#2 AsYaFF ~ The 1st of April [Ch14-36 UndrCons] *Updt 10/1/21FFSection - Page 47

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Posted: 8 years ago
I M P O R T A N T N O T E




It has been unfortunate that I was unable to contact back Seher who was proofreading this story.

Part 2 isnt proofread as a result. Though I know she will be back in a few days time , but then I would like you all to let me know if you would like to read the updates proofread or not. If the latter, then I might update as soon as I finish typing the story out. 😳


I have my works proofread only because I Feel in some places emotions have flooded the entire place making it look over dramatic or under-dramatic... sometimes too much or too less of OTT drama than required.



So please let know, what you would like. Proof-read updates or Not Proof-Read ones. And if you are interested in reading the Not Proof-read ones, you'll have to let know if they are over the OTT section or under it. I will hunt each one of you and ask you personally if the chapter is so or not until Seher comes back and saves you from that horrendous job. 😆



So ball is in your court, have your pick let me. Also let me know how this chapter has turned up. 😳


Asad and Sanjay share a beautiful relationship and one chapter felt less to describe it. But let know how it has turned up coz I am literally CLUELESS. 😛

And what do you think about the LAST LINE? 😉





^ my face atm. 😆 its 2am here.




Thats it for now. If you have any more queries please go ahead ask, old new anything just ask! 😊






AND if you want a PM please LEAVE A COMMENT 😃







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Yes that was it 😆



See you guys super soon 😳

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
A good update showing the closeness of Sanjay and Asad and Asad and Azam.
Very well written.
Thank you.
Please update the next part soon.
WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
For Agency 😎

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^ To Dubai with No Love. 😉



CEO wants Captain to do this at her Office. 😛


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DMG's Chalo So Jate Hai as Audience looks on. 🤣


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THIS IS FOR TEH when she is in a mood to scold me 🤣


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I seriously need to sleep. 🥱

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 8 years ago
WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
For the last update


The following 35 member(s) liked the above post:

What the 😡


I'll seriously not update if this continues. 😡😭



Anyway


For the Res Res game I nominate the following readers

WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago


The LIKES should improve or else... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

For Agency 😎

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^ To Dubai with No Love. 😉



CEO wants Captain to do this at her Office. 😛


Related image

DMG's Chalo So Jate Hai as Audience looks on. 🤣


Image result for panda gif

THIS IS FOR TEH when she is in a mood to scold me 🤣


Image result for panda gif


I seriously need to sleep. 🥱



🤣


U know how to get the perfect gifs😆

Scolding one and dmg one were awesome.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
A full of emotional roller coaster ride
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update as usual
I love the relationship of asad n sanjay
Asad considers.sanjay more than his father n sanjay just loves asad
They understand each other soo well. N then we have azu who is supercute for me. He makes everyone smile with his acts.
Ok the last line was a surprise for sanjay n asad will tell him everything soon.
Missed zoya n asad interaction in the chapters.
Regarding the proof reads i would say that the last chapter was alsoo syperb without prolf read so its upto u how u like...
Thanks for the pm.
Continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome
Update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loves how you portrayed Asad - Sanjay bonding
And here Zoya is sleeping..
One or the other has to sleep everytime
Zoya witnessed a murder and now she is in the trouble for tge same
About proof reading, you could update as you are comfortable..

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