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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra


You have to follow me soon!!
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Is it a Threat also like always?!!šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra



Hahah Ok won't call you that!!
I also have one sir!!
Thanks!!😊

Thanks!! But you can call me also sometimes!! I don't have any prob!!
Ok!My student!! It's my command now that quickly tell me the other name!!
I am waiting impatiently!!😳
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Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile


Is it a Threat also like always?!!šŸ˜†
I'll come in a wind speed & Follow you!!šŸ˜›
You're most welcome!!😊


Yeah u can take it as a threat!
yeah waiting for you to become GOLDIE!!
One idea i have Do A lot of spamming on anyone's thread!! N then in some days you will be GOLDIE!!
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Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile

Thanks!! But you can call me also sometimes!! I don't have any prob!!
Ok!My student!! It's my command now that quickly tell me the other name!!
I am waiting impatiently!!😳



Ok!
I don't have any other name for you right now!šŸ˜•
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I think part 2 needed



I will post it in 2 days!!😊
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Something different and on these lines after a long time.
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Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Something different and on these lines after a long time.


thanks!😊
I am glad that you think soo!!
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Hello everyone!!
Hope you all are fine.
Thanks to all those who appreciated my work!!
As some of you asked for another part.
Here is part 2.
Hope you will like it.

AsYa OS:
"Trust You!"

Banner Credits: Immortal Love.


The moon gave up and has almost disappeared. The sun was rising spreading light everywhere. But the light didn't reached to one person, who was shattered beyond repairing. Even in her wildest dreams she could not imagine about Asad betraying her but he did. The scene of him lying bare torso with that Tanveer was enough to break her heart in million pieces. But her heart broke more when she saw in Asad eyes. His eyes showed innocence on which her heart believed but her mind was not ready to accept. All trust sayings slipped through her mind and only one thing remained there, BETRAY. This was suppose to be the best morning of her life but this turned out to be the worst. She imagined of confessing her love to Asad on her wedding night but wedding night was far away even the marriage didn't happened. She was broken, hurt and angry. Yes she was angry. Angry on being betrayed. Angry on loving such a man. Angry on trusting a man. The word trust brought the conversation of last night back.


Heart: Last night he said he is trusts me. Not Tanveer.

Mind: Maybe that was just a trick of his to stop you.

Heart: What do you mean by STOP YOU?

Mind: Stop you so that he can break you. After all what can be expected from a son whose father cheated his mother.

Heart: I think the opposite. He always feared to hurt me. So how can he hurt me?

Mind: Maybe he acted like that to break you for once and all.

Heart: I don't believe on it. His eyes can't say lie.

Mind: Eyes? Haha eyes can easily put the cover which the person's mind wants.

Heart: No. Eyes are mirror of the soul.

Mind: Who believes on such thing?

Heart: I do.

Mind: Key word YOU not him. Agree with me GO AND QUESTION him. Why he did this to you?


Finally the battle between her Mind and Heart ended declaring MIND the winner. She stood up and opened the door for the first time after returning. On opening the door she saw everyone outside. She moved towards Asad's room ignoring everyone. The sight in front of her broke her heart even more. The whole room was a mess. The windows were closed so no voice could reach outside. The couch, table, lamp, mirror everything was broken. She searched for the person she came to meet. Her eyes halted on spot where she saw some spots of blood. "No." Her heart cried. She followed the spots to see him. He was sitting on a chair his eyes closed with his injured hands bleeding. His condition was vulnerable. His hairs messed up, clothes..on observing she realized that he was just wearing a trouser with a black vest. She again analyzed the room and eyes widened as she saw that his feet were also bleeding. Unknowingly tears began to make their way down her cheeks.

Mind: He does not your deserve your tears. Stop crying you fool.

Heart: But his condition is vulnera..

Mind: Stop it already!! How can you be so so stupid? He must be angry that he got slapped by his mother. He is your culprit. Question him you fool!!

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There was another soul who was injured. Whose trust was broken, whose heart was broken. He knew that he can't commit such a big sin even in unconsciousness. Everything emotion and feeling in him died only one thing remained ANGER and BETRAY. His hurt took the mask of anger and betray was as a fuel to his anger. He never knew that she would have this tiny trust on him. The girl who said I TRUST YOU last night was now the one who didn't trusted him. He wanted to question her, shout at her that why she did this? Why she said that she trusts him when she completely did not. But he knew that this is not the correct time. He just have to wait for a single message and that will be the end of his silence. After that he will roar, he will hunt like a lion. She regretted loving him. As if that made his blood boil and his grip on the chair tightened. He heard the door opening and thought it must Ammi for accusing him again. He was hurt that his own Ammi did not trusted her up bringing. She called him RASHID AHMAD KHAN'S SON. Why?? Minutes passed but no voice came. He thought that Dilshad has left. "Why you did this to me?" He heard the voice he both wanted and not wanted to hear. He did not opened his eyes and replied "LEAVE!".


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Zoya finally mustered courage and asked "Why you did this to me?" Asad's eye balls moved but he did not opened his eyes and all she heard from him was "LEAVE!" He said. His voice was low and dangerous. Anger rose up inside Zoya and she blasted on him. "You are right I should leave. You should have told this to me earlier. I was a fool who came here to ask you why you cheated on me. Answer me Mr. Khan why?? What was my fault? Was it because I doubted your friend no not friend your lover. You proved that I was wrong. You proved that you are son of Ras..." She stopped as Asad pushed her to the nearest wall. "Stop it. Warning you just leave." Asad said while moving back. He was bearing all her talks but when she mentioned son he could not stop himself. He turned his back towards her and closed his eyes. "You should have given this warning to me before. Why? When you knew that you love someone else then why you agreed to marry me?? Why you played with my emotions? Why you agreed for this relationship when you don't even know how to maintain a relationship? Answer me!! Why the hell you used me?? Or maybe you are exposed before marriage only? Maybe you are just a womani.." Before she knew she was on the chair with Asad's hand on both of her arms. "SHUT UP!! Just shut up!! I AM NOT HIS SON. I AM NOT A PIECE OF SHIT. The one who don't knows how to keep words is questioning me?? Wow!! Brilliant!! What was that what you said last night? You said you trust me!! Where is that trust now Zoya?? You say you regret to love me! Love is based on trust. You don't love me. What happened it is hurting you?" He asked as he saw Zoya eyes tearing up.


Asad was holding Zoya her arms tightly. She has never seen Asad behave like this. She was shocked with his every sentence but it wasn't his hold that hurt her it was his sentences that hurt her. Asad laughed like a mechanic and suddenly came close to Zoya's face and shouted. "WHAT ABOUT MY HURT?? What about the pain that this bloody heart is going through?? I only loved one girl in my whole life. I only trusted that girl apart from my family. I LOVED YOU ZOYA!! I TRUSTED YOU!!" As soon these words came out through Asad's mouth Zoya stilled. She waited so long to hear these words from him but never imagined that he will confess in this situation. "This marriage was my wish my dream Zoya. But NO you think soo low of me that you thought that just to get out of this marriage I will use a...I feel sick thinking that. And Zoya if I was that weak man na I would have done that thing with you on that night when we were at that farm house. That night my eyes were open but my mind wasn't working but my heart was working Zoya. I know your touch your voice. Tell me then why I didn't committed such thing with you?? I SAID ANSWER ME!" He shouted at last seeing Zoya not responding. Zoya mind was now stuck as Asad got some points. She looked at him and tried to say something but Asad cuts her in between. "NOT A SINGLE WORD NOW. I got enough accusations. My Ammi is my life and today she doubted her upbringing. I never knew that the happiest day of my life will turn the worst day of my life. Don't worry I don't regret loving you. You know why? Because I loved you with all my heart and mind. And the day I will day regret loving you na that day this idiotic heart will stop beating because unfortunately you are the one who brought ASAD AHMAD KHAN down to knees. Even if I want na then also I can't stop loving you." Asad confessed. Tears making their way down his cheek. He exposed his all hurt to her again either in anger only but he did.


Zoya to say shocked was less she never knew Asad was effected this much. She kept on thinking about her hurt that she forgot that Asad isn't such a man. "I am Sor." Before she could complete Asad interrupted. "I don't want your sorry. You told me yourself what Tanveer warned you about. Then how can you believe her over me Zoya? Leave just leave. And thank you for making me experience this emotion. That emotion which is not ready to leave my heart now. I will Love you always. Stay happy forever. Maybe not with me but with someone else you will be happy and safe. Good Bye." Asad said with tears. He knew what he was doing. Asad's phone beeped and he quickly took it ignoring the motionless Zoya.


For Zoya everything was like a bullet train. "Anger, Love confession, Anger and now Fare well. Why didn't I thought about this before? I knew Tanveer will do anything to stop this wedding then why did I believed her? Was my love this weak? Asad doubted Tanveer because I raised questions on her. Then why I didn't doubted her? Why I doubted him?" Zoya eyes went towards Asad who was looking at the door with a pure..hating look. She turned around to see Tanveer standing there. Asad looked away while anger build up in Zoya again. "Jam.." "DARE YOU CALL ME WITH THAT NAME!!" Asad roared making Tanveer and Zoya shiver. Everyone hearing Asad's this loud roar came up running to his room. They did not interrupted before because they thought that both need time to talk. Tanveer seeing Asad's anger left. As soon she turned Asad's phone beeped and that made Asad take a sigh of relief. He held Zoya's hand and said "Just trust me this time then you can leav.." "Will just shut up? I am not going anywhere!! How can you even decide this thing on your own? I am not leaving you!! I am here with you. I know it was my mistake to not trust you but that doesn't mean that I will leave you. How can you think like that?" Zoya shouted. "The same way you can think of me as a womanizer." Asad said calmly while taking up his phone. Everyone over there was stunned hearing Asad's reply. "TIME TO HUNT!!" Asad said looking at Zoya and moved out of the room glancing at Najma. While everyone was standing still on their places but what all failed to notice was the smirk on Najma's face. "Time to hunt." She moved out taking everyone with her.


Zoya could not even move from her place she was received shock after shock. First Asad's warning then anger and now calmness. "He was all angry before his phone beepe..What was he doing with the phone? He never picked up a phone with such urgency. TIME TO HUNT?? What does that means? He is up to something for sure. I need to go outside." With that thought Zoya ran outside to see Asad calling Tanveer downstairs. "Tanveer I want you to leave this house." Asad said with out looking at Tanveer. Tanveer was shocked. She never expected that Asad will ask her to do so. "What happened to Asad? How can he behave such after my lie?" She thought. "But where will I go Jamm..." "DON'T CALL ME WITH THAT NAME. I don't care where you go and where not. Just leave." Asad shouted. He felt disgusted of Tanveer. "But what you did with m.." "I didn't committed any such thing!!" Asad said with confidence that made Tanveer doubt whether he knows the truth or not. "How can you refuse n.." Before Tanveer knew she was slapped. But she wasn't slapped by Asad it was NAJMA. "SHUT UP!! How dare you accuse my bhai jaan for such a sin? Tanveer bhai jaan and I don't want your unborn child to take birth in jail so suck it up and leave." Najma said shocking Tanveer and everyone. "Why will I lie Najma? Asad did.." This time she was stopped as she received a slap again but this time it was from Zoya. "Tanveer I will like to do this honor. I will them why you did it. And Yes he didn't committed any such thing. Because you wanted to marry Mr. Khan. Because you wanted to name your child as Mr. Khan's child. Because you wanted me to leave him." Asad and Najma looked at Zoya baffled. "You left your phone inside." Zoya said giving Asad his phone.


"How can you behave such Najma?" Tanveer said to Najma. "What you think only you know spying and how to lie? FYI I also know how to do it though I am not a pro. like you but I still know." Najma while moving around her. "Asad you believe me. It is nothing like this. This all is done by Zoya. She manipulated Najma. This is not the truth." Tanveer faked tears while trying to gain Asad's sympathy. "I know Zoya is lying. You can't do anything like that Tannu. I know you are innocent." While Zoya looked at Asad shocked Najma smirked. Tanveer smiled seeing her plan working but as if she took Asad lightly. "Then tell me tannu why you drugged me? And why you asked those goons to kidnap you?? Tell me." Asad asked innocently. Anger took on him suddenly and he shouted. "WHY YOU SAID THAT I CROSSED MY LIMIT?? WHY YOU MIXED THAT ACID IN ZOYA'S MEHENDI?? WHY YOU TRIED TO KILL ZOYA??" Tanveer now got it that Asad's knows everything so faking will not be good for her. "You knew that I love Zoya. You knew that I haven't confessed it yet. Every time I tried to tell her you put a stunt of yours. Tanveer how could you stoop so low?" Asad said.


"Yes I did all this. Yes I tried to kill Zoya. I did this so that I can name my child. I did this so that I can gain status in the society. " Tanveer spatted. She looked at Zoya with pure hatred but Asad stood in between. "What was her fault Tanveer? You wanted to marry me. But what was the point to kill her?" Asad asked her. " Her fault? All was her fault. If she would have returned to US I would have married you but no she is so much in love with you that she didn't wanted to leave. With how much difficulty I got that officer to deport her but no you got her back that you by getting engaged with her. And that was not enough that was mother, my sweet khala, she declared your marriage with her. How many chances I got to kill you Zoya but every time this Asad, my friend, the great Asad Ahmad Khan came in between. Every time he saved you. Then I came up with this plan to defame you by saying that you used me. I got succeeded even. Zoya was manipulated and your own mother Asad. Your own mother rejected you. You believed me soo easily?" She asked going near Dilshad who having tears. Tears of hurt for not trusting her son, for not trusting her up bringing. "But one thing I didn't understand how come you have such faith on yourself all of a sudden? How come you trust yourself this much that even your mother doubted you you were confident that you didn't committed such a sin?" Tanveer asked a stunned Asad.

Asad never knew that hearing all these claims from her friend will hurt him. He was also shocked that how come he don't accept it when he never trusted himself. "Love." Asad said looking at Zoya. Where as Zoya for the first time in all this while raised her eyes to look at Asad. She was ashamed that how come she doubt Asad. How can she regret loving such a man. "I love Zoya Tanveer. I recognize her touch, her voice, her scent and most importantly her heart. But you won't understand such things. So let me cut this straight. When I being under that influence bhaang did not crossed my limits with Zoya then how being unconscious I can cross my limits that too with you. You all thought that I committed such sin but there were three people who trusted me. Who knew that I can't do such thing. First person was Najma who knew Tanveer's reality from the beginning. Second person was him." Asad said pointing at the door of his room. There stood Ayaan with a smile. "Ayaan said that he knows that his Bhaijaan can never do anything. Third person was to whom I never expected to support me. It was her." Asad said directing towards Zeenat who also smiled in return. "She said that she believes on Zoya's choice and then they begin there work. Ayaan caught hold of those goons and they easily spoke everything. Najma got Tanveer's blood sample and Appi she made you drunk. You were not in your senses and you confessed it that what you said was a lie. I was just waiting for your the reports because Appi doubted of you being pregnant. So we have to make this sure that the child doesn't gets effected. N here is everything as soon I received the message as I said TIME TO HUNT." Asad ended looking at Zoya.


Tanveer could not believe that her plans got ruined. She took a step back and ran towards the door. As soon she opened she saw her worst dream coming true. Police officers standing on the door. "Time to go home Ms. Tanveer." Said the women police officer while hand cuffing her she looked at Asad accusingly. "Sorry I forgot to tell you that police was standing outside from a very long time to take you to your home." Asad said sarcastically. "Take care of her child. We don't want that poor child to suffer." Asad guided that officer. While Tanveer didn't protested she knew her game was over. As soon the police left Asad moved towards his room Dilshad tried to stop her by holding his arm. "Asad listen to me." But Asad shrugged her hand off and moved to towards it slamming its door shut. "It will take time for his wounds to heal." Najma said and left to her room. Ayaan also left from the door. "Appi listen to me." Zoya tried to talk with Zeenat but Zeenat shuts her off and said "I didn't knew that my Zoya's love will be this weak." And she left to her room. While Zoya stood rooted on the spot thinking, "My love indeed was weak Appi. But I promise I will win him back."


One and a half year later:

She stood gazing in front of her while two arms wrapped around her waist. She startled up and smiled after a second realizing to whom those hands belonged to. She leaned back on his chest and said "He is cute." "He is! After all he is your son. Where were you lost?" Came reply. "Was thinking how much hard it took me to pacify you Asad." She said chuckling. "So what could I do. I was hurt. My heart was injured Zoya." She turned back towards Asad and placed her hands around his neck and said, "The great AAK also owns a heart?" Zoya said playfully. Asad pulled Zoya closer and said, "Well a storm came in life and introduced this heart to me. Now that heart and me both are servant of that storm name Zoya." "That was really cheesy one." Zoya said chuckling. "Your pizza is also cheesy and still far I remember it was double cheese pizza in last 9 months." Asad said smirking. "Well one cheese was for me and the other one for your son. He liked pizza." Zoya said moving towards the cradle in front of her. There he was, there son who was sleeping peacefully. "But still I love that storm." Asad said bringing Zoya back towards himself. "But I love this heart not you." She said placing her hand on his heart. "Well that was a little mean Mrs. Khan." Asad complained. "You know Asad I learned something from that incident." Zoya said hugging Asad. "Zoya stop thinking about past. You always say this to me now what happened to you? Don't tell me you are doubting me again like a wife in daily soaps!" Zoya giggled and parted herself from him. "I learnt to.." "To?" Asad asked raising his eyebrow and coming close to Zoya. "to TRUST YOU!" As soon Zoya ended she was in Asad's arm being kissed by him. As soon Zoya finished Asad took her in a soul touching kiss. He knew it was always painful for Zoya to think about past days. But now they were so far to think about past. They parted as they heard some cries. "He is definitely enemy of our intimacy." Asad said looking at Zoya holding their son. While Zoya laughed and said, "Already jealous Mr. Khan?" "Till now no one is born to make me jealous." Asad said hugging both Zoya and their son. As soon the baby saw Asad he smiled making Asad and Zoya both smile. They were one now. They loved each other now. They TRUSTED each other now. THEY WERE COMPLETE NOW.



So how was it?
I hope you all liked it.
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Till the next time,
GOOD BYE.😊



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