AsYa SS ||Chef: A Tangy N Twisty Saga|| Note pg.12

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

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Aww this was a nice part...

Though there was more of shaad and sara here but they are cute as well..

Yes I'm excited what will happen next..

And I guess it was Asya first meet already with the carnations..

Ye sab ideas dimaag mein are kaha se hai madam?

Edited by sweet_tehs - 7 years ago

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Thank you for lovely review 🤗

Hmmm ab jabse Armaan urf Asad urf Karan ( just realized ye to AAK ban gaye) ke liye fall hui hu I can't seem to fall for anyone else..

I intentionally or intentionally compare others with my AAK😆

But I will soon join with your kabir

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Awesome!!

Loved it!!

Cont. Soon😊

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Hoor

@HooriAsadMalik

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Thanks for the pm.

Lovely update😛

Loving Zoya's creative designs.

And the way you described Asad😳☺️

Can't wait for them to officially meet each other as flat mates😃

Super excited for the next update.

Update soonish soon.

Edited by parakshi - 7 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Nice update
but lots of confusion
So asad is moving in sand he doesn't know he has a roommate who is a girl and. Who seems to be totally opposite
And Zoya is looking out for a roommate in the next 4 days but he is coming like a. Storm
Both seem to have a troubled pass or painful experience
looking forward for their face to face meet
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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Nice update dear
Loved it
Shad & Sara fought but sort it out straight away.
Ahh... they left on them to meet & decide.
Waiting for Asya meeting eagerly
Thanks for pm

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Rubyaasyafan

@Rubyaasyafan

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#77

U r such a talented writer yarr i really wish one daay god will make u a very successful writer coz u deserve it

Unlike others u write from ur heart i can feel the love u put in ur stories

Ur version of asya is simply beautiful

U know u should put ur stories on wattapad .more ppl will get d chance to read ur story

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Awesome chapter deepu dii..

Oh God!!! What is going to happen when they meet officially as flat mates...

Loved sara-shad convo..i guess they will fell in love before Asya..

Waiting for their official meet...

Update soon dii..

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Superb update dear

Shaad n saara are soo sweet

Trying to help their friends n having a love connection too

Asad n zoya finally met in this update.. though for a short time but they saw each other

Waiting for them to live under same roof and handling with each other. It sure will be super fun to see their daily dramas and how they will become friends and develop a sweet bond

Thanks a lot for the pm and plzz continue with the next part soon

P.S. If possible please show what zoya actually made for her friend

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Hello Di...

How r u .?

I hope sab theek hai...baki I know aap kitni busy hoti hoo apne kaam mein...

Khair My Apologies for not commenting here pehle se...

But I am glad ki aaj maine yeh story padh li hai...

Di...aap itna acha likhti hoo aur yeh maine pehle bhi kisi ko bola hai shayad aapko hee...no one catches the taste and state of youth like you do in your stories...
Kudos to you for that...

I really liked this part...

Shaad aur sara ke scenes bhi bahut ache hai...i like them more.

Dekhte hai how will ASYA react to each other...

Continue soonish...

Take Care