair. grumbled the woman as she nudged her husband.

"Arre Dilshad Begum. Relax! Engagement ke liye 4 ghante baaki hai. Aap baithiye pehle. Baaki baad mein dekhte hain. Rashid made Dilshad sit next to him, asking her to relax.

"Ab yeh bacche kahan hai? asked Dilshad, looking exasperated to the point that she might burst.

"Good morning Ammi. came the deep voice of a man who wore a crisp 3-piece suit, his hair neatly set, giving him that no-nonsense look.

"Asad! Ab kahan jaa rahe ho tum? asked Dilshad, looking bewildered as her son picked up his car key.

"Ammi, who koi urgent kaam aa gaya hai. Main 1 gante mein waapas aaunga. said the man as he walked towards the door.

"Asad! Aaj bhi kaam? Tumhare liye weekend naam ki koi din hona bhi waste hai. I'm so disappointed. Dilshad looked at her eldest son in despair.

Asad walked to his mother and kissed her forehead. "Ammi, agar urgent kaam nahi hota toh, I would have stayed back. I promise ki main ek ghante se zyada nahi lunga.

Dilshad smiled at her son and hugged him. "Theek hai, ab jaldi aaja.

Asad bid farewell to his mom and dad as he walked out for the house with his files. Dilshad suddenly shrieked as she felt someone hug her from behind.

"Ya Allah! Ayaan tum?! Kitne baar kaha hai ki aise mat karo! scolded Dilshad as she turned back to look at Ayaan, her younger son.

"Arre Dillu darling! Yeh toh mera signature hug hai. Ek din, issi hug ke wajah se ek khoobsurat ladki ko mujhse pyaar hoga. said Ayaan, grabbing a parantha from the table and walking towards the TV.

"Ayaan. Asad 1 ghante mein aayega. Uske aane ke baad, dono jaakar tayyar ho jau. We have to head to the engagement party. said Rashid, walking towards his room with Dilshad behind him.

"Rashid... Dilshad called out to her husband hesitantly. He turned back to look at her, a small smile playing on his lips.

"Aapko yeh nahi lagta ki hume Asad aur Ayaan ko baatana chahiye? she asked Rashid.

"Kis cheez ke bare mein baat kar rahe ho Dilshad? asked Rashid, as his wife adjusted his shirt.

"Hume Asad aur Ayaan ko unke sagaai ke baare mein baatana chahiye. she said in a hushed whisper, as Rashid looked at her with a grim expression on his face.

-*-

I know that this chapter was a bit boring, but it is necessary because this is where you know and understand the characters and the situation.

Let me know in the comments below if you liked it. Also drop in your opinions and feedback.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Res...
Unres...
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Loved Zoya and Humeira bond...
Hmmm, something is going on about the "Engagement"...
Eager to read the next update...
Continue soon...
Edited by AsadZoya1708 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
Wow interesting start
Excited for upcoming parts
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
loved it dear
waiting for more 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AsadZoya1708

Res...

Unres...
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Loved Zoya and Humeira bond...
Hmmm, something is going on about the "Engagement"...
Eager to read the next update...
Continue soon...


Thank you so much 🤗
Yep... The Engagement is the most important part😉
Will update ASAP

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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Thank you so much🤗

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