Asya ff DIVING IN LOVE :) CH4=PG43 UPDATED ON 21/07/18 - Page 26

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra



Hahahaha!! I won't become MR. India! So chill!!😆
Hmm that one!! Well for now I am completing an OS which I will post probably this week and then after that I will try complete MZH and MDII on this weekend.
So hopefully by next week you will get the update of MDII!😳
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Waiting fr that one especially..

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav


Waiting fr that one especially..


Will try not to keep you waiting for long!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for pm for part 3. Sorry for late comment.
Lovely update.
Flashback is lovely. The bonding of father daughter is beautiful. How they keep on irritating razia is wonderful. But razia aunty is a lovlymother here n too influenced with tv serials. Hahaha. Her pairing with gaffur is amazing n full of love.
Present is spoiled by tanveer. She n her jammy repition so much irritating. I laughed when i saw asad reaction on hearing tanu voice even in his drunken state he want to run away. Asad n tanu both are surprised to witness the changes in zoya but were not they who brought these changes in her.
Waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thnk u admin
It's open finally
So happy
Anchal see
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

In office without reading replying

Ye wo dress bi hai Zoya ke that one is better ..
N where is precap ..


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Unres

though replying soo late but it is always a treat to read your comment, you know its always special for me
I m back
wowow! WELCOME😃

Though i was nt going to unres this after reading ur note😡
But since ur back mujhe to aana he tha..😃
Tu humare stories ke lie bewafa ho sakte hai but i can't even if i want to 😊
Now i m feeling so good to be here
awww Im so glad to see you here, that note😆I don't know what has got into me at that time I was feeling as if my writing quality was deteriorating and when I made up my mind (sad sigh*) the thread was closedglad it is open now(relieved*)

Chal now coming to the update
okay!!!😃
Finally party to start hue
finally ho he gayi ja tak mera writing speed hai even I'm shocked ki ho gayi😆
zoya dress is good , not my fav though still it's ok since it was color coordinated with asad
Asad outfit is a thumbs up👍🏼
I know its not your fav because you liked that purple one na but dear it was not backless that's why I choosed this one thanks to maina 😃 and yeah zoya ka dress hai so it has to be matched with asad😆
Sugar ke dukan ( billu )ke dress as always ..kuch bhi paa lete hai 🤢
no fashion sense at all🤢 and you think I will let her wear the best dress😛

Asad mesmerized seeing zoya haye..but back side shock him ..poor bacha
After all he would always be the old fashioned, over-protective jahapana😆
But it not fine asad apne fiance ko dekh zoya ko ni layaka
dekhne layak bhi toh hona chaiye na😆
Beta itana J hue ke billu ke saath dance krne ko ready ho gaya
taking wrong decisions actually defines our AAK
But humare zoya is 2 smart to know his intention
after all she all rounder Zoya Farooqui😃
Zoya went to DJ wale babau to chalo her gana
Or DJ wale babu ne kia song chalaya like seriously "Daage Thod Lau " haye mujhe asya real dance yaad aa gaya
that was unexpected for her that DJ babu will play that gaana😆her smartness backfired here but it had to for making her realize there are some moments which she cannot just pretend to forget it still has its effect
Thank God asad dndt dance with sugar ke dukan plus cheap gold digger
It always special song for them n even for me.. ( ab mujhe again jana hai what happen so bad in the past )
ever since that episode telcasted this song has became one of my favorite, past will be reveal soon
Asad :-i need to talk
Zoya :- Not interested

Can't they understand ke karo baaat tum interested ni ho but me hu i want to know
kya yaar they didnt understand that sweetu has to know but nahi they are very stubborn didnt talk much at all😆😆😆
Hayye that moment asad putting his jacket on her ( itnaa positive boyfriend )
correction ex boyfriend I guess😭
Tali asad kitana cute lagta hai yr..
N the tumare asad sirf tumare
actually na he is a cute talli or else Akdu Ahmed khan😆😆😆

Flashback

ZOya wantS to kill whoever witch na ,,thn y she is nt doing anything with sugar ke dukan
that was the zoya in past and now the zoya in present is completely different lets see what happened in past that she is like this now

Back to present

Pura upper part ka maza kharab kr dia
Y so much importance to that billi in this update..it seems ur dedicated this one to ur fav billi
Tere itna pyaar for billi is injurious for my health
I'm sooo dedicated in insulting that billi that i cant stop myself😆

Is zoya missing her parents, poor baby ( asad ne rullaya i'll see him )
yeah she is terribly missing someone oh my darr gaya hoga asad 😃

Flashback 2nd

Finally zoya family intro
yesss😃
razia is such a sweet mom ..kahi to ache bani
for a change😆
ohh .. zoya teddy her best frd...even i love teddies so much
even I Love them too but once slumber takes over then cant gurantee😆
hahah even i m like her mummy 2mins or soone do
same pinch😃
zoya gaffur pulling razia leg ..i love such family moments yr
I love writing such moments it is really relaxing to write such scenes😊

yE KIA Razia wants zoya to join swimming classes and even she agreed ..but now seeing the current situation it seems like madam bunk the classes ( tabhi she cant swim now )
yess according to current situation she don't know swimming lets c what she did in her classes in flashbacks😆😆😆😆
I think both (asya) met there only ..asad swim sikh gaya or zoya i guess again feed up ho gaye hoge like she stopped singing n here also she stopped swimming.. or maybe asad ko he dekhne aate hoge😆
you will know it as soon as possible😉
OH humeia is also here good
yes she is here too😊
Omg razia n i thought the same me bhi forensic word ko bas CID se conntect krte hu ,,CID fever u knw
my mom also do the same actually cid fever😆


Overall i loved it
It means Alot you know that😃🤗
but hate billu part jo kuch jayada he tha update me
i understand i hate her part too but kand hum usse se kara sakte hain na😆
now waiting for more of flashbacks n asya first meeting
you will be able to read it soon😉


chalo its good i m here before new year
there is few things i need u to improve or follow in next year
lets have a look on the to do list😃

1. Update more often ( feed up with ur late updates, n dnt want to hear ur busy busy bla bla)
no comments on that😳
2. Not much of billi in every part
I understand you cant tolerate her insult🤣🤣🤣🤣
3. More of asya asya n asya
okay okay n okay😉😉
4. Behan precap to de dia kar
koshish karungi 😭
5. Most important no more "NOTES" PLS

lol I will tc of that😃

Chalo now we millo on WLCWF thread
hope so


THANKS ALOT FOR SUCH A GENUINE AND OVERWHELMING RESPONSE SWEETU 😃
IT MEANS ALOT YOU KNOW IT
LOVE YOU SO MUCH
AND THANKS FOR BEING WITH ME I KNOW YOU'RE MORE HAPPY THAN ME THAT OUR THREAD IS REOPENED🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

THANKS ALOT
WAS EAGERLY WAITING FOR IT TO OPEN😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Thnk u admin

It's open finally
So happy
Anchal see


YOU'RE THE ONE WHO TOLD ME THIS
YIPPE FINALLY ITS OPENED
ALL BECAUSE OF YOU THANKS FOR ALWAYS TAKING SO MUCH EFFORTS AND ENCOURAGING ME🤗
I CAN SEE MY BOSS IS MORE HAPPIER THAN ME😃
LOVE YOU🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks alot dear🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Madam I m waiting fr update..Wed tha aaj Friday ho Gaya where is update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Madam I m waiting fr update..Wed tha aaj Friday ho Gaya where is update


coming soon😆😆😆

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