Asya 2 shot Best Friends To Best Life Partners Part 3 uptd Pg 4 - Page 4

Awesome...!

I l❤️ve It.

:-)

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow
Hot update
26kisses
Asad couldnt wait for his bday presence
Aww they revealed to asif and je turmed nasty
But asad took care of him and protect his wife his best friend
Happy Birthday Asad
And what a happy birthday it was
Loved it

Thank you. ...Asad's birthday present satisfied him completely 😉

Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile

Hot😳

and

Amazing!😉

But I guess could have been more hot

It is hardly mature content😆

U were stressed for no more reason!😳

But It was nice!!😊

I dnt like mature contents that much anyways!😆

Maybe you haven't read that much of matured things so this was less Hot!!😭 You could have presented more amazingly, beautifully what I feel!🤔

But u r new...no worry...u will be skilled up soon..u have also!!😉

It was indeed nice part!!

Oh!! I forgot to mention that I liked Asif's bashing part also!!poor he!!😆

Update soon!!😊

Thank you buddy!!!!!!
I am happy that you pointed out things that were a little disappointing. ...I am surely gonna work on them...Thank you 😊

Awesome update dear

great updatw..
tnx fr pm :)

very nice update

Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01

Awesome update dear

Asad n zoya were actually counting kisses...

And i love the way these two are talking with each other

Finally Asad got his birthday gift. If possible show us the dress by which zoya seduced asad .

Yes it was written nicely and love the way they both became one.

I really wanna read next parr soon.

Thanks for the pm

Yes finally Asad got his birthday gift...and no one needs to guess how happy it made him 😉

Originally posted by: Natalya_bedi

Thank you buddy!!!!!!
I am happy that you pointed out things that were a little disappointing. ...I am surely gonna work on them...Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile

Thnx for not minding!!😊

I would say That's all review about😉

Criticizing is a part of it...but I dnt think I criticized🤔

It would help u to become a nice writer!!😳

I can suggest u something more if u want😉but in pm!!😳

Ha ha..pls be my guest;