|| REASONS || An Asya (KaBhi) TS last part on pg 21 - Page 24

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Hey Sumi 🤗
Thank you so much for a lovely comment 😊
m fine...how r u?? busy?
and packup from here?? means?? why??

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Tweetieee 🤗

Mai aagayi finally 😎

I love you for hitting a concept like that.

I'll not start frm the beginning

Me end ka baati hu I was in tears idk why ...it had nothing to do with getting emotional at the confession I loved it for sure...but the reason that I was in tears was again idk 😆 but I was n I guess that is because of my love for you as a reader here...I mean itna beautifully u have portrayed ...it felt so real and jese me khud hi zoya hu ya Mai khud hi asad hu ya m all those characters be it again nzma ayaan dilshaad ya rashid ...haha rashid to I love in this ts a lot 😆

morning me Bhi he was taunting on his son being khadoos...u wrote of him as a father who is so easy with his family...is lovely to a wife...then baccho me ghul milke he also spends tym Nd with zoya he is so easy ...and in of too he joked about sometimes he feels he ain't but asad is boss 🤣 itna khadoos is his son.

Ayaan n nzma are funny elements apart from zoya herself.

Asya convos were just specially the one they had when zoya returned frm foreign 😆 I can totally imagine that whole scene so well . It was a great enjoyable read 😃

I actually loved zoya here...like a li'll moment in of she cried n how she was worried when he didn't pick up her calls

Getting to zoya's confession it was bang on mission accomplished for asad.u showed nothing major and yet sbr ka baandh toota zoya ka n she let her heart out
And Assad's confession was ☺️ hayeee the much needed romantic one 😳

Asad knowing that all those days zoya was preparing food n still h pretended he didn't know n he appreciated her skills hayeee

And at the tym of dadi too he had been appreciative...and the u also showed zoya realizing something different 😃 whether at his touch at her cheeks or in their fights ...and as for asad he played well 👏 this wasn't a game but he was in love too ❤️ Nd isme SB jayas 😉

Last scene was lovely ❤️

And now for the concept I hv to say !

I actually want to know ye concept Kya sochkr likha h . Tweetie this ts stands out from all the stories on this forum.so tell me the reason behind writing reasons 😉

At the beginning it was so fresh I immediately liked reading it...it was grabbing my interest that fast and I was surprised at the easiness with which us readers are engulfed while reading this.

Just a big hug for this one. 🤗

This has a total feel of a family too

I literally m loving it from the very beginning to the end.

Love you sooo much ❤️ you are an amazing n my favrt writer muaahhh 🤗

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

It has an unique aura abt it tweetieee

I guess mere pas laptop hota na to Mai poori update hi quote krdeti n then wud hv told u at every scene k Kya feel coming 😆 Nd I read it again in the afternoon n this tym.i was smiling so big at the end 😃

It keeps me stick to it and re read it 😳

And after being so simple it still is different and interesting. Really grabbing ❤️

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

And I'll always pray Tera mood humesha accha se Bhi upar Wala boht accha Rahe so that you come with more nice plots 😉 (I know ur already full of ideas fr us !! Let them out plshh 😳 )