'Tere dar par sanam Chale aaye'. Part 2 pg5

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The bullet sound shook Asad. He was heavily sweating.
"Ammi are you okay? " He asked.
No reply to his answer emerged. He drooped the mobile and ran as fast as possible.

"Agar kisi ko kuch hogaya to main Ms Faroqui ko kabhi maaf nahi karunga. Hamesha unhe sab ke liye humdardi dikhani hoti. Aaj unhone foolishness ki had par kardi. "
Such thoughts crept in his mind.

The door was wide open. Loud cry of Najma was audible. Asad slowed down his steps. He stood at the door.

The world seemed to turn upside down for him.

Zoya was lying down in a pool of blood.
Najma rushed to Asad.

"Bhaijjan dekhiye na Zoya ankhe nahi khol rahi hai. Kuch kijiye Bhaijjan. "

Asad had turned deaf.

" bhaijaan " Najma jerked him.

"Asad maine ambulance ko call kardiya. Kuch hi der main ata hoga. "

Asad moved towards Zoya. He took her head and placed on his lap.

"Miss Faroqui uthiye. Zoya ankhe khol. Aap aise nahi kar sakti. Zoyaaa" he cried bitterly.

City Hospital. ...
Zoya was taken to the emergency ward. Asad, Najma and Dilshad were indulged in crying.

Doctor comes out.
"How is she? Wo teek Ho jayegi na? "
" Abhi kuch kaha nahi ja sakta. "
A tear rolled down his cheek.
"Unhe dawa se jyada dua ki zaroorat hai"
Dilshad sat down. Najma consoled her.

Asad kept his hand oh the wall.
"Agar puri duniya khatam hogaye aur sirf Aap aur main bache, tabhi main apse baat nahi karunga."

He recalled their moments.
"Aap najane kab yahan se roosat Hongi? "
He punched the wall.
"Aap musibat magnet hai. "



-Hi all.
Eggs and sandals allowed .
Do reply.

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ManazzaShahid12 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello dear nice and sad one hpdate hope she fine soon 😳
Thax for pm
Hmmm means all things are allowed but i have no egg no sandal then accept my flowers plz 😆 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome do update soon and give lono update plz
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Since long that I read something new on AsYa. Do pm me :) it's great! Want more to read. And yes update more and should be lengthy ;)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Eggs and sandals never
A new asya story yay.
we will shower u with roses for this
nice start
cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for Update,Dear.😊
So Nice to see you with New Story on ASYA(KABHI).😊
The Story line was so interesting.😊
Zoya was shoot on that day,it was so sad.😭
The way Asad asked Zoya to wake up on seeing her like this,it was so Touching.😭
Zoya was in serous condition now,it was so sad.😭
The way Asad remembering his Past memories with Zoya,it was so sad.😭
I Hope Zoya will be fine soon.😊
Please Continue soon.😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Just amazing...
want to read chapter 2...
i hope you don't forget to pm me next time...
loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice start
looking forward for the next part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start dear
Loved it
Very well written
Thanks for the pm
Waiting for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting start.
poor zoya got shot.
asad's reaction when seeing zoya in that state is perfectly described.

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