CHACHI vs CUTEY 11.12
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CHAPTER 17
bannercredits: mrinalini
Ayaan whispered to Najma
Ayaan(whispering): what was the need of inviting this diabetes over here
Najma: she was calling me every now and then and also she is Bhaijaan's friend it would have been rude of I haven't invited her
Ayaan just sighed
Tanveer(forcing a smile): btw what are you doing here Zoya
Ayaan: she's our chief guest
Tanveer: what?
Ayaan: interrogation later! Come everyone let's click selfie!
Dilshad: kids these days all they are bothered about is selfies let's cut the cake first guest is waiting
Tanveer: khala is right! We can click selfies later
Asad: besides there are photographers here
Najma(sadly): ok
Zoya(seeing her upset): after cake cutting, you guys can click selfies and since photographer is here you will get lot of candid moments
Najma( face brightened hearing): that's true Di!!!
Asad liked the way she diverted Najma but then he ignored it as he didn't want anybody to be fishy about him
Najma glancing the surrounding thinking, " where is Imran?
Najma: look Tanya is here I will meet her and come
Like that she made an excuse and went from there
Rashid came talking to someone in call
Rashid: ok sure I will there! (Looking at Dilshad's annoyed face) ok I will call you later
Zoya's eyes widened seeing her role model finally, it was her dream to meet him all these years she grew up seeing his models and Rashid Ahmed Khan became her inspiration
Dilshad introduced Humeira and Zoya to him as rest of the people he already know
Rashid: so you're the famous Humeira! Najma talks a lot about you nice to meet you beta
Humeira: it was great meeting you uncle you know my baji is a great fan of yours
Rashid(looking at Zoya): really my fan?
Asad(under his breath): Jabra fan
Zoya: I have grown up seeing your work, you have been a role model for me, they way you came up with DC and took architecture to next level hats off to you sir for that! I follow all your blogs it's really a great inspiration for passionate architects like me
Rashid: that really means a lot coming from this generation and I'm more than happy that my thoughts are appreciated really great to meet you beta
Zoya: sir it was my dream to meet you! Today destiny is in my favor
Rashid just patted her head lovingly
Rashid: you have made me your inspiration that's a big thing
Dilshad: Zoya don't call him sir as I said we have met here not in DC so no formalities
Zoya: no phuphi how can I? I will call him sir only
Rashid: yes no formalities! Since you follow all my work so you're like my friend cute little friend so call me...hmmm...
Ayaan(in a whisper): Hitler friend
Rashid: dost?
Dilshad: that's great not all formal
Asad(weirdly): dost!!!(thinking, have they all lost it)
Dilshad(smiling): Well I was not knowing my workaholic husband is this popular
Rashid: you're lucky
Dilshad: yeah I know
Rashid: beta tomorrow I'm posting a new blog and I want you to personally review it
Zoya(smiling widely): sure sir(looking at Rashid raised eyebrow) I mean dost! I'm so excited
Zoya really felt connected with this family
Ayaan whispering to Asad: he had ever asked you to review any of his blogs
Asad: shut up Ayaan! He is just doing formalities
Ayaan: really! Doesn't seem to
Asad was equally shocked being a reserved girl still how well she bonded with his family, Ayaan is always 24*7 does her praising, then tamatar then ammi and then most unexpected abbu but when it comes to me all she does is stammering she is something really different
Asad thinking, "great achievement dude now you started complaining also"
It was just like Ayaan put his thought into words
Ayaan: bhai she is like my guide of course after you, for tamatar she is Zoya DI, ammi is smiling as if she got her long lost daughter back and our Hitler unka toh direct dost so there's the only option left for you
Asad(confused): what option?
Ayaan: wife
Asad: what!
Ayaan: all other relations are reserved so...
Asad: you need a doctor dude
Asad thinking, "but it sounds so fascinating! Damm, even I need an appointment along with Ayaan"
To avoid further future planning he immediately interrupted
Asad: cake! All are waiting let's cut the cake
Rashid: yeah let's go
All just nodded and went towards the middle of the living room Ayaan took the mike and announced
Ayaan: Hello to all the cool people over here! Firstly thank you so much for joining our tamatar's birthday bash
Najma: Ammi! Why is he addressing me as tamatar over here!!!
Dilshad: beta why do you even expect, you know your brothers
Najma just sighed sadly
Aisha: finally my hero is here you made me wait so long baby today I'm not gonna leave you
Najma glancing around the place thinking, "where did he leave at the last moment I so hate you Imran"
Humeira saw her little upset and she guessed the reason
Humeira thinking, " Ya Allah! Why is he taking so much time instead of making her day more special he is upsetting her I shouldn't have helped him with this baseless plan"
Asad came and stood next to Najma scooping his arm around her shoulder
Asad: can't believe this kiddo is one more year older
Najma(complaining tone): bhaijaan! I'm not a kiddo anymore!
Asad: ok cry baby! Agreed!
Soon the cake trolley came all of them gathered there she again for the last time glanced around the place
Rashid: princess is someone yet to come?
Najma(immediately answered): No abbu! That's what I was checking but all are there
Humeira just looked around and stopped seeing Zoya suspiciously looking at her Zoya raised her eyebrows asking her what's the matter as it's not that tuff job for her to read Humeira's face Humeira nodded in no indicating nothing but seeing Zoya's unconvinced face she mouthed later, Zoya nodded and looked back at others
Aisha came to Ayaan and hugged him
Aisha: Ayaan baby! After soo long I'm meeting you! How are you? I missed you so much
Ayaan thinking, "fass gaya
Ayaan: Hey Aisha! I'm good ! how are you?
Aisha: I'm cool (in a whisper) just lonely sometimes
Ayaan: Ok!!! Hope you find someone soon Arr...excuse me Aisha just remembered something bh...bhai
With that, he just rushed towards Asad saving his life
Ayaan: Najma cut the cake! (eying Aisha's flirtiest look) varna problem ho jayegi
Najma was above to blow the candle she saw Imran standing in one corner smiling at her, Najma smiled a little but immediately composed herself not trying to make it obvious, she blew the candle and cut the cake, birthday song was playing in background, she fed the cake to Rashid, Dilshad and was moving to Asad when Ayaan smashed the piece of cake on her cheeks
Ayaan: Happy birthday Tamatar!!!
Najma's face was in big O After the hours of makeup this was the last thing she would have expected
Najma: AYAAN BHAIJAAN!!!
Ayaan laughed seeing her face, Najma smacked the cake piece in his face but Ayaan bend down in correct time resulting all the cake in Asad's face
All of them giggled seeing it
Najma subtle her laugh as she knows how much her bhaijaan is into cleanliness, Asad came near her and she was all ready for a lecture on cleanliness but then what happened next surprised her as Asad smacked the cake on her other cheeks with a mischievous smile
Najma(shocked): bhaijaan you too!
Ayaan came to them laughing out loud
Ayaan(laughing): bhai...tamatar you both indeed look siblings today
Asad and Najma looked at each other giving a naughty smile
Asad: but we three are siblings so...
Najma took another piece of cake
Ayaan: tamatar no ...(Ayaan took a step back trying to run away but Asad hodded him tightly from back)
Ayaan(trying to get out of Asad's hold): bhaijaan...tamatar listen...I was just...(before he could complete Najma smacked his whole face with chocolate cake)
Asad: serves you right!
Ayaan just sighed sadly and then three of them ended up laughing
Dilshad clicked some pics to capture the beautiful moment Najma and Ayaan was giving various poses Asad was not that interested but since it's his baby sisters birthday he didn't want to make her sad so followed her instructions
Zoya was looking at the trio admiringly their gesture itself show how they love and care for each other, She silently prayed to almighty to also keep their bond like this. Humeira came to her and hugged her shoulders
Humeira: they look good together right?
Zoya(agreed with her ): they are adorable!
Humeira: not more than us they are adorable but!!! Our bond is THE BEST!
Zoya just smiled pulling her cheeks: off course my nautanki!
Tanveer was glancing around the house well she has been here before but this house always leaves her in awe thinking,any girl would dream to be a part of this luxury so not my fault if I'm playing foul just the little more wait soon even I will be the part of this house and family
Tanveer closed her eyes and imagined herself seated on the couch with one girl staff apply nail paint in her leg and Wajid serving her juice, smile faded as soon she opened her eyes as she saw Zoya standing near the couch and much to her horror Wajid went to her and asked for the juice but then she politely refused so he went to attend other guests
Tanveer thinking, "wow! Even this house is mocking at me, whatever not even destiny can change the fact that I'm the eldest daughter-in-law of this mansion
After some time all were enjoying party Asad went to change as his clothes were spoiled due to cake since we all know his love for cleanliness, Humeira was dancing on the dance floor with her friends and Zoya was with Dilshad and Rashid. Dilshad really liked Zoya very much though she was quiet she adored her innocence a lot
Dilshad: really Zoya! Life is full of coincidence we were expecting to meet Humeira's sister and here you turned out to be a part of Dilshad construction
Zoya just smiled and was above to say something but was interrupted by Tanveer who came to them
Tanveer: true aunty! Zoya's journey in DC is not less than a roller coaster ride
Rashid: what do you mean?
Tanveer: I mean she and Company both had tough time managing with each other Delhi project fiasco ...
Rashid: wait Delhi project that means you're the one who completed Asad's design?
Zoya: yes actually
Dilshad thinking, "so she was the employee who was making him so restless that day
Rashid: I liked that layout I must say you have a great future in architecture
Zoya(with a smile): thank you si...dost it means a lot coming from you
Tanveer was irritated hearing her praises thinking, "here I was trying to create a bad impression and here they are going on with her praises
Ayaan also came towards them and heard the last part of the conversation
Ayaan: ammi you know that day Zoya was the one who saved bhai from that rock bed accident
This was really a news for Dilshad and Rashid, Dilshad hugged her lovingly after hearing that
Dilshad(cupping her face): I don't know how should I thank you for that
Zoya: you don't have to phupi and I'm glad that I was able to make it on time
Dilshad just smiled fondly at that
Meanwhile, Zoya's mobile ranged and she excused herself and went to attend the call
Here Humeira was dragging Najma towards the terrace
Najma: where are you taking me humi?
Humeira: to the terrace, there is something stored for you
Najma: what? I want to dance yaar
Humeira: how much you want to dance yaar! Have little mercy on that dance floor
Najma(narrowing her eyes): was that a joke?
Humeira: finally we reached! Your house is too big! common go inside
Najma: why are you sending me to terrace?
Humeira: you will get to know soon!
Humeira texted Imraan and sighed
Humeira: how the real work starts! just calm down Humi it's not that difficult you have to just stop anyone from going inside... yeh Imran bhi na kaha kaha fasa deta hai muje
Najma went inside and saw the rose petal way leading to the table she walked towards the table where the card was placed she looked around to find someone but she found no one, she opened the card where it was printed I love you this much and down it was hand written I really do
she recognized the handwriting and huge smile formed on her face, she heard some footstep and looked up to see Imraan standing there with a huge smile she ran to him throwing herself into his arms, Imraan also hugged her back
Imraan(still in the hug): I love you Najma!
Najma smiled brightly hearing it indeed it was her best birthday
Najma: I love you too Imraan
Outside the terrace:
Someone patted her shoulder she turned around to find Zoya standing there with a folded hand
Zoya: why are you standing here
Humeira: the view of this mansion from here is cool
Zoya: done?
Humeira: ok baji Imraan is going to propose Najma today that's why I'm standing here so no one disturbs them
Zoya: what!!! Where are they?
Humeira: in the terrace
Zoya: oh miss watchman! do you even know what are you doing!!! You have arranged a date for AAK's sister that too in his house! You brainless creature why you do such things!
Humeira was above to say something when she saw Asad coming there talking to someone in his mobile he has changed into a normal shirt by now
Humeira: baji AAK is coming!
Zoya: what! Bye I'm leaving
Humeira (stopping her): how can you just leave me alone like this?
Zoya: oh really! Did I asked you to play cupid
Humeira: baji! I did it for my best friend! Please help me out
Zoya: how am I suppose to help?
Humeira: Baji he is your boss you know him better please do something and make sure he doesn't go inside
Zoya: gudiya! How can I? You don't know how stubborn he is! He doesn't listen to anyone
Humeira: baji I don't know anything if he will go to terrace then there would be a huge problem. Do something please!
Zoya: god! Kaha fasa rahi ho tum mujhe!
Zoya saw Asad going towards the terrace she couldn't control herself and rushed towards him
Zoya: ASAD...SIR!!!
Asad immediately turned around hearing her shout
Asad: what happened!!!
Zoya: vo...vo..where are you...you going?
Asad: you shouted like this to ask this! Can't you see I'm going to terrace
Zoya: I can see that but sir leaving such an awesome party wh...why are you going there?
Asad thinking, "what happened to her? All of the sudden showing so much interest in my activity"
Asad(suspiciously): Are you ok?
Zoya: yeah absolutely... Actually, I was just saying... Saying...
Asad: Saying?
Zoya: ha...was saying (thinking for a second) it's cold outside!... (rubbing her palms) too cold sir...so you may catch flu especially in terrace
Humeira was peeping behind the pillar and facepalmed herself hearing her excuse
Asad was confused hearing her talk! She was really acting weird he thought before he could say anything he received a Skype call from one of his foreign delegates, he can't receive it there since there was still some music playing in background
Asad: excuse me!
With that he was again above to move towards the terrace, she helplessly looked towards Humeira, Humeira just nodded in no indicating her to stop him, since she had to act fast without thinking twice she immediately held him by his collar pulling him towards her and resulting the first two buttons of his shirt on her hand
Asad was stunned by her reaction
Asad(annoyed): what has got into you!
Zoya(nervously): I'm really very very sorry
Zoya thinking, "Humeira Siddiqui! You will have to pay for this!"
Suddenly something struck in Zoya's mind
Zoya: no worries sir! I will stitch it in two minutes
Asad: leave it first you tell me...
Zoya knew he will definitely start an interrogation so she interrupted him
Zoya): how can I? Such a good shirt will be useless and you're looking dashing in it
She immediately regretted saying that, Asad just looked at her hearing that...(Mitwa in background)
Zoya(changing her words): I mean shirt is really... I mean...it's color... Is...
Asad: Is dashing?
Zoya: No...I mean Yes! SHIRT IS DASHING! Only shirt
Asad(controlling his smile): UNDERSTOOD!
Zoya: I will stitch it in no time
Asad: its ok servants will do that!
Zoya was ok with it and was above to give the button but she remembered something and took back her hand leaving Asad again in confusion
Asad: Today you're acting weird more than usual
Zoya: I...I'm not weird! It's my habit
Asad: being weird?
Zoya: NO! Fixing the things I mess up
Asad: great! In that case, I'm sure you're always busy
Zoya thinking, "Allah Miya! What's wrong with this man! Zoya there is no other way you have to take him from here
Zoya: I broke your shirt button so it's my responsibility to fix it back. Let me do that it will just take some time. You don't need to even remove the shirt
Zoya(making puppy eyes): please!
One look at her face his voice didn't corporate to say a no. He just nodded
Zoya sighed in relief but immediately composed herself
Zoya: let's go from here
Asad: where?
Zoya: To stitch we need a kit
Asad: where will we find that?
Zoya: I don't know! It's your house sir
Asad: but how am I supposed to know where will the stitching kit be!!
Asad just sighed and dialed Dilshad's number
Dilshad just saw Asad's number she excused the guest and attended the call
Phone conversation:
Dilshad: Asad you're at home right?
Asad: Yes!vo actually Ammi, where is the sewing kit
Dilshad: which kit?
Dilshad thought she didn't hear it properly
Asad: sewing kit!
Dilshad: sewing kit? Why you need that!
Asad(looking at his shirt): vo actually...I will tell you later but where it is kept?
Dilshad: it's in my room wait I will come
Asad: no ammi it will not look good if you will leave the party just tell me I will manage
Dilshad: ok it's in the second drawer beside the bedside table
Asad: ok ammi!
With that, he disconnected
Asad: it's in ammi's room come
Zoya just nodded and followed him while walking she looked back towards the pillar where Humeira was standing, Humeira showed her a thumps up but Zoya glared at her and motioned her towards the terrace to clear up things since she was looking back and walking she bumped into Asad, Asad just looked at her confused
Zoya(stammering): vo...I was...just
Asad: are you sure you're ok?
Zoya: totally I'm fine
With that, she moved forward from there but stopped in a while as she doesn't know the direction
Asad(under his breath): crazy!
With that, he walked towards her
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