#2 AsYaFF ~ The 1st of April [Ch14-36 UndrCons] *Updt 10/1/21FFSection

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Yash

@_yash_

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#251

Totally interesting and intense.

Game on type' .I am unable to like the posts but I really do like the update so count mine.

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#252

Hellooo Ankiee 😊..

Hope You are doing good...and I wish whatever is disturbing U gets sorted out soon..😳

Coming to the update...

First of all Thank You for the RES...😊

There is always something very homely when U see the woman U like doing simple house chores thing like folding clothes...

Coming to the other thing the big revelation in this update about Asad being a singer who kind of on Zoya's requests use to create verses i mean this is new info for us but yes it shows how comfortable both AsYa were with eachother and kind of Asad adapted his lifestyle with Zoya's friends just because...

I liked the song select...iss situation ke liyee bahut hee aachi choice thi yeh...👏

But at the end of this flashback...ek aur suprise intezarr kar raha tha...iske peeche ki kahani jaani hai humein

But yes after this thing the story suddenly took a very quick turn towards some action...which was expected because of your notes and it is coming out well too...

The chase sequence was written smoothly and yes i am up for all action updates though i am not much a fan of them but yes imagining them is always a fun...

Bakii..

Continue soonish...

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#253

Really excited to read further!!

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CaptainV

@CaptainV

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#254

My cup of black coffee and I are waiting for update

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CaptainV

@CaptainV

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#255

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CaptainV

@CaptainV

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#256

Woh actually...
Poor Asya :D

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CaptainV

@CaptainV

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#257

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CaptainV

@CaptainV

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#258

One to cross this page

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#259

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#260

A/N if anyone really cares 😆

The fiction in no way encourages stunts that are not to be tried or pulled at home.

Back to update

The entire update is from Asad's pov. What do you think has happened to him? Is it just that he is worried about the consequences and is terribly exhausted from the journey or something else? Let know. 😉

The upcoming updates are even more graphic than this update. Some might find them nauseous and unsettling. Apologies from beforehand because that is what the story demands. Trust me I myself felt pukish all the time. 🤢

But that is what the story demands. This is something I have never tried SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let me know how you found it. 😳

A significant note on this update, I was terribly sick when I wrote this. Viral fever. yet my adrenaline sailed like Asad's did 😆 🤣

Next update hopefully sooner. 😛

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