*New* AsYa TS ~Ek Duje Ke Vaaste~ Last Part Page 85 COMPLETED - Page 64

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel

Love it

thank you dear

Originally posted by: anopama

Beautiful

I could have imagine asad reaction on seeing his wife face

Love the way they convey their feelings

Loved it

thank you very much anopama

I'm glad you loved it 😃

Originally posted by: anuv6

beautiful ending...
made me smile , u know like so pleasant wala...Cute ending
funny part is ayaan's teasing...
so beautifully written...LUVD IT.

thanks a lot dear

I'm glad you liked it 😃

Originally posted by: Amina...

Amazing Ending Ashii ...!!!
Sooo Beautiful
Loved it Sooo Much ❤️❤️❤️

Can we have an Epilogue for this Ashii? 😳😛😳

thank you so mcuh amina

I'm glad you loved it 😃

EPILOGUE 😲 NOOO PLZZZ I CAN'T

pehle updates pending hain ek or kaam zimme nahi le sakti 😆

Originally posted by: ridhi95

beautifully written 👏 👏 👏

waiting for the next part 😳

thanks a lot dear 😃

P.S it's completed, no more parts 😆

Originally posted by: raspi

gud n tnxxx fr pm

thank you dear 😃

Originally posted by: asya555

Love it

thank you 😛

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Loved it
Mr khan reaction after nikkah was brilliant
Liked the way Ayaan teased them
It was beautifully written story
Thanks for pm

thank you so much asif

I'm glad you liked it 😃

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Nicely written part Ashii..

I liked that scene when Zoya stopped Asad from going by telling him " maine jaane ke liye thodi kaha tha " yaa aisa kuch...I mean aise Pyaar mein Command waale scenes meko aache lagte hai when they are initiated by Girls... 😆

You got my logic

Baki lets see what more is their for us from U...but yes this option is out now...you can't write much from here...i guess

Continue soonish with some new and old updates Ashii..

And yes their is nooo One putting gun at your head to update...you can take all your time to do it so zyada pareshan na hona...

Take care

yes yes I got your logic 😆

wese tumhari jagah koi ladki hoti toh woh kehti ke aise scene koi ladka initiate kare toh ache lagte hain

you got my logic hai na 🤣

jokes apart... i truly believe girls ko bhi initiate karna chahiye, abhi lazmi nahi hamesha boys hi first move len... see iss story mai zoya was not in love still mene us se kehlwa dia "i can't wait to spend the rest of my life with you" bhalay zoya ko pyaar nahi tha par uski mangani k baad usko pehla khayal usse Asad ka hi aaya tha and his weird proposal

basically kch toh zoya bhi feel karti thi that's why mene zoya ko woh dilaoge dia instead of asad

and I'm glad you noticed it 😃

abhi toh mera focus WHT and TSB hai

baad ki baad mai sochenge but yes I'll start something new

P.S If I want I can start from here only... ek writer ko challenge mat karna 😉

anyways thank you so much mayur 😛

hope you had a great journey while reading this simply wow TS of mine 😳

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

OH MY GOD!!! This was so amazing

I know I definitely am the latest reader of this TS

But, I guess its better late than never

Finally am catching up on your pms and the amazing updates of your stories

I am in love with the concept of this story

Asya meeting in Sydney and asad falling in love with zoya at first sight and proposing her

And then they meeting again after 3 years and asad getting ready to marry the unknown girl only to realize that it is his zoya

Loved how beautifully you have described their feelings for each other especially asad's

This work was definitely a treat to read

And the main attraction was how you ended with THE BEGINNING instead of THE END

Just gives many positive feels for their future married life

Was just very flawless

Thanks for such an awesome work and for all your pms😊

yes you are late but lateness ka faida bhi hua

poora TS ek saath read karne ko mil gaya

no wait at all 😆

you made me smile yaar... big one smile... 😃

I'm sooo happy you liked the whole concept

Asads feelings were my priority and i hope i did justice

Zoya was not literally in love but i guess her role was good enough to do justice with the story

thank you so much dear 🤗