Asya ff DIVING IN LOVE :) CH4=PG43 UPDATED ON 21/07/18

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

beautiful update Anchal with amazing concept
Asad is a diver and zoya is a doctor
both were separated six years ago for some reason and now again come face to face
who was the person whom Zoya was talking so frankly and after talking kissed the receiver
is there is any child?
were they married?
many questions have to be answered
Tannu is Asad'finance but marrying for money
akram and tanveer did something wtong with them
update soon

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GorgeousSmile

@GorgeousSmile

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

First of all,

CONGRATS on NEW Story!!

I like all of your stories yaar!! Not like I DO LOVE THEM!!

That too so so much!!

Reading WLCWF...loving it too!!

You are tooo much good!!

Loved the NAME at first!!!😃

...Diving...Asad is a diver if am not wrong!!😆

Six yrs. ago...they have gone old now!😆😆

Concept is really amazing!!

SEA...Waah!! waah!! Sabashiii!!

What do you eat after all?? Every time something new!!😳

I guess you already know...still I need to say it...You are the best writer here!!

I can imagine your stories...my AsYa scenes too well!!

I LOVE THIS STORY!! ALL OF YOUR STORY!!

Coming to FF,

Loved Asad Zoya's expressions...as if they don't care...but they do care!!😆

Loved the flashbacks..& AsYa scenes...thanks for adding them!!😃

"You are the best thing happened to me!!" - How Romantic!!😳

Zoya's abbu is villain also along with Tanveer & Akram!!

Leave about Asad, I was much more shocked than him at Tanveer's arrival!!😡

I didn't expect her at all in the first chapter of this beautiful story!!😭

Yeh toh meri hosh ei uda diya!!🤢

Pain in heart was there, here comes pain in head too!!🤣Loved this a lot yaar!!😊

You are totally Amazing!!

They are getting married!! Like seriously??

Dumb Asad!!

How can he not understand not Zoya but Tanveer is the one to chase after his money!!😲

But it's gr8, he doesn't like Tanveer!!😆

And another room!! GR8!!😃

STRANGE!! What's there to get jealous...what's there to think something like that if she is talking smilingly on phone, that would be her bf??? I am saying generally!! People have this problem!!

I think Zoya was talking with Humi if she is in the story or with her friend!!

Zoya really didn't care at last!!😲 How come??

is there something I am forgetting?😕Feeling so but don't know!!😆

Yeah!! Remembered!! How can you even think that we won't like your story??😲

You are always at this misconception!!

If something like this happens again, it won't be good for you!!😡😡 Yaad rakh na!!😛

C'mon!!

Now update the precap soon!!

I want to know further of this story!!

And do update soon!!

But ATY first!!

I love that more!!😛

Edited by GorgeousSmile - 8 years ago

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Suganti Kularaju

@suganti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

interesting start.

asad and zoya was in relationship but broke up and hate each other now.

(at least pretend to).

wonder what happened that asad blamed zoya and her father.

asad and tanveer🤢..tanveer shocked to see zoya there.

i think tanveer and akram might be the reason of asya separation.

nice chapter..pls continue soon.

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

A Big Congo for a new story

I really liked part 1

Asad and zoya r meeting after 8 yrs and i wonder what happened which changed soo much in their life.

Omg tanu the real pain is also there.

Woyld love to read more parts.

If possible plz give a short character sketch.

Do continue soon n pm me.

~JAZ~

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Alicee

@AliceKaBhi

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

I reallyyy missing someone to write again asad zoya story, loved it you are a very nice writer

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Thanks for pm. Nice start. Sturggle between past n present n love n hate n pain in heart n pain in head. I really like ur compliment for tanvir PAIN IN HEAD as she was in show. Waiting for next.

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Nice start dear
Both were in front of each other after 6 yrs. curious to know why they broke up. Feel like it's something related to tanveer & akram. Both felt pain but defend their own thoughts.
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

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LuvurselF

@LuvurselF

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

WOW...
A NEW STORY... 😊 🥳 [:D/]

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anuv6

@anuv6

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

amazing...extra ordinary and refreshing one...LUVD it.
i liked the way u portrayed our zoya...mature one and not so heartbroken and like...u knw, even though she is in pain still not in front of asad which really shocked him.
it will going to be more intersting...
YAY, rocking story...
very much impatient to read the nxt part...update sooon