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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -loving_life-


anyhow it will be daytime on NYC so you can read
see I'm so smart at times

Still i dnt believe u jab tak network ni atta tera🤣 network network network oh poor network

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Posted: 7 years ago


Glad to know that!!!!
THANKS ALOT!!!!!!

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav


nobody trusts me here 😭 ye forum ye fanfiction mere kaam ki nahi mere kaaam ki nahi

(ahem back to normal*) now I'm back to home so does my network so i can UPDATE!!!!YAHOO!!!

(now back to traumatic mode*) mere kaam ki nahi meri kaam ki nahi😭😭HUm ko malum hai dosti masoom hai sweetu se ho jati hai galtiyan, fir bhi i will update for u😛😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Natalya_bedi

I really liked the update...
My favourite moment was when Ayaan advised should Asad go with ...WIFE...well it's our advice as well...
"Shirt is dashing" seriously Zoya...
Now comes the time for stitching the butrons...Romance mode on 😉



Thank u thanku so much
I'm glad u liked it really
yeah our advice is the same but our emotional challenge hero will not take such things seriously
yes SHIRT is dashing😆
Romance mode on maybe or maybe not😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: chichi220

Super concept hate billo rani n akram


thank you!
glad you liked it dear
even i hate them both 😡

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: umeerapasha

What an amazing story,totally enjoyed reading it.Please update the next chapter next chapter as soon as possible...😊😉😉


Thank u so much dear
I'm glad u liked it
it means aaalot
will update it soon😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -AngreziKudi-

Just stumbled upon this story. Great concept. Can't wait to read more 😳


so glad u stumbled in this thread😃 and thank u for giving it a try
so happy you're liking it
thanks alott for a review
will update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -loving_life-


lol okay I'm not saying anything intelligence ki no kadar over her


Kadr tu hai Dear!!
But I don't have patience!!
I am honestly going to be hell busy after some hours!
Edited by Minahil_Hanjra - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Hello everyone!!! Firstly a happy New everyone!!!wish you have happiest 2018, with all your wishes and resolution getting true! Okay coming to resolution, my new year resolution is to complete my previous year new year resolution which was that I will complete all my ongoing stories this year for the sure!!! This year I'm determined to do it just need your guys support for that

Okay here is the another update of this story and I really hope you all like it do read it and let me know, like always I will be eagerly waiting for your reviews and so sorry for keeping you all wait for so long, I know its terrible so pardon me for that!!!(holding ears*)

This update is res to dillu,JAZ, Nik, anopama, greyanastasia, risingsun626, Asad, Natalya, ashlesha, tehs, Ajuzangel, suganti, asifiqsh, -jass-, friendsall, ksen, MysticRiver, coolhi1988, .ROSY.,enthusiastic, princessdream,asya555, shanuuu, Linsie, chichi220, umeerapasha, angrezikudi and to all the special readers each and very opinion maters a lot to me

A very very very very special res to my sweetu(finally I updated your story which is very dear to you), MANIA(well I know you might be busy read it when you will be free it do read it) , Somu(I really really hope you like this part)

Chapter 18

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Humeira saw Asad and Zoya leaving

Humeira(biting her nails): Humeira brace yourself now no one can save you from Zoya Siddiqui

Humeira(turning towards the terrace): Najma

With that, she rushed towards the entrance but then stopped in her tracks thinking

Humeira: I can't invade their privacy by entering like this, wait! I will text Imraan

She removed her mobile and started texting Imran when Ayaan came there holding some boxes but stopped seeing Humeira standing there so he went towards her

Ayaan: hey

Humeira(looking in mobile completely ignoring him as her concentration was fully on Imran and Najma): hmmm

Ayaan(very chirpy tone): well issi adda pe ek sher arz kiya hai

Ajib hai nakhre tere, Ajib hai tera style

Ajib hai nakhre tere, Ajib hai tera style.

Baat karne ki tameez nahin aur haath mein hai mobile!

Sukriya Sukriya Sukriya

(this Shayari credit goes to google where I made some modification ;) )

Humeira: why are you troubling me can't you see I'm busy

Ayaan: right I can see that so when is your next presidential campaign

Humeira just rolled his eyes as she was least interested in his jokes or him

Ayaan thinking, "what an attitude but I'm loving it"

That's when his gaze felled on terrace door

Rashid & Dilshad's room:

Asad and Zoya went inside the room, Asad opened the drawer and removed the kit as said by Dilshad and turned towards Zoya

Asad: you don't have to do this and anyway I have an important call to attend

Zoya thinking, "important call that means he will again run back to the house terrace "

Zoya: sir I told you right since I have broken it, I will mend it back, please

Asad thinking, "no more puppy eyes please"

Asad just hand over the box, she opened the kit and took the pin and thread and kept the box on the side of the bed and then was trying to put the thread in the pinhole but she was not able to do so sometimes thread get slipped aside, sometimes it almost reaches but then she misses the target at the last moment

Zoya thinking, Allah Miya! What's wrong with you two stop embarrassing me

Zoya glanced at Asad from the corner of the eyes and he was just staring at her with an impossible expression seeing her talking to the thread and pin

Zoya thinking, "Gudiya! You're so dead"

Asad(not able to take it anymore): you know to sew right?

Zoya: ye...yes sir! Obviously, l know just that(after pausing for a second) just put this thread inside this pinhole thereafter I swear I will manage

Asad: me? What are you saying!

Zoya: I don't know I mea...mean sir you're an architect S... So...you know

Asad: so I should know this stuff like seriously

Zoya: yes...no

Asad: by that logic how much you bribed for your degree

Zoya: Ya Allah! What are you saying?

Asad: forget it! (looking at the thread and pin sarcastically) you please continue

With that he moved towards the door, She rushed past him and stood before him

Zoya: sir abhi ho jayega!

Asad massaged his forehead clueless about what happening, Asad sighed and sat on the bed, Zoya sighed in relief and again started with her work

Terrace:

Ayaan: why is the terrace open it's usually kept closed saying that he took a step towards it, Humeira's eyes widened seeing it she immediately blocked his path and that action of hers was returned by his confused look before he could say something Najma came out from the terrace and Humeira was relieved seeing her

Najma(innocently): what are you both doing here?

Ayaan: first you tell me what were you doing inside?

Najma: Vo bhaijaan...(immediately showing her mobile) some of my friends had called to wish me as they couldn't make it here

Ayaan: oh...ohk

Since it was Ayaan, not Asad the interrogation didn't go long

Ayaan(turning towards Humeira): wait! Why where you blocking me to go inside?

Najma looked at Humeira nervously

Humeira: I was not blocking you... it's your house go wherever you want

Ayaan just gave a suspicious look, Humeira immediately looked at his jacket

Humeira: I just stopped you for a minute to ask where did you buy this jacket? It's cool!!! I'm planning to buy one

Ayaan: Male jacket?

Humeira: it's male? I thought it's unisex

Ayaan: whaa...(sighing) forget it

Ayaan: let's go

The trio moved towards the main room, Humeira asked Najma raising her eyebrow with a naughty smirk seeing that Najma just blushed in return which assured her that everything went according to the plan she just jumped in excitement but suddenly composed seeing Ayaan staring at her weirdly

Ayaan(with a small laugh): UFO detected I guess?

Humeira glared at him but immediately plastered a smile

Humeira: no just got to experience how does chimpanzee sounds

Now it was Ayaan's turn to fume bit in all this one person was totally clueless yes! You all guessed it right tamatar

Najma: UFO? chimpanzee!! What are you both talking about

Ayaan just winked at Humeira with a mischievous smile saying "nothing" and went from there

Humeira just stamped her foot fuming

Najma(confused): what's going on between you both?

Humeira: nothing

With that, she left from there irritatedly

Najma: there is something delicious cooking over here hmmm will have to find out! (remembering something) OMG I'm so careless I have to call Imraan and tell roots are clear over here, I hope he might have cleared the terrace by now.

With that, she dialed his number

Rashis&Dilshad's room:

after a couple of seconds finally, she did it

Zoya: it's done!

Asad: finally

Zoya: common sir I will stitch it in a blink of seconds

Asad stood up and Zoya placed the button on the missing spot and started stitching it, Asad was about to say something when his mobile ranged

Asad(in phone): yes Mr.William there is lot of disturbance here I will call you back later

With that he disconnected the call, he looked back at her and he forgot what was he supposed to say as he was mesmerized for a moment, Zoya was busy sewing the button and Asad was just admiring her this feels so perfect her closeness was affecting him so much same was with Zoya she didn't expect that her heart would ditch her like this, she just hoped Asad is not hearing her over accelerated heartbeat

Zoya was stitching his shirt but then, as usual, her hair flix was disturbing her since both her hand was busy she was not able to tuck it behind her ear but then another hand did that for her! Yes! That's our hero, Asad was seeing her struggling with her hair, he really finds it cute whenever her hair traces her face but then he hates the temptation it awakens inside him to put it aside but then unknown to him his hand automatically raised up, his fingers tracing her forehead to her hair blocking her hair's interruption and tucking it behind her ear, this action of him helped her eyes but messed up her heart they shared an intense eyelock for a second (Mitwa moment) which was broked by Asad who shrieked a little

Zoya also came out of the trance and realized that she had stabbed that thing on his skin instead of shirt

Zoya: I'm so sorry! (rubbing his chest against his shirt)

Zoya(apologetically): did it hurt too much

Her concern again brought an unknown smile on his face

Asad: not at all!

Zoya looked at him hearing his answer so Asad immediately covered up

Asad: vo...i mean it's okay just be little more careful

Zoya immediately nodded and continued her work carefully

Here Dilshad was walking towards her room

Dilshad thinking, "Ya Allah! One day this three brats of mine will make me go crazy! Now they aren't kids anymore but who will say it seeing their actions Najma it's her birthday party but god knows where is she and Ayaan don't know why he's taking so long to get that boxes and my Asad lagta hai architect chod ke darzi baneki soach raha hai

With that she was above to enter her room but then her eyes widened seeing the scene in front, Asad her son Asad with a girl who is none other than Zoya, Dilshad once again glanced at them after coming out of an initial shock just seeing them both together she knew her search has finally come to an end especially looking at Asad's expression

Zoya tied the knot and cut the string with the scissors

Zoya(with a smile): it's done

Asad: finally!

Zoya kept back the things inside the box and Asad kept that box inside the drawer both turned around to move out from the room but was taken aback seeing Dilshad standing there with folded hands and naughty smirk both were taken aback seeing her, Zoya was feeling awkward but then she thought Dilshad will understand as she was only sewing his shirt but Asad was horrified as he knows his mother very well

Asad thinking, "I hope she didn't call the Maulvi Saab by now"

Asad was above to say something but at the same time even Zoya also thought to make things clear

Zoya/Asad: Phuphi/Ammi!

Asad(whispered): let me handle

Before Zoya could react

Asad(looking at Dilshad): Ammi...vo hum actually... Vo shirt ammi and its button... Actually

Zoya just looking at him with the unbelievable expression

Zoya thinking, "what a way of handling, even if there was nothing in her mind hearing his words she will misunderstand everything"

Dilshad: I just came to check if you got the kit

Asad: yes ammi!

Dilshad: you know Zoya when Rashid used to go to office, he was always in hurry and most of the time he used to break his button in rush so I started keeping this sewing kit in my room chalo I'm happy after us it was useful for others too

Asad coughed to stop his mother from embarrassing him more and Zoya was speechless as what to say, she just wanted to disappear from there

Zoya: phupi I will head downstairs

Dilshad(smiling): wait, I will come with you

With that both the ladies headed downstairs Asad sighed in relief as soon as both of them were out of sight, he took a step to leave from there but immediately took back that step as he felt he stamped in something he looked down and saw that Zoya's earing has fallen down, he picked it up and smiled seeing it

Asad: I guess she is very bad at handling her earrings

He remembered the one in his drawer

Asad: I will immediately give this back to her or else my drawer will turn out to be an earing showroom someday

With that he headed towards the party, here Dilshad again got busy with guests and Zoya marched towards Humeira seeing her standing in the corner

Zoya: Allah Miya! you almost killed me, let me get back home then I swear you're so dead

Not getting any response she looked at Humeira and saw that she was lost in some deep thoughts, Zoya lightly patted on her shoulders

Zoya: are you even listening to me!!!

Humeira: baji what a coincidence right? When I met Khan brothers that day on road I had not even imagined for a second that destiny will make us meet them again and again.

Zoya(nodding sipping her juice): yeah that's true, I mean AAK turning out to be my boss and Najma your best friend everything is really...I don't know what to term that

Humeira: coming to the boss thing everything is sorted out right in the office, all that project mess everything.

Asad came there to hand over her earing but then stopped in his track hearing sister's talk though it's not manners to hear someone's talk like this but then he couldn't resist when Humeira was talking about them

Zoya: yeah everything is sorted

Humeira: well I found AAK really a gentleman, how is he in office

Asad just smiled hearing that and was curiously waiting for her to answer that

Zoya: He is Cruel! Selfish businessman, fully money minded, A big-time headache who can't see anything beyond profit and loss...

Asad was taken aback hearing her reply before Asad could react Rashid called out for him, Asad just sighed and went towards Rashid with a normal expression

Humeira: baji...

Zoya: let me complete I used to feel like that but he is not that bad, after joining DC I realized somewhere there is a golden heart behind that workaholic mind

Here Rashid was introducing him to some of his friend cum ex-business delegates, they had some formal conversation but Asad's whole concentration was on Zoya's words it really hurted him, he politely excused himself and marched towards his room

For a second Zoya was lost remembering their sweet moments and came out of her thoughts as Humeira patted her on her hand

Humeira(mischievously): where were you lost?

Zoya(hiding her embarrassment): no... nowhere... Weee should leave it's late

Humeira just nodded giggling, they bid farewell to everyone and left from there before leaving, she glanced back at the house searching for Asad but then he was nowhere to be seen so sadly she left from there

On the other side, a restaurant is shown where two people are seated at the table

Akram: So what you wanted to talk so urgently Miss...?

Tanveer: Tanveer! Tanveer Mirza

Akram: What you wanted to talk about Zoya?

Tanveer: Who is Zoya to you? How are you related to her?

Akram: she's family!

Tanveer: by what relation?

Akram: why are you so curious? Who are you?

Tanveer: just answer me, it's for our own good

Akram: our?

Tanveer: yes I don't waste time in social servicing so whatever would be, it would be beneficial for both of us so tell me who's is Zoya to you?

Akram(with a cunning smile): my future bride

Tanveer chuckled hearing that

Akram: what's so funny?

Tanveer: looking at her expression that day, when you had visited office it seems even if you were the last men left on earth she would not consider marrying you

Akram fumed hearing her words

Akram: who needs her consideration! I want to marry her so she will have to marry me

Tanveer(curiously): why will she marry you if she doesn't like you?

Akram just smirked at that response

Akram(gulping his alcohol): you don't have to worry about that

Tanveer(irritated): look, Akram, one thing is clear by now you want Zoya and similarly I want Asad in my life and...

Before she could continue Akram laughed at her

Akram(laughing): understood! I understood everything! So you are obsessed with that businessman the way I'm with Zoya and now you think Zoya will come between your target

Tanveer: what's there to laugh about it

Akram: Of course its a joke of the century! Zoya! Seriously!!! Koi aur nahi mila aapko!!!(laughing more) Okay on a serious note Zoya is a puppet

Tanveer just looked at him with a confused expression

Akram: you hear me she is just the puppet whose strings are in my hand. If I will say sit she will sit, If I will say move she will move and I have not given her permission to love! So don't know about others but Zoya will definitely not come in between your target

With that, he stood from his place and went from there chuckling on his own

Tanveer just banged the table in frustration

Tanveer thinking, "such a foolish man! One thing is clear seeing his confidence he has something strong against Zoya!

Tanveer gulped the alcohol in one go and placed the glass on the table with a thud

Tanveer: I want to know what he is so confident about and I WILL FIND IT OUT (billu rani!)

Late night Asad's room:

Asad was sitting on the recliner anger was evident in his eyes, Zoya's words were ringing in his ears

Zoya: He is Cruel!, Selfish businessman, fully money minded, A big-time headache who can't see anything beyond profit and loss...

Asad fumed thinking, " how can she have such an opinion about me "

Asad thinking, "what I have done as such that she feels I'm a cruel man! Wait what wrong did she say I'm cruel when it comes to my business! But I never brought up that side in front of her then how can she say like that"

Asad gritted thinking, "Zoya Siddiqui you don't deserve Asad's behavior, tomorrow you will meet the AAK then you are free to make such opinion"

With that, he threw that earing in the corner of the room angrily

Zoya's house:

Zoya was thinking about Asad their stitching moment and she had no idea what the hell is going on with her, she has never experienced this strange feeling that why is she so comfortable when he is around because she hates being around mans because for her all of them are just jerks but nowadays why does her heart not agreeing with her mind. She just shrugged off her thoughts and lied down closing her eyes but then unknown to her a smile formed on her lips

that's it!!! so how was it? do like and leave a comment :) will be waiting eagerly

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Again no precap😡

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finally finally finally

Aisa lag raha hai jasie itane months bad bhuke ko khana mila hai ho ( jayada melodramatic toh ni ho gaya )
anyways sachi i m so happy to see my story after so long ( happy tears ) 😭
thought to unres aaram se but after reading such n amazing update reha ni gaya mujhse
Office me beth kr read kia that 2-2 times
I so so so so loved the update except -billi , akaram, najama,humeria ayaan's part ( it's nt like u wrote bad or such but mujhe asya ke alwa kuch na bhave .. but i knw they r also important but i can't help it)
Ye update super se upar wala tha 👏

No comments for ayaan,humeira n najama wala prt ( khud samjh jana )🥱

Asli maza toh rashid n dillu ammi ke room me hai 😉
here come my hero heroine
n zoya is going to selwo his shirt ( mujhe ye bhi romantic laga )
This puppy eyes will seriously kill asad one day
hahaha,talking to needle n thread n asad expression ( i cn imagine )
Jaha zoya waha logic ka no use .. asad ko aata hoga just cz he is architect matalb kuch bhi

Skip comment for terrace part.


Coming back to dillu ammi's room

Finally ladki able to put thread in pin ..biggest job done successfully😆

Haye zoya silwo asad shirt n asad dekho uske pyaar re ,,haye haye haye bas kar this much romance ek shirt switch krne me ( aage toh i cn only imagine)

here come the best sasu maa ..are she gt her bahu na

Dilliu ammi is so desperate ke agar kahi billi button switch kr rahe hote ..toh kahi use he na bahu banane lag jate ( uff hw cn i even think like this chee )

poor asad ka reaction is same as mine... kahi aaj he shadi na krwa de .. i so wish asia hota

asad n his wo actually uff ye ladka.. i guess he deliberately nt explaining to her ,,as he himself wants the nikaah ( naughty boy )

Uff this ladki again earning gira dia..theek se lock lagte na ...

one thing is for sure dillu ammi ka asad darzi bane na bane but fr sure kabadiwala ban jayega ..agar asie he earning utha rahega..🤣

OK,so asad wants to return the earning good but want about the other one car wala ..wo bhi de deta..poor she 2 earning kho de


Billi n Akram
Inke bare me kia bolu me ..yr saram mood karab ho jata hia mere
N this billo rani ( background sound ) my ears start bleeding

Yr thora hint de about past what happened with zoya that he control her like this

Ek akram kam tha zoya ke life me ye billi bhi aa gaye .. dnt knw kia or sayapda krge ye log

Is asad dhakan or want itna judgmental person, if he knws that he nvr shows her his akkdu part ( except the 10yrs file wala part ) fir bhi ..

Half conversation is always dangerous

But hum humare zoya se kuch bhi expect kr sakte hai,so might asad also thought the same

WOW so party finally kharam .now office romance or fight whatever it is i m sure i m going to enjoy it more than anything

Anyways i m super happy with this judgmental asad ise bahane zoya will face AAK n we gt lost of mitwa moments 😳

Tujhe precap se kia dusmani hai ..add one more thing in ur resolution list i.e adding precap after each update

Now next update in 2019 ? right


I CANT CONTROL MY EXCITEMENT FOR NEXT PART .. I M SO HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY WITH THIS UPDATE YR.. WHAT U WANTfr UPDATING EARLIER? BOL I WILL GIVE U ..CZ I WANT IT RIGHT NOW NOW NOW NOW


Uff hw cn i forgot to comment on the shayari..may be cz I dnt want to comment on others part

Kia murder Kia hai tune shayari ka 🤣 kasam se.. ise ghatiya shayari aaj tak ni sune...aage se dnt try to attempt god ke lie n.a. sahi toh pls mere lia🤣 me bardash ni kr paunge ..

Edited by shweta_yadav - 7 years ago

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